ShraMan OS- THE CASE - Page 2

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

Superb story

Thank you

Thank YOU for reading it and enjoying it😊

Originally posted by: Arpi1234

Absolutely wonderful...

Khush is cute and father daughter talk is adorable...

Aww Thank You So Much

Originally posted by: Nik03

Hey dear...
Wonderful os... 👏
Shravan fighting a dangerous case n hiding it from Sumo...Sumo was right at her place.
Loved Kushi- Shravan bonding... ❤️
Finally Shravan won the case...!!
Ending was too good... 😳
Beautifully penned down ...👏
Loved it n enjoyed reading it immensely dear...!!
Keep these coming n plz pm me ...Would love to read..!!
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nik

I can't thank you enough for reading my first piece with such an attention.. Was kinda nervous while posting it but you guys made me happy😳 Will surely PM you.. Thank You So Much once again❤️

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Anaaayyyaa

This was too cute babe

There two are sooo adorable

And their little princesses hayeee. ..

You penned it down so beautifully

The morning scene made my heart flutter❤️

Madam ka sumo mode on tha

But she care for him anyway...

The breakfast scene was just so

And the kitchen kiss🤪

And uske jeetne p she cried and "papa ki chamchi"spilled all the beans🤣

And romance ka tadka😳

Too good it was...

Please write moree

Dolly😊

Dolly... Thank You Very Much! And i sooo wanted that we get to see father-daughter duo or something in the show.. But.. ALAS! So i executed my idea.. Papa ki chamchi to papa ki best friend hai na.. how can she hide something.. or ab agar Sumo good luck nahi bole gi Shravan ka day Good kese jaye ga! So he had to take it😆 Glad that you liked my first piece😳

Originally posted by: amlavs

Wow...it's so cute...

It's our bad luck tats v couldn't see such scenes in our show...

But am very happy to read such happy wala stuffs by ur writings...u said u r bad at writing OS??

It's so lovely...

Plz do write more ...

Eagerly ready to read all...

Luv...

LavSriya

Aww you people are so so sweet.. Thank You Buddy.. I am contented that i was the reason for your little happiness😊

Originally posted by: Tiii28

Hi dear nice os
Want to see more of shraman romance , care , and cute fight
Which we are not to able see in the show 😭
But again you are wonderful writer 😊

Thank You Sooo Much😳😳

Originally posted by: deltadawn

you write all aweee stuff 😆

khush... ghusha.. I loved it.❤️

sumo and her resolve... 🤣

lawyer nahi hai na bathroom me dekhna bhool gayi.. 😆😆

amazing stuff... I was still worried ki aage kya hoga.. bas tinke ka sahara tha ki OS hai to jayda bura nahi hoga.. 😆

Haha yes lawyer nahi hai na isi liye to bhool gayi😆 And i love writing fluffs.. They are my Favourite!! Serious wali cheze is not my cup of tea😕 And main to pta nhi kia kia krne wali thi case se regarding but then i thought.. itna sad ho jaye ga! Or OS.. TS me badal jaye ga😆 to nahi likha.. sometimes light things made your day!😊 Thank You Deepti for liking it😊

Originally posted by: Vyshnav

Good one! Write more of this kind!

Will write surely! Thank You So Much😳😊

Originally posted by: Sonai_02

this is really aweeesomeee !!! loved it 👏❤️

Thank You Dudee😊

You write these chaashni se bhi Meetha flavored stories year...it has a feel good factor to it.