The Wait: A ShraMan SS (Epilogue pg.13)COMPLETED - Page 2

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Hello Anu

I'm Cas 😊

This was so good!

I smiled at Sumo-Shriya's convo!
It was sweet! 😳

But then I became a bit apprehensive when I realized that Shravan was not with them! 😕

But re-joiced again realizing he was 'with' them! Just not with them?! Around them? Urrgh!! 🥱

I'm babbling!

Chuck that! 😆

Same smile same pout!

Our darling Pushkar that we lost is back! Loved his part!!

Now I can not Wait at all to know what happens next!! 😃

Update soonish OK?!


And...

Shravan hasnt met his daughter?! 😲

Does he know about her?! 😕

Cas

Hello dear. Nice start. Curious about shravan character.as always PUSHKAR is a cutie pie.and the best part was Shriya.

very beautifully written dear...😊

Thank You soo much everyone for your comments..really made me feel happy..sorry couldn't reply to all your comments...so here comes your most awaited part 2

The Wait: A ShraMan TS(part 2)

'Chal, aab tu khushiya mana..Mai soone jaa raha hoo...Aur kal subhe saare family members ko yeh khush khabar de dena'' Pushkar smiled and went to his room.

Suman sat on the bed, smiling...Her shravan, her love of life was coming back after the long 5 years ...

**flashback**

Everyone in the house was happy..and why shouldn't be they?? A little tot was soon going to be in their midst..

'Sumo ye kya kar rahi ho tum..Doctor ne kaha hai na..Koi kaam nahi..Sirf rest''

'par Shravan sirf kapde he toh fold kar rahi hu..Isme kaunsi badi baat hai??''Sumo said, with a small pout.

The day when Shravan got to know that Suman was pregnant, he didn't let her do any work.

'Shodoye sab aur chalo mere saath..tumhe kuch dikhana hai...''He took her to a small room where she was prohibited to go from the past 4 months.

'Shravan ye...''Suman was totally amazed...

They stood near the entrance of a room which was illuminated by small pink and white lights...with a small bed and a cute little swing .On the wall hung a big frame having shraman standing in a garden, Suman and Shravan had their hand on sumo's belly and shravan kissing her forehead.It was taken by Pushkar..Who was turned a photographer on Shravan's saying. Next was a small mural hanging having many frames in it where every small happiness of their life stood independent...their childhood pictures, the day when Shravan proposed Sumo, their marriage day, their honeymoon picture...the pictures of the moments they wanted to cherish, pictures of small babies...and some empty photo frames too...The walls were painted in Lavender and pink..It had a small cream coloured cradle too...

'Shravan ye photo frames empty kyun hai??''

'Kyunki vaha par hamare baby ke pictures honge..''Shravan said, resting is hands on sumo's belly and chin atop her head..

'Kiasa laga??''

Sumo was overwhelmed with joy..She had no words to say..

Shravan turned her around

'Kya hua Sumo ? Roo Kyun Rahi ho??''

'Kuch nahi...bas ye soch rahi hu ke tum mujhse itna pyaar kyun karte ho??''

Shravan laughed at her question cum answer..

'Pagli, aapne baache ke baap se pooch rahi ho ke mujhse pyaar kyun karte ho?? Deko sumo, mai nahi jaanta ke mai tumse itna pyaar kyun karta hu par ye jaroor jaanta hu ke jab tum mere saath hoti ho tab lagta hai ke zindagi mei kuch galat ho hi nahi sakta...jab tumhe dekhta ho tab dil ko sukoon aur rooh ko karrar aagaya hai...tum meri life complete karti ho aur aab karbhi chuki ho...''Shravan smiled and kissed her belly.

Sumo wiped her tears and hugged Shravan...

'I Love You Shravan..''

'I Love you too Sumo... .''

**flashback ends**

Sumo is awakwed by the thumps on her room door..

'Mumma darwaza khola na...''

Sumo opens the door..All the family members are waiting for her..

'kay hua Maa? Sab theek to ha na??''

