Commitment~~SS{Part 8_Pg.35}05-08-17 NO PM - Page 15

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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update
so good
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

awesome update
so good
continue soon


Glad you loved it..!!!Will continue soon..!!😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Finally shraman are Ek Duje Ke Saamne thanks to our Pushkar😃
"Whom he loved".. "whom he cheated"😲😲
Excited for the next part
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Why r u turned into zehrili chidiya my dear anu??
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Awesome update

Finally shraman are Ek Duje Ke Saamne thanks to our Pushkar😃
"Whom he loved".. "whom he cheated"😲😲
Excited for the next part
Plz continue soon


Ek Duje ke daamne..true..
Glad u loved it...
Will try to continue soon... 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Why r u turned into zehrili chidiya my dear anu??


Jisko samaj jaana chahiye woh samaj gaya hoga.. 😉
Aur tum and sab logo ke liye toh mai Anu he hu na..UN mey kya rakha hai 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Updating for the first time so early...Reasons-1_I wont be able to write anytime soon as college timings are 7.30 to 5.30..I'll dropping live from college sometimes but write karne ko time nahi milega
2_ Tabby ka gift bhi dena hai😆
So here goes the update without much bak-bak😆


I saw him as I turned back and a train of thoughts and emotions ran down my memory lane...Shravan...The boy whom I loved...The boy whom I cared...The boy who let me overcome my weakness..The boy who cheated...A drop of tear threatened to escape as his eyes bored into mine...I blinked the tear away and talked mustering courage...

"Yes Mr. Pushkar Malhotra..Please be seated..."I said ignoring him...

"Yes...this is my brother..Shravan Malhotra...He is here to discuss something with you..."To this Shravan felt a little alarmed as he gazed Pushkar with a not so good gaze...

"Of course...Hello...Mr. Shravan Malhotra" I said forcing a smile...Taking his name, addressing as Mr seemed difficult...I forwarded my hand for a formal shake hand..

"Hello Suman..."

"Its Miss Tiwari for you..."I snapped him as he took my hand in his and a spark rushed down my spine...

"Sure "He said withdrawing his hand from mine...

"Kahiye Mr. Malhotra...Kya kehna chahte the aap??"

Silence...Shravan was gazing at me and Pushkar waited for him to speak...I looked at Pushkar with a questioning gaze...

"Bhaiya??"

"Oh..Y..Yes??"He was alarmed...

"Aap kuch kehna chahte the Mr. Malhotra...??"I nudged him...

"Oh Yes...So Sum...I mean Miss. Tiwari...Mai ye ..Hum ye kehne aaye the ke mujhe...hum..hume aapke hotel ka conference room chahiye..I mean We want to book it for our conference..."He completed stammering...Seemed he was too nervous by meeting me...

"Mr. Pushkar..Maine aapse parso he kaha tha ke ye nahi ho sakta..."

"Par kyu nahi ho sakta??!"Shravan said in a little high pitch due to which he earned a dangerous glare from me...

*

"Par kyu nahi ho sakta??!"I said a little irritably at which she glared at me...her eyes...dark hazelnut eyes...which evaded my nights...Her eyes which would kill...

"I mean why do you say so??"

"Pehli baat toh aap aachanak se do din pehle aake booking mangte hai which is against the policy...And even if you would be late, maine aapko booking de diya hota but unfortunately usi din there is a party here and we can't afford you to give the booking.."

"Would you please justify the last statement??"I said looking in her eyes..

I wasn't interested in knowing the reason...Her voice...that melodious voice which sung for me..I was hearing it almost after 9 years...

"Of Course...Aapki meeting 3.00 to 6.00 iss odd timing mey scheduled hai as Mr. Pushkar told me...and we have a party from 5.00 onwards...Party mey shor sharaba hoga, DJ hoga...Aab aap he batayiye...Would you afford listening to DJ in the conference??This is the reason why I am not giving you the booking..But if you prepone the meeting at 12.00 or 1.00 toh kuch ho sakta hai..."She completed...

"Aapki baat sahi hai..But we can't prepone the meeting..."Pushkar said...

"Par aap yahi resto kyu book karna chahte hai??I mean there are more fine restos in mumbai...And I guess you are from Delhi..."

