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sapphhire

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Posted: 13 years ago

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hi guys this is my first VIRMAN 😳so you all are fre to criticise.

CONFUSION

PART 1

this is how it starts manvi is know has been staying in vandhera mansion for 5 months and virat and her had fallen in love but they never told each other . on the other side bua and dadaji wants to fix virat's enggagement with their old family friends.but they keep this a secret from virat as they know he will say no. and do not tell manvi because she has a big mouth. and will tell him every thing to fix the relation the vadheras will go out of town and make some excuse and virat will think this is a good oportunity to propose manvi.he thinks for along time but at last decides so he clls her the way he usually calls.he goes on his kness tajes a rose and proposes her she is shocked but says i love you to. hearing this he goes to kiss her soon they are together in a bed covered by a blanket. and it was morning suddenly they both got up and dressed they were lucky enough tht nobody had come till know.

part two

i'll write the rest if yo like this

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sonika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Really nice
And do continue n plz add me in your pm list:)

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shaimah

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Posted: 13 years ago

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its really nice!please do pm me as soon as you update!

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Damini

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Posted: 13 years ago

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it was awesome!! plz pm me...

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Anila

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Great Part, Please continue soon! :)

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sapphhire

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Posted: 13 years ago

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THANKS FOR ALL YOUR COMMENTS😊

part 2

it hd ben 3 moths fr this incident and only 2 monthsleft for maanvi to leave they were still scared tell everybody they decided to to tell but they then cam eto know only jeevika , veien and chaachu dadaji was at ameeting bua and vanshika and chachi was at the mandir. but manvi and virat still went down they wre shy jevika seeing their expreesion asked them what hapend they said ilove virat and i love manvi together in such a rush that made chachu and viren turned and jevika shocked.

they wre preety scared right know and looked quite embaresed then the three of them together waht how when why.

manvi: what how when why we love each othr

virat :excatly

jeevika: lekn manu

manvi: i know di ya bahat fast hai meni stupid lag rahi ho.jiju i i really love virat

virat: bahi l love manvi to pls gussa na hona

three of them begin to laugh. but suddenly they got stricked and realized that dadaji fixed virat's relation and told this to virman they wre shocked and manvi began to cry.

jeevika: mannu ro mat sambhal hum kuch sochaa ga.

viren: ya sali sahiba

suddenly manvi thinks she is about to vomit she runs eveybody run s behind her and see her continuously vommiting. virat goes behind her and says what happend to my bandirya. i do not know

jeevika: mannu theri halat past 2mhena se begar rehi hai ab doctor ko balati hoon.

manvi: nahi di pls no

jeevika chup

kuch der bad bell baji sahid doc hai pls ender ayaa manvi uppr hai.

manvi: doctor pls mera blood na lejya.

doc: uss ki zrorat nahi sirf ek normal check up

manvi: shukur hai

veien pecha sa: doctor sab theek hai.

doctor: haa doctor kush khabri ha ya maa bna wali hai. she is pregnant.

virat:kya manvi, prenant.

doctor: kyon app abhi becha ka liya tiyar nahi. lekn i'm sory ro say ka ab abortion nahi kya jai sakhta.

jeevika: assa kyon

doctor: because she is 3 months pregnant .

viren:doc i'll reah you to the door.

then they come back and look at virat and manvi they do not know what to say.

jeevika:abb kya hoga.

manvi:di, i'm sorry, because of me swamni bua and dadaji will scold you.janti hoon ka mujhe or virat ko asaa nahi karna chaia tha

virat: haan babhi, i'm really soory janta hoon ka app gussa han lekin mein manvi aur baby dona sa baht pyar karta hoon pls kuch kijya ,bhai, chachu pls.

veien:kuch to karna hi peragaga.

chachu:lekin hamara pass sirf ek mehna hai ek mehna mein manvi ki halat dekh kar meta chal jayega that she is pregnant aur virat ki saggai teek manvi will be 5 months pregnant.

manvi starts crying

virat: kya hoa meri bandirya ko

manvi: how mean tum mujhe menana ki jaga mujhe bandirya kha rha ho.

chachu:chalo yahan sa kese ko is ka bara mein pata nahi chalna chaiya.

verien: excatly

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