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Posted: 7 years ago
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Apne bete ki future love story tu itne acche se plan kar rahi hai. If he reads he might want a smiliar princess 😉
Perfection ki to aap misaal hain. This was unedited? Really? Show off!!

But it was cute. The conversations did belong to teenagers and it also shows the writers mental age 😉 😆

Super cute and well advertised Sevanand ke samose.

"Mumma's boy"

"Proudly so!" it was adorable beyond measure.

and daddy's princess is all worried. Damsel in a tiny bit of distress. his advice to her was so matured but still so age appropriate. Loved it Resh.

Bas bur ais bat ka lag gaya mujhe ki Resh ka update aya aur humko khabar nahi thi !! Dost paraye ho gaye, dushman zamana ho gaya !! 😳


Melodrama over. Delta has left the building! 😛



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Posted: 7 years ago
#93
Nice update!!
Enjoyed reading it...
Thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#94
Wayyy to amazing! Well written with a beautiful storyy!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Sorry for late reply & read both
Sumo is missing her dad on his birthday but Shravan made her father's birthday special for her.
Shravan looked cute when he was whining like small kid over his small hurt & about halwa with his mom.

Both are loving their parents very much.
Shravan Mama's boy & Sumo daddy's girl

Thanks for PM Reshma

Vinu
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This chapter is just ❤️❤️
Mumma's boy Shravan 😛
Samose, bike ride

This is saccharine sweet update
Lovely chapter 😳

Get well soon Resh di 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: deltadawn

Apne bete ki future love story tu itne acche se plan kar rahi hai. If he reads he might want a smiliar princess 😉

Perfection ki to aap misaal hain. This was unedited? Really? Show off!!

But it was cute. The conversations did belong to teenagers and it also shows the writers mental age 😉 😆

Super cute and well advertised Sevanand ke samose.

"Mumma's boy"

"Proudly so!" it was adorable beyond measure.

and daddy's princess is all worried. Damsel in a tiny bit of distress. his advice to her was so matured but still so age appropriate. Loved it Resh.

Bas bura is bat ka lag gaya mujhe ki Resh ka update aya aur humko khabar nahi thi !! Dost paraye ho gaye, dushman zamana ho gaya !! 😳


Melodrama over. Delta has left the building! 😛




Yahi. 😉

What a beautiful update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Yahi. 😉

What a beautiful update


copy cat!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey dear...
It's been a really long time...
Hope u r ok...
An amazingly cute story line...
Hope u r able to update soon ( really hope )...

Waiting eagerly...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Nitequeen

Hey dear...

It's been a really long time...
Hope u r ok...
An amazingly cute story line...
Hope u r able to update soon ( really hope )...

Waiting eagerly...


Hey Sweets! !

I wasn't well for a long time during my vacation and now lots of chaos at work. .baki sab theek hai😳

I do have a track in mind. .will definitely try and update as soon as I can. 😃
Much love❤️

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