Shraman ff- Destined - thread 1 - Page 90

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Bunnyyy

Omg!! Zyada late to nahi ho gayi??? *apologetic eyes* thodi busy thi sorry

And what was that???

Nahi nahi nahiii *dramatic breaking of bangles and crying bitterly*

Ye tune kya kiya??? Mere shravan ko kya se kya bana diya??

Sumo would be like...kya se kya ho gaya bewafa aa aa (okay sorry aj thoda zyada hi drama ho gaya🤣)

And you seriously got me like

My poor innocent hearr kese jhelega vo is tedhe shravan ko😭

But all in all teko pata h you are the best👏👏

Awesome write up girl

Love ya bohot sara

And you better update early this time warna tu the real gundi ko dekhegi *loads gun already *🤣

Chal enough of my melodrama

GUNDI😎

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

Dollyyy...

Finallyyy... I was really waiting for you to comment... See neend se jagke tera comment pad rahi hoon... Really happy that you liked it... Your appreciation means the most.. And of course love you bahut sara... Will try to update.. Real soon..

Originally posted by: Sunain

Ressi res😃

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Unres

Juju!!!🤗

Sowii for being this late😳...Mafii day doo..*puppy eyes*

Hmmpghhh it's okay...

Coming to the upii...

Achay tu madam mein ap ko batna chahon gi k apnay meray leay acha sa package taiyaar kar k rakha tha...not the beauty one but the scary one...jis mein

1.Pheley tu nervousness kay keeray nay kaata

2.Phir slowly slowly electrocute kiya

3.Thn zoor ka heart attack dea...mein nay ussy bhi survive kar lea tu..

4.Lastly ap nay emotinal break down day dea!

Sab drama queen kyun bante jaa rahe hai... Ek Dolly kam thi! (sigh)

So this is wht has been happening with me through out my reading!...literally being shocked amazed or astonished would be a tenous word i was beyond tht!

😆😆...#Dramaqueen #nautankimaster 😆😆

True.. 😆

Now being serious...

WHT AN UPDATE!...Was genuienly Mindblowing!👏

The twist u added in ur story is beyond tremendous u just made me fall for ur story all over again and update by update ur FF is just getiing more and more engaging and just captivating me.

Hats off bea for such a Master Piece!

I enjoyed loved felt it to core!❤️

So so Stupendously Penned!👏

Just amazed me with ur talent!⭐️

Thank you... But you are making me blush..

Wht the hell Shravan has turned into...donno tht but surly knw tht his love by now has turned into an obsessesion and by hook or crook he just needs his Sumo...all for himself and he succeed in tht...he owned her not won her..its like he forced her into this relationship which will lead their mairrge to no where any time soon.He just succeded to clain he his but wud have a hard time in making her his and winning her love and trust back.

Let's see what will Sumo do...

I was feeling bad for him at first whn she confessed tht shez gonna marry Aditya...this creep is ruling top ont he list of my muders to be done.Galay ki haddi ban gaya hai ya😡

Haha..

But thn the way Shravan reacted to all of this...hell shocked😲...to some extent its not his fault too as its the second time something like this is happening with him but the differnce is tis time he truly and insanly is in love with her and doznt wanna lose her.

M so curious to knw how'll she treat their mairrage and wht wud she do to punish him as the way she boldly told him tht he is cracking a deal instead of getting married.

its so intruging m so into this story tht i demand for a nxt part rite away...plz plz plz do update soon as i really cant wait to read whts gonna happen nxt how'll everyone Nanu aditya pushkar...everyone is gonna react to their wedding decision...hell excited to knw tht!😃

The ending made me more curious as he himself was hurting doing such a cheap thing blackmailing her..coz his tears are telling me this...well i'll wait to knw it by you...as rite now m feeling sorry for both of thm.

Juju...hell brilliantly penned!...tumhari story tu asmaan ki bulandiyon ko choh rahi hai😃😉

Really..i loved it a lot!

Trillions of hugs and kisses for u dear!

Love you🤗

Awww thank you so much...

Take Care!

Sunain❤️