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Nik03

@Nik03

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Res 😊
****
Unres

This was of another level dear... 👏
Soo adorable... 😳
Shravan married Sumo on 14 feb ❤️
Proposal was sooo awesome ...loved it!!
Shravan didnt want any special day to be celebrated for expressing his love...He wants everyday to love her , pamper her,spoil her...❤️
How can someone be that adorable n perfact...Am in awe of him 😳
Their personal teddy bear who was conceived on their weding day... 😳 ❤️
Ending was as usual mind blowing ... 😳

All in all it was wonderful dear... 👏
Loved reading it thoroughly!!
Keep these coming 😉
Thanks for the pm 😊
Love
Nik

Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago

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Tinna28

@Tinna28

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

So romantic and mind blowing os
Shraman and their romance
Again u are a wonderful writer with creative writing
Waiting for next greedy me 😛

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reshmanair356

@reshmanair356

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: deltadawn

OMG Mayu you dont read fiction and you read my story... 😳. Sach kabhi hum aapke reply ko kabhi hamare post ko dekhte hain..😆

Resh did you poor boys get bread butter again today? Tu forum pe hi hai ab tak 😆

lol no...managed on time...they were happy...the tiny deep dimples said it all😳

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

lol no...managed on time...they were happy...the tiny deep dimples said it all😳

Phew!! Chalo meri wajah se aaj panga nahi hua 😆

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

So OS ki Princess, back with another one.

Loved it Dips,

These two are so adorable. Sumo wanted Shravan to make her feel special for Valentines Day, just like any girl would like but Shravan saying he doesn't believe in it just like many would say, so relatable. But the way he makes her day was so sweet. Any one would melt by that. 👏 Very well written. Salesman getting the gifts and tired out was cute.

Shravan coming to PCT just to propose and then going back, was romantic, but Aww.. he can't even hug her.😆

Wedding was dreamy, he was planning it for so many days just to make her feel special on Valentines Day and make it memorable for lifetime. How can someone be so cute..❤️

But the best part was the Teddy bear, Daddy Shravan will be the best of all. Sumo conceived after her Wedding Night...😉 EPIC!!!!!

You gave us a Pre-Valentines Gift...

Lubna.

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Meera

@Jerry2308

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Beautiful OS... Shravan has made Sumo's Valentine's day so much more special

Edited by Jerry2308 - 8 years ago

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Hi Dipti...

14th feb is on the way & your OS about that special day is already arrived...

Shravan's surprise for his Sumo marrying her with all the rituals on the day of Valatines day... Their cute sa beta Aryan & Shravan changing baby's diaper.. Its so cute see him like this, typical husband & typical papa ke role mein...

Beautiful OS & thanks for PM

Vinu

U r write kuch ppl yehan wahan apna sir ghusata te rehte hain & than they will post about that story some where in social media.. Disgusting ppl...

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Diya

@Sonai_02

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

This is amazing ❤️

Loved it.

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HappyLibran1910

@HappyLibran1910

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: deltadawn

OMG Mayu you dont read fiction and you read my story... 😳. Sach kabhi hum aapke reply ko kabhi hamare post ko dekhte hain..😆

Resh did you poor boys get bread butter again today? Tu forum pe hi hai ab tak 😆

Resh/Dips( is it :) / Eva yes this is my first OS 😊 did not even know the meaning of OS/FF etc until sumtime back as I was not into reading the fiction ( due to lack of time not for any other reason )

But the insta fiasco and the PRAVCHAN I read there forced me to see what kind of fiction are we actully talking about ...n ppl getting all hyped n became self proclaimed saviours of Dhilip Jha Namik Nikita and EDKV series 🥱

Got up a wee bit early n the title intrigued me ( a die hard romantic that I am ) but The flow of the story n writing by Dips got me glued till the end 👍🏼

Reshma maybe ur right lat lag gayee .. Now hve to see how to juggle time 😆 but I'm happy I started with this OS !! Cheers guys to all the budding writers keep the creative energy flowing !!

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: LubSha
So OS ki Princess, back with another one.
Loved it Dips,
These two are so adorable. Sumo wanted Shravan to make her feel special for Valentines Day, just like any girl would like but Shravan saying he doesn't believe in it just like many would say, so relatable. But the way he makes her day was so sweet. Any one would melt by that. 👏 Very well written. Salesman getting the gifts and tired out was cute.

Shravan coming to PCT just to propose and then going back, was romantic, but Aww.. he can't even hug her.😆

Wedding was dreamy, he was planning it for so many days just to make her feel special on Valentines Day and make it memorable for lifetime. How can someone be so cute..❤️

But the best part was the Teddy bear, Daddy Shravan will be the best of all. Sumo conceived after her Wedding Night...😉 EPIC!!!!!

You gave us a Pre-Valentines Gift...

Lubna.

Thank you thank you gaalib ki nani.

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