Embers of Passion - 11/03/2018 - Likhavat 2.0

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

Hey folks!

This story can now only be found on Wattpad. You could follow me, or read it by following the link below:

Embers of Passion

Cheers!

Zoya

Edited by orion23 - 6 years ago

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Apoorva Kushwah

@akrocks77

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

ZOYA!!!👏

I am out of words...it's just so so beautiful.⭐️

I always thought why were you after this piece, so much.

I thought it was absolutely fine.

Now ...i know this was what was missing.

This seems complete now.

FABULOUS!!

Till now Elysium was my favorite of all your Likhawat enteries.

But you just out did yourself.

I love it...more than i can tell you in words.

You just weaved magic girl.

I love this Shravan more than Sumo.

Thank you Pushkar...if not for you then these two.😡

Ahh!!...The Guilt!!

This bold SUMO☺️

Shravan was so clueless ...he was like what has suddenly gotten into her now.

Abhi toh maarne ko taiyaar thi ab ye😆

Glad that Sumo forgive him.

If this is what happens when you rewrite pieces.

I would say try others too.😆

I am greedy😉

Apoorva

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bworm

@bworm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

Beautifully written.

Thanks for sharing it.

Appreciate the pm

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_anukulgr8

@_anukulgr8

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

So beautiful, soulful and pure..!!!❤️
Had read the version in Likhavat but this one is also truly wonderful..!!🤗

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Sidhi

@ArtThouTheBest

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Posted: 7 years ago

Res

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Unres

Superb!! I loved it...This bold Sumo along with her Shravan and their Haawt chemistry is 😃

I love the chemistry that you manage to bring on along with their different shades and past baggage...You know exactly what emotions and how to fit them in what situations and that makes it all the more interesting to read...Would love to read this further...Please do consider continuing this if you have the time

Thanks for the pm

Love😊

Edited by Ivvy - 7 years ago

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

People!

Thank you so much for your lovely comments ❤️

My life currently, let's just say is racing with Usain Bolt, when he was at his peak. So it will be a while before I get to replying here...

Please be patient with me 🤗

Cheers!

Love!

😳

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Only4ShraMan

@MariaCreations

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

We will 🤗

Originally posted by: orion23
People!
Thank you so much for your lovely comments ❤️
My life currently, let's just say is racing with Usain Bolt, when he was at his peak. So it will be a while before I get to replying here...
Please be patient with me 🤗

Cheers!

Love!
😳

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WhiteNoise

@WhiteNoise

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

Rather than ressing and then waiting for indefinite time to unress I thought to wait for few days and direct post a comment.Aren't I Awesome ?I know I am.You already have my more than fair share of resses so much that my conscience(believe it I do have one) feels the weight of it.

Coming to your master piece, You know I love you Right. Well not you(kidding or maybe not🤣) but your way with words ,the way conversations flow with certain warmth you know that homey feeling and ease with lingering angst somewhere underneath.I am a sucker for that.I could definitely feel the tension and chemistry by your words here.Sparkling and Electric 😆.

Keep writing or Should I say keep Re -writing 😆

Edited by .DreamWalker. - 7 years ago

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 46

Posted: 7 years ago

Beautifully written Zo

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#10

There was a reason why I was urging you to post this one and I'd never thought that it would turn out to be so beautiful once rewritten.

There is something so powerful and hot about a woman owning and loving herself, her body, her actions, her LIFE and to be vocal about what she wants it's a beauty in itself. ❤️

And then for Shravan to let her make her own moves, let her take her own sweet time in exploring this new phase of their relationship was brillantly described.

So many moments I loved when he doesn't want her to catch a cold when she is scared to stay without him even if it's from mere seconds and when the tension is so thick between them I could feel it while reading it.
And my absolute favorite moment Sumo taking charge, if we ever had the chance to see their romantic moments I can bet that Sumo would have been few steps ahead from Shravan.

Never has a lovemaking been written so subtly. ❤️

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