'Wahi toh..Jiji aakhir baat kya hai??Apne itne jaldi kyun bulaya..batao na...''Pouted an overexcited Kamini...

'haan Nirmala ab baata bhi do..''Ramnath urged her to say.

Nirmala came near her and said 'Haan Suman sab theek hai. Hame Pushkar ne abhi abhi bataya ke Shravan ka call aaya tha aur woh jaldi hi aa raha hai..mai ye khush kahbar tujhe sab se pahele batana chahatithi...''

'Par maa mujhe toh pata hai..Pushkar ne kal raat ko hi baataya tha...''

'Sach me dadi...Papa jaldi sey aayenge na??''

Lifting Shriya'' Haan baccha Papa bas aa he rahe hai'' Nirmala pecked her granddaughter's cheek.

'Yee..aab me aur papa milkar chachu ke saath masti karenge...''

Everyone laughed..

'Chalo Chalo Aab isi baat par kuch meetha ho jaye..Haai na Mummyjee..''said Vandy, who came out of the kitchen, with a tray having bowls of Gulabjamun...

'Haan Puttarji..ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai...Bhai aapna munda 5 saal baad desh ko baachake, khatro se ladkar waapas aa raha hai...Bhaisaab mei keh raha hun...Jab shravan aayega tab ek Grand party hogi manhotro and family se..Kyun Suman??''

'Ji Lalaji..Bilkul theek..Pushkar Shravan ne tujhe baataya ke woh exact ka baa raha hai??''

'Nahi Sumo..Bhaiyaa ne bas yahi kaha ke choote sab ko bata dena ke main do-teen din me vaapas aa raha hu..''

'Ajeeb banda hai..bada border par desh ko serve karta hai lekin ek message thik se dilever nahi kar sakta..''Suman murmured unaware that Shriya heard it.

'Mumma please papa ko kuch mat kaho...jaldi jaldi mei batana bhool gaye honge..''Shriya pouted.

Ramnath picked her up,''Aacha je...aap abhi se he papa ki side lene lage??''

'Ha dadu...Mumma hamesha kehti hai ke mei bilkul papa ki tarah hu..toh mai unhiki side lungi na??''

Everyone laughed...

Suman thought''Jab Shravan Shriya ko Dekhega toh kitna khush hoga...''

So how was it...Hope u liked...Tomatoes and chappals are most welcome...par dheere se ha...as u kno..Mai bohot nazuk hu...😳

Note-This Two Shot has now turned into a Three Shot...😊U kno when I start typing my fingers just don't stop...😃

P.S- agla update jara late hoga because mere Exams parso se Shuru ho rahe hai...

P.P.S= The ones who guessed about Shravan's Character😊...Bhai waah..kya dimag hai...par ha agli story guess mat karna ha..warna maza nahi aayega...😉

Love, ANU

Res
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Unres

Hiii...
Me first again... 😃
tum buhat nazok ho 🤣
wel coming to the update...
Tht was phenomenal..really loved it
tht flashback was❤️
Tht room held their every memory every moment moreover Shravan designed it for his kidoo..awwhh.
Tht was really heart warming...imagining Shraman as parents is lovely
Thn his dialogue "pagali..apnay bachay kay baap say pooch rahi ho k..."
Sorry cudnt rite it completly...but loved it the most was really heart touching..
Shriya is a cutoo janoo...she cudnt hear a single word against her Dad..awwh 😆
Sach mein jab Shravan ussy dekhay ga tu kitna kush ho ga...
his happiness wud hav no boundries...
All in all loved it..
Was beautifully penned.
Wil be waiting for nxt upii...
Anu love u dear🤗
N Best of Luck for ur Exams!!!

Wow...cute shreya !!! nice update. really shreya-shravan meeting would be heartwarming. shravan loved his daughter before meeting her, and did so many things. how eagerly he might be waiting for her. he missed all important moments of his child. (of course this really happens to all our soldiers)

Room...how cute was that...

Amazing update... flashback is really cute... waiting for next update...