Bazm-e-Sukhan ! ~Daayre~ P.43

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

Lafzon ka Kaafila !!

Couplets by Caps...😳

This is where it started !!

Alfaaz!❤️

alfaazo ka istemaal hota,, to manzar khushgawaar hota! !

Na wo be-hisi ka choga hota,, na wo intezaar-e-yaar hota! !

Ranjishein!

Koi maazi ke tasawwur se hiraasan hai,,,Kisi ko deta hai ye dard se taskeen..!

Koi khud se pashemaan hai,,,Kisi ke dil mein ranjishein hai..!

Justajoo!

Jiski justajoo mein khud ko sameta tuney,,

Khayal aaj bhi usey teri tanhai ka hai..!!

Jiski aawaaz mein khud ko duboya tuney,,

Intezaar aaj bhi usey teri pukaar ka hai..!!

Muntazir!

Wo jo kehtey they intezaar fitrat nahi unki,,muntazir-e-jawaab-e-yaar baithey hain..!

Wo jo sochtey hain zamane ko khwahish nahi unki,,bekhabar-e- khat-e-yaar baithey hain..!

Mayassar!

Napasandeeda hai jo har fard ki aankhon mein,, panah mili usey ek buzurg ki baaton mein! !

Kahan guzarti hai zindagi kisi Saraaye mein,,talab ghar ki milti hai har bashindey ki aahon mein! !

Ranjishein thi...justajoo thi...they muntazir jiske..!!

Mayassar kar gaya khudko...khuli kitaab ke maanid..!!

Inaayat!

Khush Mizaji ka banke sabab,,

Nijaat Mayoosi ke silsilon se dedi..!

Inaayat hai ye dosti unki,

Raahat dil-e-muztar ko dedi..!

Maraasim!

Bikhre hue panno ko dekhkar sochta hai har koi,,

Berang si thi zindagi ki kitaab par Simti hui to thi !!

Jahan na ummedien beshumaar ho,, Sirf khayaal ki darkaar ho !!

Jo khush ho to tujhey yaad karey,, Jo udaas ho to terey pass ho !!

Hotey hain zindagi mein kuch Maraasim aisey bhi !!

Iztiraar!

Jisne rokey they kabhi padhtey wo andherey saaye,,

Us Dil-e-pur-iztiraar ko ujaala Mil jaaye !!

Raftaar!

Raftaar kuch aisi hai zindagi ki,,

waqfon main ensaas badal deti hai!!

Lehja!

Be-taassub nazar main chupa har rishtey ka wajoob hai,,

Zindagi hai naam jiska naqaabil-e-paishangoi hai! !

Lehje ki narmi main chupi kirdaar ki bulandi hai,,

Talkh zubaani ka sila wo ehsaas-e-gunahgari hai! !

Qasid!

Qasid ke haath unhone paigham bheja hai,

Kuch chupake Kuch sar-e-aam bheja hai !!

Dekh bhi lo ke koi sharmsaar hai bahut ,

Band karke lifafe main ek ehsaas bheja hai! !

Qatra!

Samunder si wasee Zindagi se,,

Diya wo Qatra jo Moti ho jaaye !!

Meyaar!

Rang -e-nashaat-e-dil-o-jaan se parhaiz kahan hai mumkin,,

Kuch zakhm purana hai,,kuch meyaar-e-Ulfat aazmana hai !!

Noor!

Noor Mehfil main aamad se unki,,

Pur Noor hain ye nigahein inki !!

Noor faila hua yoon aaj ki raat hai,,

Noor jo aaj Noor ke saath hain !!

Sukoon !

Zabt Laazim aur dil Talabgaar hai,

Kisi ka Khwaab Kisi ka Khayaal hai,

Ghustaakh si Nazdikiyon main,

Khawahison ki Pabandiyon main,

Sabab-e-Sukoon-e-Hayaat hai !!

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Posted: 7 years ago

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

Is this what I am thinking ?

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Sunain

@Sunain

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

Ghustakhi maaf kijeeayga 😛
@Birdy...Ditto! 😆

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Hadh hoti hai Caps!

