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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit
Wow! This masterpiece had me tingling all over and giddy with happiness!
It was soo cute and saucy at the same time!!!!
I love, LOVE, LOVE IT!!

Take a bow, dear

PS: That last scene with the waist chain, Ufff, freaking brilliant!
If there was one scene! One scene that I could be added to EDKV it has to be this one!!
Delta, you wrote it all so well. Thank you for giving us this wonderful piece!

Omg m fangurl blushing right now. You read it and you liked it and I still finding it unreal 😳

Triying to put the missing pieces from edkv in my stories, but then arent we all

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priety.priti

@priety.priti

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Ha ha glad you liked it. Aur kuch soojha nahi except for sumo up roots and mamiji aisa kar sakti hain ofcourse 😆

Tera os kaha hai??

mera os? kaunsa i mean abhi to soulmates ki update likh rahi hu kal tak aa jayegi 😳

abhi do do chize hai baba hath me mein tortoise hu re jyada nahi likh sakahi esase jya nahi handle hoga muzase

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imshveta

@imshveta

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Hayye... Such mush
It was beautiful to say the least

I really wish the makers could have given us more time with them after things sorted between them to see their relationship grow positively, that we had got to see some real situations between them where their love could have shone brightly but disappointingly that was not to be.

But then... when writers...like you..on this forum write something like this... It really brings a satisfied smile on our faces because the way you write we can actually imagine all that happening and it seems so real and so joyful.

If the makers had extended the story after marriage, I am sure they could have taken inspiration from your stories on what situations they can show between them.
Looking forward to many more stories from you

Happy Holi to you

Love
Shveta

Edited by imshveta - 8 years ago

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crazyparrot

@crazyparrot

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

So cute and Romantic😊

Happy Holi!

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minho

@minho

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Wow awesome story with sweet romance 👏 kaamal ka likhte Ho aap 👏

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Castile2

@Castile2

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Res!

Post #800 😛
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Unress

Kya holi hai D! 🤣

Sacchi aise kehlte hai Vrindavan holi? I'm really curious about this 🤓

But this was awesome dude!! 😆

Pushkar ko shaadi me daudaaya par best toh usko uski Pretty Priti se door rakhna tha 🤪

Uski vajase hamaare Shravan-Sumo juda rahe the

Mr. Malhotra ke big plans: I like it

Par unki toh mamiji ne hawa tight kardi 🤣
Bade maze uthane the Damaad hone ke, yeh loo... Karo!! 😛

Tube light to dimlight!! 😈

The chat-banter was cute 😳

But Pushkar ki pitaai se naa-jaane kyun mujhe itna sukoon mila, kya bataun 😉

Mr. Malhotra! OMG D!! Where do you get these ideas from?! Awesome man really 👍🏼

But the end... 😈

Yaar keep entertaining us with your stories!!

Much love
Cas ❤️

Edited by Castile2 - 8 years ago

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HappyLibran1910

@HappyLibran1910

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Hayee Dipiti you made our Holi that much more special 🤗 Finally got a chance to read 😳

Tiwari's come up with the weirdest rituals 👍🏼 but I with them this time like Kamini chachi 😆

Lath mar ke holi 🤣 how do you even come up with such hilarious n apt titles !!

I loved the way the tiwaris defelated the malhotras boys spirit 😆 gonna give it to pushy for managing to get through a rangofy Preeti 👏

Aur Apna hero and uski kya baat karu .. The gold waist band with diamond studded lock

How I wish we had such scenes 😡

Once again an excellent piece of wrk 👍🏼

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Swarnima

@Swarn283

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Res

Disclaimer: the concerned post will not be unressed in near future. The commentator requests an apology for being late in reading all the amazing works of one of her favorite writers.

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AMNP

@AMNP

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Beautiful OS👏...got to hear the romantic side of Mr. Shravan Malhotra and that too narrated by his better half Mrs. Suman Shravan Malhotra...feels so good to know they had a real wedding😛...Maamiji coming up with the weirdest of rituals, can actually imagine the disappointed look on Pushkar and Shravan's face😆...Shravan planning a romantic Holi for his wife, their adorable chat convo, Shravan's sensuous and romantic way of applying Holi to his wife...sigh, how I wish we could see all of this, but you made it all alive through your OS 👍🏼

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bworm

@bworm

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#40

That was too good.

Naughty shravan.

Loved it.

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