VirMan OS&SS : Note - pg.70 - Page 49

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nikhi.

Aw, it's so sad to see how Manvi's suffering, and it's equally sad to see the cracks emerging in their friendship/relationship. But it's nice to see that they're now on the way to realising that they might have feelings for each other...or at least Virat is!

Thank you for this part and for the PM! 😊

Originally posted by: snehamaanvirman

I loved every bit of it

amaging
thnk for pm

Originally posted by: rockinggirl5

It was very nice, I loved it.

thanx a lot...🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -sanaa-

nyc one ashuma...thnx for d pm..i really love the style of ur writing..awsm...keep going...

thanx dear for reading it even though u dont watch d show...🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: NivRenDeewani



Am i the type of girl to give up 😲, u knw me better then this rite??? I will never give up, he is mine. And as for comment, hmm i was just being nice :P

nautanki !!! 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sanaakram

nice. plz pm me when u updated

thanx...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arri-spy06

Hey!! Yaar plzzz update h aapke hainkaun??? Its been ages and i wanna knw wt happens next!!! Plz do it soon and PM me!! :)

Originally posted by: virmanrox8542

pleaseee post the next part

you write so well i am waiting for it

thanx for being patient...i'll try to continue soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: BrunoMars

I love your stories, read them all

today.
PM me if you write more..

Originally posted by: get_jasneet

verryyy cuteee👍🏼

Originally posted by: -bloom-

Wow.!!! Love the SS HAHK Just read all the parts now it's amazing.!! loved it 😃 continue soon and plzz pm me when updated 😃

thanx alot...🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: TanyalovMusic

Love ur stories...😳

Sorry 4 sounding impatient..I kno u've a lot of work to do Ash bt still a selfish demand frm m side..Plzzz update HAHK sooonnn...😛
Nd yaa I specially love ur title Hum Aapke Hain Kaun? Lovd d movie nd it aptly soots our dear VirMan 😍
Kindly PM m if u update...
For all ur efforts frm m side...a Virtual Hug 🤗

thanx a lot...i'll try to continue soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

NOTE :

I apologize for not updating for a long time. But I've my reasons.
1) I send 100+ PM and I get only 51 likes and 25 comments !!
Its really discouraging to any writer. I know you might be busy and all. But so am I. Still I'm here, taking hours to write a part. All you've to do is comment on what you liked/disliked in that part or atleast press the like button. When the response is like this, I wonder if its worth posting my work on IF or even writing it.
2) The way VirMan lovestory's beginning was dragged and Maya's entry.
By the time VirMan lovestory finally started, the magic was gone for me and Maya just killed all my interest. I agree now the story might be on track but the old spark is not there anymore. I stopped watching the show itself.
3) Everybody has personal tensions, I know. But when the above two reasons coexist with it, you cannot just write up something.
I'll continue HAHK, as promised to Shovi, my friend and inspiration. She is the reason I started writing on VirMan, so I'll keep my promise to her. I can't promise when I'll update, but I'll try to do soon.
Till then, Take Care.😊
Edited by ashred12 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wooohoo what am i reading?? u will update??yeyy tnx...ill wait...take as long as u want...and for ur three reasons i understand...esp the first one..nd lol me also lost interest with maya track...nd even though initial spark is gone atleast their story is moving so TG.anyways im here to annoy/inspire u so lool u cant get away..ohh one more thing,well it doesnt need mentioning cause u knw but ur poem was the reason i got into virman so credit is urs..
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Posted: 13 years ago

You are an amzing writer - after such beautriful story you are surely not that cruel to stop!! please please - do continue

I have very personal experience with cancer with son who had brain tumour - he is better now but we are dealing horrific side effects with him having major learning difficulties plus some physical issues. I only started watching this for cancer track but as you say lost its charm half way through. But amazing stories and indepth analysis on this forum has been very soothing for me.
You do have great talent and are a brilliant writer - i do hope you wont stop writing just because there is less appreciation (sometimes its not even intentional - i for one was a silent reader but now realise how important it is give feedback.

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