Kaun Sumo: A ShraMan one shot ! - Page 2

Originally posted by: -Emerald-

Amazing OS

Thank you!

It's picturesque penned so nicely

😃

Here Ramnath proved himself as good father

Yes, he did..! Finally !

I liked the way Shravan started PCT conv

Never knew starting a conversation in a story is even more difficult than it is otherwise! 😆

Happy to know you liked it.

Sumo reply towards the end 😳

❤️

Giving us Shraman goals

Ah! Tabby sighs in relief!

Loved it.. keep them coming 👍🏼

Will try!

#Missing Edkv 😭

Always!

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Thank you Arthi for reading it and letting me know what you liked the most.

🤗

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Forgiving Sumo, Caring Sumo and above all, a PCT sacrificing Sumo!!

Ab kya pasand kar hi loon Sumo ko😆

Ab bhi pasand na aaye to kya karey Sumo 😆

Home in 20 minutes..mush at it's finest 😳

Everyday kinda thing yet so...😳

Ramnath realising Sumo's sacrifice before Shravan even gets an inkling of it, now that's a novelty!!

I always feel, the show was about the redemption of the elderly as much as it was of the leads. There were always two parallels... chotey n badey Shraman...Ramu-nimmo and Shraman. Therefore this.

Secondly, i never felt Shravan was a MCP, he was trying very hard to be one. But Ramu kaka was! ever since ep. 1.

To unka realisation zyada zuroori tha.

A welcome one though.

Haha..I prefer a road lesser travelled by.

I am glad I wasn't lost in the woods though . 😆

I always felt that they would make an awesome Sasur- Bahu duo.

Ditto!

This act of Ramnath was both of a remorse and a reach out to his son.

Totally. You got the point.

Things were strained..and still the way Shravan listens to his words with utmost concentration, he can't ever stop being warm to his dad, it was something that I always knew. His dad was a big part of his life, everything else notwithstanding.

Being upset, hurt, disappointed is alright. But..disrespectful or indifferent, that's not Shravan. No matter what.

And finally..the aghaaz e guftagu ..so very Shravan 😳

A difficult one to think. 😳

A home bound Sumo wasn't his prerogative ever, was she?😊

Never. Even if Sumo's mind go on an overdrive and she plans to be one.😊

..a heart bound Sumo was whom he sought.

Agreed.

I remember reading somewhere, it was an Indifferent woman who broke him.😉

Beautiful OS Tabby👏.

Thank you ! 😊

Aapke alfaazon ki Kya tareef karoon, woh toh saadgi mein bhi kayamat ki adaa rakhte hain👏..Beautiful lines you have written Babe!

Originally posted by: Tinna28

This is so beautiful tabby specially the lines ❤️

Yeyy!

Perfect scene which was missed in the show

Ikr

Ramnath finally done something good for her

Finally!

And shravan suman are always love

They are !❤️❤️

Always love ur writing

Thank you !
Simple but beautifully expressed ❤️

Originally posted by: Nik03

Tabby thoda sa waqt milega unres ke liye?

Ittu sa promise😛

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Jao! Diya! 😛😆