where's that tight storyline gone?

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Posted: 11 years ago
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for me the show is losing its grips
in the beginning, durga planned with direct results like with mathur, the commissioner, and the principle. but now she's meandering around the goekas. her plan isn't foolproof either. it rests completely on feelings of others, i.e. shaurya
why isn't she going after the others? goenkas are not the only ones left on that revenge board of hers. how about breaking sakshi's support system raima? i'm not saying she should forget about the revenge but she can do so much without getting engaged/married to the rapist of her sister.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is the million dollar question on everybody minds!
Pandit, lady doctor, classmate, commissioner were easier targets than Goenkas. Why not go after them?

What's she doing with footage gathered from Raima's bedroom?

I suspect it is being dragged for Dev.

To make him hero and somehow involve him in revenge plan or use family drama route for saas bahu cum revenge within Goenka mansion.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ya d tight storyline got lost n seems changes done in script to stretch for n no of epis for a daily soap . becos of stretching many loop holes appearing in script.hope cvs don't stretch it too much n tear it apart 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: atominis

This is the million dollar question on everybody minds!

Pandit, lady doctor, classmate, commissioner were easier targets than Goenkas. Why not go after them?

What's she doing with footage gathered from Raima's bedroom?

I suspect it is being dragged for Dev.

To make him hero and somehow involve him in revenge plan or use family drama route for saas bahu cum revenge within Goenka mansion.



honestly, i don't like the whole Dev angle. he wasn't needed in the show. nothing against the actor but i didn't want the love story in the revenge story.
ugh- i'm dreading the saas bahu drama that's coming our way 🤢
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Savz_Startling

ya d tight storyline got lost n seems changes done in script to stretch for n no of epis for a daily soap . becos of stretching many loop holes appearing in script.hope cvs don't stretch it too much n tear it apart 😆



exactly- the story is tearing apart because of this dragging plots. and i don't see the need for it as there are so many ppl involved in the payal case that they can spend time after each person
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rutu83



exactly- the story is tearing apart because of this dragging plots. and i don't see the need for it as there are so many ppl involved in the payal case that they can spend time after each person



ya there is no need but wat d cvs need to see d unnecessary plots n drags only known to them
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The way it's dragging it doesn't look like a finite show as CVs had earlier promised. Neither does it seem different. 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: atominis

The way it's dragging it doesn't look like a finite show as CVs had earlier promised. Neither does it seem different. 😕


that's somethng that bothers me to no end- the end of the goenkas! i hope the CVs do justice to that😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You have echoed many people's query .

Ever since Dev's entrance and this dumb jealousy track the show has gone down the drain.

Now Durga is hell bent on getting Shaurya jealous and enter the Goenka clan.

Dayal too is doing a turnaround on his claim to get justice and wants Durga to forget her mission and settle down.

The zeal with which this show was moving is now slowed down to snails pace.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yeah, I prefer , Durga confide in dev and he and Akashi can work together from inside , in their own ways. Not liking this whole engagement /wedding track and go forbid saas Bahu drama.
I liked the show because it was fast moving, and unpredictable with its twists and turns.. Now looks like it gas lost steam... Maybe the writers are out of original ideas ..
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