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AnuradhaMG

@AnuradhaMG

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Posted: 8 years ago

#201

Deepti dear,

Ye itna emotional update...I m almost crying 😭 ...why...why dear...why did u hv to take d epilogue as far as their death...but still...it was very fantastic...their lake side home...all their little moments that u hv described...they r just beautiful...
Suman not being able to survive without Shravan...this can happen...really...sometimes ur better half actually becomes d centre of ur existence that u really cannot think of surviving without them...

The letter was just perfect yaar...isliye to I m ur fan dear...loved it...a befitting end to a very emotional saga.. 👏

rgds
Anuradha

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priety.priti

@priety.priti

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#202

Oh god dips beautiful epilogue even though its not a happy one but a perfect one for lost 👏

i was sure that you are going to give something like this as closure to lost and believe me you did it perfectly dear 😃

FB's was beautiful and reading them was pure bliss, just felt bad about kids as they lost their both parents 😭

but still its a master stroke love u hon for this 🤗

Priti

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#203

Dipti I don't know what should i tell. U know I don't like sad endings still I read it. Couldn't see Shravan & Sumo like this. We lost both of them. BTW when did Shravan die because I didn't get in the story. May be long back or recently. I read the story lekhin mere dimag ke andar kuch nehin gaya. Because I was so lost in reading there were no Shraman scene together & end Sumo died. i didnt concentrate properly so that I couldn't get courage to read again. I can't handle sad one sorry if u felt bad.

Thanks for PM

Vinu

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lizzy1299

@lizzy1299

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Posted: 8 years ago

#204

Deepti di.

The whole story of list was beautifully penned. You are a fabulous writer.

Epilogue was emotional. To be honest, I hadn't thought u would end it with their death. I was on verge of tears😭

Shravan's letter was heartfelt.

An emotional end to a lovely story.

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adityasingh.246

@adityasingh.246

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Posted: 8 years ago

#205

This whole journey of Lost is smtg truly at another level.. Each emotion,each pain,each happiness.. Everything is so close to heart that it feels I've gone through it at sm point of time .. This would always be very very close to my heart .. & with this u have made me your admirer for life ..

Why did I have that nagging feeling from starting that this epilogue would not end at happy note .. & I was so damn right .. Giving all those beautiful flashbacks .. & then ending with one left alone & finally both of them gone .. Felt an uncalled emotion & literally I cried this time (silently; with my brother giving me weird look & then in a second got to know that I've read smtg emotional again) ..

Why ? I get so attached everytime that it hurts when your stories end .. 😭 wish I could get another epilogue too ..

Parting words :- I love you,your brain & your pen(keypad).. 👏🤗❤️

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#206

Is it going to sound weird if I say -

I loved how they died? 😕

But, seriously, what a superb ending to a superb story. 👏

I enjoyed the story so much. Their struggles, their growth, the way

they healed and changed into better beings together... and lived happily until they died. Wow!

Loved this story and

love you so much for writing it.

It was a perfect epilogue,

which you ended perfectly with me

desiring to read about their afterlife.

At the end of a chapter or the story... when you leave readers

wanting for more, you know you've done a great job.

🤗

Lots of love,

Take care.

Lara.

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb
Chapter 17

The beginning of the update reminds me of Sumo's state of mind in the last episode. It's a constant battle between her heart and reason. She wants to trust him but her heart has been trampled way too many times to accept him, just like that which I found very realistic.

Again last episode feels 💔 the Sumo he knew could never move on with those words, certainly not with him.You know, the moment Shravan cupped her face in the episode, you could see the determination in his eyes as well as the fear of losing her, it was like he was holding onto her, I could feel his fear while reading this.

I know 😭 saw it yesterday and I cried...

Shravan yaar why do you do this whenever he speaks his heart out, it just does something to him, the only thing he has ever wanted was someone to listen to him 💔

You truly are giving me all the EDKV feels "Tumse shaadi karna, tumhare saath zingadi bhar rehna mera sapna tha Sumo. This reminds me of my favorite dialogue, the yearning for his Sumo is so beautiful, so real. Never I have seen someone pinning for someone else, the way Shravan did for Sumo.

The fact that she holds him even when he has screwed, that was ShraMan and that was lost during the middle of the show. No matter the differencies, they always always stood by the other side.

Dr.Das, I love this guy, he is my spirit animal 😆 ❤️
Iss bande ki timing ka koi jawab nahi, bandi bechari confuse hai aur isse date pe jaana hai, I love him 😆

I am committed to Shravan.Through out the show we all waited for this, Sumo to claim him as hers, to be possessive about him the way he was about her. You know what's beautiful about their love, is that they don't have to show it to the world, for her it was confined into the memory box and for him in the depths of his heart. They don't need to say it out loud, but every time they do, it does something to my heart, this moment, this line is a total parallel to a conversation Shravan had with Aditya, about the girl who broke his heart.

Ouch, things are about to heat up for Shravan, wrong move Buddy 😆
Man I legit wrote an OS 😆

I loved this OS writing you did. Keep reading. You are making me re-read its like reviewing my own test paper😃

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: HappyLibran1910

For sum reason I could feel what was gng to be written :)

Phir bhi rula diya Dipti😭... But it's a very touching ending👏to such a wonderful story ...

thanks Mayu 🤗

Shravan's' letter is beautifully penned :) truly ek duje ke Vaaste ..

Actully if I may say it here .. The forum writers n fans have made this couple truly Ek Duje Ke vaaste 🤗" than the original makers !!

Cheers Dipti👍🏼

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: phoenix_edkv
You made me teary DIpti di
Lovely flashbacks, ShraMan ❤️

Shravan's letter is so well penned.

The epilogue is sad, but let me tell you this, you are a brilliant writer. i love your writings.

And I have some chapters to unres, but not now, i need some time to digest the fact that another lovely story of yours came to an end.

Till then
❤️

Maddy you did not Res that means I actually wrote a worthwhile chapter😆

thank you so much for the sweet words hunny🤗

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb
Chapter 18
Much needed confrontation between the mother-son duo. I might even accept the reasoning of Nirmala here, just because of Delta 😉

Aww thanks but the woman makes me speechless I write in her defense but its very very difficult

Who remembers the 'wahan poonch tehi main tumhe landline se phone karonga' 😆

I do I do 😆

"Nahi tumhe jana hi nahi chahiye tha"I always wanted to see this side of Sumo, thoda wo bhi tadpe 😆
Phir se friendzone, frustration to hoga hi, Sumo is so going to hunt him down 😆

Dr.Das is kind of the mirror of their relationship, he makes Sumo ponder over Shravan's actions in a very realistic way, that's delta's special touch 😉
12 years 8 months 16 days this never fails to make me smile :)
Sumoness in all its glory 👏

Beautiful update !

@bold That was the purpose of having him and making him a character in the story. Dr. Das was kinda representing us here at the forum who were irritated by their silence and retresting steps 😆

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