"Yes..Par humare clients Mumbai se hai and Elite has a standard which matches ours..."I spoke to which her face gave an un describable expression...

*

"Yes..Par humare clients Mumbai se hai and Elite has a standard which matches ours..."He said and my face turned different...Standard...Not changed at all...Tab bhi Standard tha aur aaj bhi hai...Rich People...I murmured under my breath..

"Yeah..Ofcourse.."I said...

"Toh aab kya kare bhaiya??Pushkar asked him..

"I have a solution for this.."My mind hit an suggestion...

"Please..."Pushkar asked me to continue...

"Sure...ELITE has one more hotel of its in the Bandra side...So if you are OK with it I can request them to make you available with the conference hall for a couple of hours..."

"Oh Yes...!!Bhaiya hum khamakah itne dur ka ELITE book kar rahe the...out client lives near Bandra..."Pushkar exclaimed..

"That's great...So if it is OK shall I call the manager there??or else better way I let you know the contact details and you can talk to him in person..."I suggested...

"Of Course...can you please tell me the contact number??" Pushkar inquired..

"Sure..."I gave him the number...The range in by cabin wasn't good...So he went out leaving me and Shravan alone...

*

Pushkar went out leaving me with her...alone..That was tough...Being with her ...alone...I wanted to talk with her...talk, giggle..it had been years since I heard her giggles...I yearned to hear them...but if I wouldn't had been foolish right then that time...I wouldn't be suffering from this...Our eyes locked and I saw hurt in hers...This was going to be tough...I kept staring at her...

"Kya??"She asked...

"Kuch nahi...Itne saalo baad dekh raha hu...aacha lag raha hai..."I faked...I used to see her everyday...On FB...in my dreams...

"Kyu jhoot bol rahe ho...Tum aajtak thik se jhoot bolna nahi sikhe..."

"Sumo I..."

"Suman.."She said...

"Suman..I am sorry...I know tum ghussa ho mujhse..."

"Ghussa?Mai??Kisne kaha?Mai ghussa nahi hu..."

"Tumhari aakhe saach bolti hai..."

"Aacha??Ye aakhe padhne ke kala kab sikhi??pehle toh nahi thi..."She taunted...

"I know...I feel very Sorry for whatever I did...I know mujhe nahi karna chahiye tha...I broke your heart...I am so sorry sumo..."

"Pehli baat...DON'T call me Sumo...woh haq tumhara kabhi tha he nahi...Sumo wahi kehte hai jo mujhe pechante hai...Aur tum toh mujhse pechan he nahi paye...Aur rahi baat tumhare sorries ke toh please...I DON'T NEED THEM..."She said and I didn't dare to say a word...just them Pushkar came in...

"Done Bhaiya...!!!All OK??"He seemed to feel the tensed atmosphere in the room...

"Yes all fine..."Suman assured him...

"So we will be contucting our meeting at the other ELITE..."Pushkar said...

"Yes..."She nodded...

"So I think we should leave now..."Pushkar said getting up...I got up..

"It was nice meeting you Miss. Tiwari..."he smiled and shaked hands with her...

"Oh..Of course...Same here..."She replied doing the same fevour..

We left the room and my heart sank deep...She doesn't need my sorry...She was unaffected by my presence...I had done wrong...and I had to mend it...For MY LOVE sake...I loved her and her eyes told them to me...I HAD to mend it...

Hope I didn't disappoint anyone..especially Tabby..😃

Do share your views guys...

Hope to come back soon with another update...

See you all soon...

Till then,

ANU😳


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Posted: 8 years ago
Aaya re Aaya...gift Aaya..!!
For me it was like...imarti with rabdi...faluda sang kulfi..!! 😆
Didn't knew it is a SS know..!! Part 3 was missed in two shot mugalta!!
So,,I got to read two! !😳

Shravan cheated on Sumo...some high class act..!
Destiny brought them face to face... in Eliteish ambience..!
Fumbling Mr. Malhotra... Dazed by the door side..!
Sumo...The stunner! !
Shravan... The stalker! !

Loved my gift! !


Edited by CarpeDiem_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Rahi111

Too good zehrillichidiya😊


TYSM...!!😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

TYSM...!!!😃

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