SHRAMAN OS - The Christmas Tale

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: vimikrao
Hi Arpi... Nice OS... Sorry for late comment... Actually I m on tour..
Christmas tree taller than Shravan... His babies demand how can he says no to her...

Cutie pie Kavya... Same like her parents...

Shraman's are always cute & romantic...

Thanx for the PM

Vinu

Thanks vinu.

And comment important jai Timing nhin

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_anukulgr8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

UNRESSED on 1 😳

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evaviego

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Arpita... I must say.. your writing skills have improved a lot... a lot , lot...

I know i am not a writer and so dont have the right to comment on it.. but just felt like saying it.. 😳

This was such a beautiful Christmas gift...!!!

Such a cute and adorable one... Loved it.. ❤️

And yaa... the sasha joke right..!!! really loved the way you used it... it was really cute... i could visualise sumo/nikita saying it...

Keep up the good work girl... 👍🏼

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1095142

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: anukulgr8
UNRESSED on 1 😳

Finally. Do min ruko abhi karti hu reply

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1095142

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: evaviego
Arpita... I must say.. your writing skills have improved a lot... a lot , lot...
I know i am not a writer and so dont have the right to comment on it.. but just felt like saying it.. 😳

This was such a beautiful Christmas gift...!!!

Such a cute and adorable one... Loved it.. ❤️

And yaa... the sasha joke right..!!! really loved the way you used it... it was really cute... i could visualise sumo/nikita saying it...

Keep up the good work girl... 👍🏼

Thanks Eva and you're most welcome to comment. I do not hate critiques. 😉

About the sasha joke😃. I thought many people will get it but only you did👏

Thanks for the comment

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1095142

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: anukulgr8
Ressi ressi res...Mai first hu arpi darlo...😳

UNRESS

Pehle toh bada wala sorry yaar arpi...Yeh hafta bohot bhari tha...
Sooo coming to ur OS...
IT WAS JUST AWESOME...
Shravan se bada ped...hard to imagine...kaise lage ga yaar...😕
KAVYA was sooo cute yaar...tooo cute...
Gift...how beautiful yaar...
Shravu ko gift chahiye tha...😉Naughty boy...
Sumo ne kavya se sikha...Kavya was a chum yaar...😊
Anushka like arpita's OS Anushka love arpita
Kavya ki language...
Loved it to the core...
Luv ya dea...
ANU😳

Are finally aa gaye aap. .aaiye aap ka hi intezaar tha.

Hard to imagine kyun 6 foot ka to mere ghar par hai😛

Kavya se sumo me sikha maine nikita se😊

Thanks glad ki tujhe pasand aaya

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1095142

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: theGoldenGirl
Really cute it was! 😛

Thanks Swarnima. 😊

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Sunain

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

ARUU!!! 🤗
WOW...such a cutoo dutoo OS
Full of love n care feels...was a lovely one😉
Loved it to core❤️
Stupendously Penned!! 👏
Really loved the lil cuteness package...kept on adoring her through out my reading😳
kiddo are such an adorable n innocent n joyful lil package gifted my God...only luckly ones get the previlage of such sheer pleasure...n nothing is more precious then having ur own lil bundle of joy our own Baby!
Shraman no dout r gonna be great parents as thy hav suffered a nightmare like childhood so there is no way thy'll throq their own baby in such a hell.
Ending was really cute!
All in all i enjoyed it...well done cuto pie⭐️

Love
Sunain ❤️

Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago

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