Virika after marriage❤️-Part11-Pg22 UPDATED - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: MariFuze

Wow brilliantly written Can't wait for next part!


thank you Mari x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its gud...n liked it very much...pls cntnu it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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plz continue
its very romantic n nice story
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice ff... can u go n for more.. im wtng eagrly to read ,,,
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you so much kavyakomali, 2cute4u_22, romanticgurl070 and preethi12345



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 5-

Viren watches as Jeevika sits with her head resting on manvis bedside as if she was watching manvi sleep all night. He walks towards Jeevika, seeing her like this worried him. He strokes her hair and sits down next to her. 'Jeevika' he whispers in concern. Jeevika opens her tearsticken tired eyes and gains focus as she sees viren next to her with reassurance. She hugs him suddenly no questions asked as if his warmth was the only thing she needed at this moment. He tightens his grip and kisses her hair- 'sab teekh ho jaayega, main hoon na tumhaare saath, manvi ko kuch nahin hoga' - Jeevika rests her head on his shoulder absorbing his words. 'agar manu ko kuch ho jaayega to mein mar jaaongi' - viren pulls her head facing him and puts his hand on her lips ' shhh Aisa mat kaho, hum saath saath marenge remember? - Jeevika laughs through her tears - promise? She Says smiling - Viren smiles too and cups her face in his hands, 'promise' . -manvi awakens and looks at virika lovingly- 'didi'? She says weakly- jeevika quickly holds manvis hand. 'manu!'. - jeevika kisses manvis head- ' kaise ho 'tum?- manvi makes an annoyed face. 'tum yahaan kyun ho di? Mein teekh hoon' jiju ko preshaan kyun kar rahe ho?, patao na jiju isko ghar jao! - Viren laughs slightly at manvi as she points at him to take Jeevika--
Jeevika gives manvi a questioning look- 'tum teekh nahin ho Manu, Dabbu ne bataaya mujhe ke tum'.. Manvi interrupts and shouts ' is dabba ka mein toh nahin choroongi!' viren comes the other side and smirk at her outburst but puts s reassuring hand on her shoulder- 'manvi jeevika teekh kehri, tum teekh ho jao and try to rest ok?' manvi sulks- but relents- 'ok ok mein sorahi hoon Lekin jiju tum di ko ghar le jao aur isko icecream kilao taakho voh hasse..mein usse udaas nahin dekh sakti' - jeevika tries to protest with her eyes but viren promises Manvi he will take Jeevika home and bring icecream for her too soon..

Jeevika sees Beeji, Chachi and the family and says her hi's and byes.. She tells them to look after Manvi as she goes but she will be back in a few days. Beeji tells Jeevika that there is nothing to worry about and Manvi will be ok.

As Viren and Jeevika leave in the car.. Jeevika stays quiet and viren looks at her worried again.. Tum teekh toh ho na Jeevika? -- Jeevika wakes up from her thought .. 'Huh?' Oh.. mein.. mein teekh hoon..'- Viren's not convinced... he looks down and sighs.. 'Agar tum chahte ho toh mein tumko Beeji ke saath kuch din chorta hoon'.. - Jeevika realises that Viren is feeling her anxiety.. She puts her hand on his hand...'Nahin virenji aisi baat nahin.. biji kehti ke manvi teekh hai.. bas mein tori preshaan thi... lekin... She looks at Viren's eyes... 'Tum ho na?' She smiles...
Viren gets happy and tightens his grip on her hand... 'Arre tumhaari manu toh teekh kehrahi thi!' he says lightly... Jeevika looks confused... 'Kya? Kya keh rahi thi Manu?' -- Viren grins at Jeevika... 'Tumko ICECREAM ke zaroorat hai!' ... Jeevika laughs... 'Icecream? Bilkul sahi... Chalo kahte hain!' They both laugh...

Viren: Ok, par tumko mere liye bhi kuch karne parega..
Jeevika nods her head... 'Hmmm'?
Viren: Tum mere saath kal romantic dinner karenge.. bas tum aur mein..
Jeevika blushes...- ... and nods... 'Ok..'... Viren smiles and they continue the Journey.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ahhh perfect.. so cute and sweet!!! <3 I wanna see something like this. Please continue..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Plz pm me wen u continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you everyone!! Part 6 coming soon and whoever wants to be PMed will be PMed for sure. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sarahvirika

Thank you everyone!! Part 6 coming soon and whoever wants to be PMed will be PMed for sure. :)



I like how you are writing an OS/SS on Viren and Jeevika rather than Virat and Manvi. 😃

90 % of the OS' are on Virmaan. Not complaining 😆 but we need more Virika OS'

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