ShraMan OS~ Fairy Tale - Page 2

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Amazing fairy tale for shraman...I seriously thought that the knight was shravan but totally loved this twist of suman rescuing shravan.. Well written... Thanks for pm

Hehehehe I am just glad you loved my little twist in this fairy tale... 😳

Thanks for your comment!

Cas 😊

Originally posted by: Wiccamaya

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Oh man!

I'm having a fan girl moment here!! 😳

I love your ShraMan works and you liking and commenting on my story is like...woah!!

Thanks again

Cas 😊

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

This was so amazing and equally filled with suspense I thought that sumo was the caged soul and shravan the knight. ...typical Hindustan dimag ladka ladki ko save karega😳but this was really good.

Keep writting

Love

Arpita

Haina?!

That's our first thought always...the guy saving the girl! 😆

I'm happy that despite my atypical plot you loved it!

Cas 😊

Originally posted by: Crazypiya

Oh my god so nice.. I read tge story to my little prince... And he asked mumma i can have one more story...
So plzz do write mire and more...
Loved it

interesting. ...
...for a while I thought knight is Shravan
...but loved the twist..
.. thanx for PM😊

Originally posted by: arshuaar

interesting. ...
...for a while I thought knight is Shravan
...but loved the twist..
.. thanx for PM😊

I'm glad you loved the 'twist'!

Thanks

Cas

cas thanks dear for the pm and adding me to ur buddy list sweety :). now about the chapter, it was so beautiful..I've read many shraman OS's, but I must say never read like this before.. the concept was totally different.. I felt as if I'm watching beauty and the beast and as if everything's happening in front of my eyes.. the part which I love the most was when she looked through his eyes.. n the line, eyes are the way to look inside ur soul.. how she saw his past, everything n how they were lost in each other.. the intro part was love my dear.. they were so lost that didn't even care what's happening around.. n what would be happening in future, well we don't need to think ;), as we already know :-p the way you portrayed, everything, was beautiful..n the language, English, sweety it was beautifully written n language was perfect.. amazing concept.. beautifully written.. loved it.. keep writing beautiful OS's n don't forget to send me pm's dear ;) ..love ya..

Res 😊
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Hey Cas...
Gosh!!!...a fairly tale on ShraMan..
TBH when i read few lines , i thought its a normal fairy tale in which Shravan will be the Prince n sumo will be the Princess n Shravan will save her in d end...BUT!!
U just totally changed the whole thing...Sumo -the knight n Shravan- the prince in form of a dragon!!!...Fantastic idea!! 👏
Love love loved it dear... 😊
Unique Concept dear!!
Do write more...
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nik

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

cas thanks dear for the pm and adding me to ur buddy list sweety :).now about the chapter, it was so beautiful..I've read many shraman OS's, but I must say never read like this before..the concept was totally different.. I felt as if I'm watching beauty and the beast and as if everything's happening in front of my eyes..the part which I love the most was when she looked through his eyes.. n the line, eyes are the way to look inside ur soul..how she saw his past, everything n how they were lost in each other..the intro part was love my dear.. they were so lost that didn't even care what's happening around..n what would be happening in future, well we don't need to think ;), as we already know :-p the way you portrayed, everything, was beautiful..n the language, English, sweety it was beautifully written n language was perfect..amazing concept.. beautifully written.. loved it.. keep writing beautiful OS's n don't forget to send me pm's dear ;) ..love ya..

Hey Anju

Just when I thought the OS didn't work, you came with your beautiful comment!

Thank you man...this is a huge compliment really. I wanted to read a classic fairy tale take on ShraMan but never saw anything coming up... So I decided to write one myself.

I never had a doubt regarding ShraMan's tale having a potential to be one of the most novel fairy tales but the magic was lost somewhere in between...

But for a classic take on our most favorite couple, I never had a doubt that it had always been Suman who was destined to save Shravan and not the other way around.

So I just wrote it down...

I am so happy that you guys appreciated the effort that I put in this one!

It means so much, thanks again Anju.

Love

Cas 😊

Something really different and different is good, I loved the descriptions be it the dragon's, Suman's or Shravan's and the end was cute I could imagine them staring at each other.
Keep writing !