Like Seriously!

Ab mein itni bhi gaae guzri nhi k ek pm deserve na karon! Come on yar!...You made an official thread and didn't even send out pms😭

Khair koi baat nhi...

Okay now i can actually use the phrase i was dying to use since past few days but there wasn't anything to say for...Well now i surely have😃

O to the M effing G!!!!!!

MashAllah MashAllah! MashAllah!

This looks so so so beautiful Tabby! I can't tell you how happy i am for you!

Talent ki bharmar hai yahan and apnay tu ek hi thread mein bhar la di!

Congratulations Caps for such an achievement Caps! This thread looks amazingly terrific!

Bazm-e-Sukham is ❤️❤️❤️

Well its really difficult for me to choose the best of all coz all your couplets are intensely beautiful and they held so much meaning and emotions..MashaAllah say!

Caps i literally don't know what to say...its just that i am to bedazzled witnessing such ethereal couplets aligned so perfectly altogether in a thread.

MashAllah!

I am so happy for you Caps! Congrats for such a beautiful thread yar!

You have nailed it to top notches and the banners/edits..uff they are the killer ones! You indeed are expertising in your talent and other stuff i see..Just keep doing so! You are wonderful!

You know what?...You should publish a book of your own couplets! Like seriously! You are too capable and talented to write one or even more... I am 200% sure about it! Tabby you actually can do this! Please do give it a thought and I am totally serious and mean it Honestly!

Your Couplets are pure love!

You are pure Love!

My best best wishes for you Caps!

Hope you keep on writing ahead and spreading your love!

You are a true gem!❤️

Lots of Admiration and Love!

🤗

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Naila

@naila.bashri

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

I think my guess is right... Res😉

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Naila

@naila.bashri

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

Par guess kya kiya hai ye nhi bolu gi😛

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

Ji.. Toh 5 din ho chale..

Aaisa bhi kya aa raha yahan pe?

And Tabby, ek comment aur kar do...

Kiska intezaar hai?

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I am using this strategic location as my comment position 😆

Right so finally!!!!!

Tabby! My heart is so happy that you finally put these up!

These are love!

And no matter that I've read them before, its a complete bliss reading them again!

These are gems that lift your spirits and make you feel content no matter what's going on with life!

They are hope hon!

❤️

Needless to say this thread is bookmarked forever more!

I sure hope you keep adding to the gorgeousness and treating us with all of this urdu love!

I wanted to contribute by gifting a banner, but you already have such gorgeous ones... The thread looks great buddy!

Love it!

Love you!

🤗

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Ranified009

@Ranified009

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

Wohhh...red as a rose is Tabby😃

Isi khushi mein

RESSS🥳

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Nik03

@Nik03

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

Res ki gustakhi to banti hai!
Kar lu na Tabby 😳

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Unres

Tabby🤗

Sorry for being this late ya!

Couplets By Caps..Finally all at one place🥳

So So Happyyy!!!!

Hope, Happiness, Depth, Soul, Couplets by Caps and Love!

❤️

There's a big smile on my face Everytime I read them.

Thank you for that!

I have been following you for a long time Tabby (You're aware of that), even before we started interacting. And I guess you're one of those people here I interacted with really very late.

Reading your Comments was a must and is a must for me cos of the depth I see in them...even before you started adding Couplets in them.

And the couplets only added beauty to the already beautiful words by you. I am sure respective writers Love them the way we readers do.😃

The Safar of Couplets started with Alfaaz...❤️❤️

Alfaaz has given me sooo much...It's Really really close to my heart and I know yours too.

And the first couplet was for Alfaaz...Sigh!!

Can anything be better than that?...Nah!

Alfaaz with Couplets of Caps...Best for the Best!

❤️

The first couplet I read there...

Alfaazo ka istemaal hota,, to manzar khushgawaar hota! !

Na wo be-hisi ka choga hota,, na wo intezaar-e-yaar hota! !

Haaye Mera dil...❤️ ❤️