His Return Gift (ShraMan OS)

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Spandana

@sptrno

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

awww beautiful adorable cute dear

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Awww...Shravan and his romanticism! Lovely Swarnima, but why 16+ didn't get that.

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Swarnima

@Swarn283

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: LubSha
Hey Swarnima,
That was a real cute one. I knew he wouldn't forget her birthday in fact he made it more special.
I think you didn't check, a wrote few lines for you in "Congratulations Swarnima" topic. Not much but just something came up when congratulating you.

Lubna.

Thank you Lubna 😊

Sorry about being late, I actually had read it yesterday itself but Wi-Fi wasn't supporting and wished to reply to everyone at one time, so I instead wrote an OS in expression of gratitude.

It was for the first time that anyone write any poem for me, and it was of A-grade quality, u can imagine how elated I feel. Thank you so very much. ❤️

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Swarnima

@Swarn283

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Safire
Shravan shouldn't have done that to his pregnant Sumo...
And i keep guessing about his return gift!!!!!

Even I felt it was very kiddish of him, but I had already written it by then, so thought of posting it anyway! I hope jaroorat se zayada unrealistic nhi ho gaya😕 as it was just the contrast of the over-caring Shravan we know.

His return gift was something he loved immensely ☺️

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Swarnima

@Swarn283

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Itssanjh
Awww...Shravan and his romanticism! Lovely Swarnima, but why 16+ didn't get that.

Thank you so much Sanjh 😊

16+ 'twas as his return gift referred to something under 16 shouldn't know, well think I should have put a 14+ tag, our juniors these days are too smart!

P. S. I just reread it. I had committed a big blunder in English in the last para, probably that's why the confusion. 😃 sorry for inconvenience.

Edited by theGoldenGirl - 8 years ago

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Swarnima

@Swarn283

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Thank you to all those who have liked and commented on this OS!

I wish to reply to each one of you lovely people individually but sadly time constraint won't permit. I'll make sure it's the first thing I do when I come back here the next time.😊

Swarnima

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Hi Swarnima...u should write often...

Shravan & Sumo are beautiful couple so nobody feels bore here...

Keep writing

Vinu

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Nik03

@Nik03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Hey buddy...
It was so cute... 😊
Loved Shravan's surprise ...!!
Do write more often dear...
Love
Nik

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Meera

@Jerry2308

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Beautiful OS...But poor Sumo

Instead of surprising her shravan scared her to no end

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evaviego

@evaviego

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Oh... Wow... it was dedicated to me also...

Thank you so much Swarnima... 🤗

I am really very happy that someone dedicated a ShraMan story to me...

And sorry for being a late lateef that i am... 😒

Well written it is... Loved it...❤️

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_
"Who does that to one's six-weeks pregnant wife,."...actually! ! How can he expect her to relax n drive safe
Emerald is back!!😳
Hope he gets his return gifts! 😉 n someone pennes it down!😃

Nice one!

@Bold: 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Me too...!!!

Thank you so much once again...!!!

Edited by evaviego - 8 years ago

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