Unfinished Business- FS (Part 3 updated on page 17)

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

Apne bete ki future love story tu itne acche se plan kar rahi hai. If he reads he might want a smiliar princess 😉

Perfection ki to aap misaal hain. This was unedited? Really? Show off!!

But it was cute. The conversations did belong to teenagers and it also shows the writers mental age 😉 😆

Super cute and well advertised Sevanand ke samose.

"Mumma's boy"

"Proudly so!" it was adorable beyond measure.

and daddy's princess is all worried. Damsel in a tiny bit of distress. his advice to her was so matured but still so age appropriate. Loved it Resh.

Bas bur ais bat ka lag gaya mujhe ki Resh ka update aya aur humko khabar nahi thi !! Dost paraye ho gaye, dushman zamana ho gaya !! 😳

Melodrama over. Delta has left the building! 😛

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Safire

@Safire

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#93

Nice update!!

Enjoyed reading it...

Thanks for the PM...

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nawal_imran

@nawal_imran

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#94

Wayyy to amazing! Well written with a beautiful storyy!

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#95

Sorry for late reply & read both

Sumo is missing her dad on his birthday but Shravan made her father's birthday special for her.

Shravan looked cute when he was whining like small kid over his small hurt & about halwa with his mom.

Both are loving their parents very much.

Shravan Mama's boy & Sumo daddy's girl

Thanks for PM Reshma

Vinu

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phoenix_edkv

@phoenix_edkv

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#96

This chapter is just ❤️❤️

Mumma's boy Shravan 😛

Samose, bike ride

This is saccharine sweet update

Lovely chapter 😳

Get well soon Resh di 🤗

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evaviego

@evaviego

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: deltadawn
Apne bete ki future love story tu itne acche se plan kar rahi hai. If he reads he might want a smiliar princess 😉
Perfection ki to aap misaal hain. This was unedited? Really? Show off!!

But it was cute. The conversations did belong to teenagers and it also shows the writers mental age 😉 😆

Super cute and well advertised Sevanand ke samose.

"Mumma's boy"

"Proudly so!" it was adorable beyond measure.

and daddy's princess is all worried. Damsel in a tiny bit of distress. his advice to her was so matured but still so age appropriate. Loved it Resh.

Bas bura is bat ka lag gaya mujhe ki Resh ka update aya aur humko khabar nahi thi !! Dost paraye ho gaye, dushman zamana ho gaya !! 😳

Melodrama over. Delta has left the building! 😛

Yahi. 😉

What a beautiful update

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: evaviego

Yahi. 😉

What a beautiful update

copy cat!!

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Nitequeen

@Nitequeen

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#99

Hey dear...

It's been a really long time...

Hope u r ok...

An amazingly cute story line...

Hope u r able to update soon ( really hope )...

Waiting eagerly...

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: Nitequeen
Hey dear...
It's been a really long time...
Hope u r ok...
An amazingly cute story line...
Hope u r able to update soon ( really hope )...

Waiting eagerly...

Hey Sweets! !

I wasn't well for a long time during my vacation and now lots of chaos at work. .baki sab theek hai😳

I do have a track in mind. .will definitely try and update as soon as I can. 😃

Much love❤️