Updated - Bringing Shravan Back- A Shraman OS - Part 4 - Page 2

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

hey Pisces (since don't know ur name ;) ) I'm anju ...read all three in one go...n I must say amazing dear...how they were finally started mending their relation...n him calling her sumo is the best thing ...I always hated whenever he called her suman as if calling some stranger... n about the company, well true yeah...who better could accompany him rather than his best friend, his one n only love, his wife...n how could she resist her one n only love n husband n best friend...God that truck driver...I mean like are they really blind?? the way they drive...their license should be banned... shraman in hospital...my heart clenched at that moment ...n felt relief when finally they got discharged...when shravu saw sumo in shock when she was doing his arti, n then the way he looked at nirmu, I'd got an inkling kahin some part of his brain has got injured n memory loss to ni hua n he'll yeah I was right... nirmu ka dialog I felt pity for her...glad ramu consoled her... n in shraman ka room the way shravu talked to sumo, stunned n heartbroken she was...n finally amnesia...God wish shravu gets well soon completely... sumo had to at least idea to get back to shravu but nirmu :( loved the way sumo confessed her love for him...n their kiss...hay m blushing :-p n then she started reminding him some stories ...good going sumo...n how pushkie said bhabhi...hehe fr to situation in control ho gya... n then shraman talk next level...sumo was like kya n I wont lie I too was thinking wat sumo was thinking ;) but this man never fails to surprise me...marriage...maza ayga ...n how he said pct jao kam ni h kya ...lol...n the way he proposed her God touching n beautiful...blue n silver anarkali ...she must be looking ethereal ...reminded me of part 44 :-p dear I've a request...why don't you turn it into a ff? ? wanna see their marriage, honeymoon, bickering, care, love for each other...loved all parts...ur writing next part na? ? pls write n update soon sweety...eagerly waiting...; :) sending u a buddy, if u send pm's please do send me a pm when u update next part...love u my dear...a big hug for u...keep writing...don't resist urself when it comes to shraman :-p can u please tell me the name of os you wrote before?? pretty long comment...my apologies...my comments are like this...just can't control myself when it comes to shraman ;) waiting for next update...:) love, anju ...

Originally posted by: pisces17

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Thank you Anju for your beautiful post. My name is Chitra. I am a first time writer just trying my hand writing about our favourite jodi because I miss them very much. I stalk IF for any new stories/posts about EDKV and find comfort in that. I shall update the next part soon...i am writing it now.

Thank you very much once again for your kind words. I give below the link of my earlier OS - let me tell you...it is a very short one😛

Sumo: Did I ditch him - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4742822

hey chitra ...my God I didn't feel like ur writing for the first time...ur just amazing dear...keep writing on shraman...I understand as i miss them badly too...but u amazing writers have kept me alive ;)
ur most welcome dear...will read ur os now...doesn't matter if its short, I know it'll be amazing...love ya :) thanks for the reply :-)

read part 4 ...again it was amazing...shraman kiss...vo bhi passionate one ...wow "blushing" ;) n then sumo the wrestler to sump the shy...nice conversion...:-p n then he said like last time suddenly...its his brain that is showing flashbacks of memories...good sign it is...n in morning nanu's reaction...I too was like wats wrong with him?? but ah its just formality...n 10 days later..poor shravu already married...but doesn't know...n will have to wait 10 days. ...lol...n yeah it reminded me of episode 58 how nirmu was trying to see shravu for once at least..aha emotional scene it was...n sumo ni bhabhi...amazing kamu ...n shravu remembering convo was again good sign...glad that sumo chided that kabab me haddi , intolerable adi ...I hate him ..:-\ n then dance pics..glad preekar took control of situation... amazing it was dear :) waiting for next update...loved it...love ya sweety :)