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Posted: 8 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Something really different and different is good, I loved the descriptions be it the dragon's, Suman's or Shravan's and the end was cute I could imagine them staring at each other.
Keep writing !



Thank you!!

This really touched me! I tried to put my imagination in words here but could only get 35% of it...but I tried!

Thanks again for your comment dear.

Cas 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Castile2



Thank you!!

This really touched me! I tried to put my imagination in words here but could only get 35% of it...but I tried!

Thanks again for your comment dear.

Cas 😊


Seriously it was good :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I'm glad! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Castile2



Hey Anju

Just when I thought the OS didn't work, you came with your beautiful comment!

Thank you man...this is a huge compliment really. I wanted to read a classic fairy tale take on ShraMan but never saw anything coming up... So I decided to write one myself.

I never had a doubt regarding ShraMan's tale having a potential to be one of the most novel fairy tales but the magic was lost somewhere in between...

But for a classic take on our most favorite couple, I never had a doubt that it had always been Suman who was destined to save Shravan and not the other way around.

So I just wrote it down...

I am so happy that you guys appreciated the effort that I put in this one!

It means so much, thanks again Anju.

Love

Cas 😊

ur most welcome cas ..I'm glad my comment made it work.. n yeah it was different that's y I wrote it in my comment.. yeah the track, the vibes were lost in somewhere in between I agree.. I'm glad you wrote up something fairy tale like this.. keep writing cas ..love ya dear :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: anonymousanju

ur most welcome cas ..I'm glad my comment made it work..n yeah it was different that's y I wrote it in my comment.. yeah the track, the vibes were lost in somewhere in between I agree..I'm glad you wrote up something fairy tale like this..keep writing cas ..love ya dear :)



Love yaa back and more! 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
Casy 🤗
This was so beautiful..!!!

so different from the regular stories we get to read here..

Amazing concept and very beautifully written...❤️

Needless to say the twist was awesome... I never expected it... and that is what made me love this story even more. 😳

And if you think your vocabulary is not extensive enough and you could not get hold of that English which was needed... Baby, that is a myth... You did absolute justice to this one..

You surely have got very creative ideas.😊

Please keep writing such amazing stuffs.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: evaviego

Casy🤗

This was so beautiful..!!!

so different from the regular stories we get to read here..

Amazing concept and very beautifully written...❤️

Needless to say the twist was awesome... I never expected it... and that is what made me love this story even more.😳

And if you think your v<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">ocabulary is not extensive enough and you could notget hold of that Englishwhich was needed... Baby, that isa myth... You did absolute justice to this one..</font>
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Eva!! 🤗

I have always been a fan of love stories but I never liked the idea of a Damsel in Distress 🤢

But I always thought Suman was made to save Shravan from his dark past, which she too was a part of...

But uh-huh. Nope. The CVs can't give us that...that would be too good for us undeserving fans!!

This idea had been with me since a long time but finally I did write it down 😳

And I'm glad I did that...the response has been good... 😊

Thanks again dear!! I'll try to write more and bore you guys less!! 😆

Till next time

Love
Cas ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#28
CASI!!!!🤗
[B]O
to the M effing G!!!...(squeals of joy😳)
God...tht was Hell Aaamaazing👏
Totally spellbound...n mesmerised by ur talent😳
Wht a Master Piece u gifted us...Thanks a ton for such a lovely piece...u nailed it indeed⭐️
Totally a different concept n an alluring one...i Loved it![L[ Loved it!❤️ Loved it!❤️
Beeeautifully Penned!!
I read it midnite n to me it seemed as if u were here beside me narrating me this whole tale just like a bedtime story..literally i imagined it n it was so cute😳
Tbh i thought tht the knight was a prince but it turned out to be a princess..
woah...tht climax part was Fantabulous...u did a tremendous job dear...hats off to u👏
I Loved it to core❤️
i so wish to read wht happened ahead...how thy became friends...how the commenced their relationship...the "Thy happily lived after" part...i so want to read tht too
Caaasssiii...u r sooo sweet u r my pumkin na...cutoo dutoo na*puppy eyes*...Casi Puuleeezzzee turn this OS into a TS pleeeaz...i really want more of it...i literally felt bad whn it ended coz i wanted to read more...plz plz plz write some more of it...pleeeaz...is choto say baby ki baat maan lo*puppy eyes*n*pouts*
Plz do give it a thought!...hoping for a Yes...fingers crossed😳
Love yaa...gazillions a 🤗 for u😃



Take Care!
Sunain❤️
Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Sunain

CASI!!!!🤗
[B]O
to the M effing G!!!...(squeals of joy😳)
God...tht was Hell Aaamaazing👏
Totally spellbound...n mesmerised by ur talent😳
Wht a Master Piece u gifted us...Thanks a ton for such a lovely piece...u nailed it indeed⭐️
Totally a different concept n an alluring one...i Loved it![L[ Loved it!❤️ Loved it!❤️
Beeeautifully Penned!!
I read it midnite n to me it seemed as if u were here beside me narrating me this whole tale just like a bedtime story..literally i imagined it n it was so cute😳
Tbh i thought tht the knight was a prince but it turned out to be a princess..
woah...tht climax part was Fantabulous...u did a tremendous job dear...hats off to u👏
I Loved it to core❤️
i so wish to read wht happened ahead...how thy became friends...how the commenced their relationship...the "Thy happily lived after" part...i so want to read tht too
Caaasssiii...u r sooo sweet u r my pumkin na...cutoo dutoo na*puppy eyes*...Casi Puuleeezzzee turn this OS into a TS pleeeaz...i really want more of it...i literally felt bad whn it ended coz i wanted to read more...plz plz plz write some more of it...pleeeaz...is choto say baby ki baat maan lo*puppy eyes*n*pouts*
Plz do give it a thought!...hoping for a Yes...fingers crossed😳
Love yaa...gazillions a 🤗 for u😃



Take Care!
Sunain❤️



Sunain!

Yaar you just keep amazing me with your comments 😃
Each one is just like a pre workout drink 😉

I'm glad you ❤️ it!! 😳

Bud no!! Don't do that OK? I can't write anything else on this...I don't know its beauty and soul would be somehow diluted... I don't know why I feel that but I did try to write ahead but just couldn't...

And your name is so apt...Laalchi! 😆 😛

And BTW

When are you going to update your story huh?! 🥱
Do that soon OK?! I'm waiting..

And all the hugs right back to you Bud 🤗

Till next time

Love
Cas ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Castile2



Sunain!

Yaar you just keep amazing me with your comments 😃
Each one is just like a pre workout drink 😉

Aww...Thank u...thts so shweet of u😳
I'm glad you ❤️ it!! 😳

Bud no!! Don't do that OK? I can't write anything else on this...I don't know its beauty and soul would be somehow diluted... I don't know why I feel that but I did try to write ahead but just couldn't...
(my narrow eyes staring at you)
Madam iskay baray mein i'll pm u dont worry...just be prepared!😃(admant grin)😉

And your name is so apt...Laalchi! 😆 😛

N m 0% ashamed of it😃😛...suits me😳

And BTW

When are you going to update your story huh?! 🥱
Do that soon OK?! I'm waiting..

M so sorry...tbh i planned to prepare n post it by this week but some bombshells bombarded on me..will tell u in pm[:/]

And all the hugs right back to you Bud 🤗

Aww..inay saray huggies...love ya😳

Till next time

Love
Cas ❤️


@Bold M so glad to knw tht u like my comments so much...Thanks 😳
Love ya too...❤️
N han...u'll get ur pm by tomorrow afternoon!
Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago

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