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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1111

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
good...

Thank you so much!!

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1112

Originally posted by: vimikrao
When it was so fun writing why it is so small chap, 😲 ok u r broken u r hand so it's OK. Take care of yourself. 😉

Thank you! Will try to write next part longer!!

I thought Shravan would be broken as per Pushkar but he wasn't, he was fully prepared to get back Sumo in his company as PA. 😉 she has to be with him whole day in the office in front of him, what will happen between them kya hoga Shravan khullam khulla flirt karega apni biwi cum PA ke saat aur kya. 😆 😉 poor Sumo buri tarah fas gayi. 😉 Sumo 30*40'' black & white in his cabin, yeh ladka such mein death of her. 😆 Ab biwi har waqt saat hogi aut photo bhi. 😆

Shravan is broken, but he is Shravan, he will never flaunt his hurt!! Biwi to gayi!!!

Let's see how many days she will keep herself away from him.

Let's see!!

Beautiful update dear Sanjh. 👏

Thank you so much!!!

Thanks for PM
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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1113

working together again

awesome news

loved it

continue soon

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sweksha

@sweksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1114

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

Thank you so much Sweksha!!! Abhi dekho sumo ka Kya haal hota Hai!!!!😉

baby Mujhe to bechare hum sab ke pyaare aditya ki chinta ho rahi Hai...ghar waali ko body ka ekaadh part bhi mila Yaa Nhi...and you didn't answer about my offer for shravan's PA...

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1115

Hey Sanjh,

What happened to you?? I thought you said Viral Fever, but now using one hand. Let me know if possible. Praying for you, hope you feel better soon.😊

Coming to the update, it was suberb!!! I love this Destined Reloaded. They are back to square one, but can't resist each other. I think it's matter of time when Sumo will soon realize and understand Shravan's POV and forgive him. He will definitely make it hard for her to ignore him and concentrate on work. Hope that happens soon. Love where your story is headed.👏

Take care and update once you start feeling better. Love you❤️

Congratulations on 150 pages!!!

Lubna.

Edited by LubSha - 8 years ago

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1116

Originally posted by: sweksha
baby Mujhe to bechare hum sab ke pyaare aditya ki chinta ho rahi Hai...ghar waali ko body ka ekaadh part bhi mila Yaa Nhi...and you didn't answer about my offer for shravan's PA...

Milega milega Pura ka Pura Aditya milega!! Par kaise woh alag baat Hai!!!😆

We all want to be his PA, darling!! But still will forward your resume to him!!😉

Edited by Itssanjh - 8 years ago

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Joyness

@Joyness

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1117

Awesome update..loved it...so now the fun begins

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Amisha.r

@Amisha.r

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1118

Originally posted by: Itssanjh



Yeah, abhi to sach mein, may his soul rest in peace!!! You will get to know in next chapter!!!

waiting...

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Sunain

@Sunain

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1119

Ressi res!😕

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Unres

Cuddles!!!!🤗

dekho mein aa gae...woh bhi post ki jal jnay say phlay😛😆

waisy i noticed ki mein last two upiiz say missing hon yahan...Oppsie...😕

chalo without any further ado..here i begin with my chitar pitar..😛😆

CHAPTER 22 (PART I)

Shravan n Sumo were finally going to patch up...n this fiasco ruined it all!

Its all so messed up..kon aya kis nay Sumo ko "partially" kidnap kiya n told her about some accident...all planed!

CCTV fotage bhi nhi...Master Plan!

I can so imagine his predicament tht very moment..his Sumo missing n all he is raw handed..

OUCH!!!

Ab yeh accident ka kya kissa hai..Woah Cuddles jab lagta hai gari patri par anay lagi hai tum tu ussy patri say milon dor hi lay jati ho..😆😆

Hell hell intriguing!

Uff...u wrote it really brilliantly!👏👏

U have a talent of holding/capturing everyones attention and intriguing us to core...Loved it!⭐️

CHAPTER 22(PART II)

OMG!!!

Shravan knew it n wanted to tell her...

Suman is leaving...Holy Sh**...this really is worse thn bad😕😲

WHT!!???...

Sumo's parents accident happened coz of his Company's truck or something...

Malhotra's tried to supress the case n thts wht hurting her...tht her parents didnt got justice..?

OMG!!!...Aditya!!!😡

n the things he told to Shravan just pissede me to core..pata nhi Shravan nay kaisay bardasht kar lea😲

omg!..Thy had an ugly fight!😕😕

Is Aditiya ki tu mein...🤬

trust me throughout my read either i was gasping or my mouth wud be like touching the floor😲😲..like srsly...WOAH MAN!!!

WHT THE HELL IS GING ON!!!???

SHRAVAN!!!😲...wht hez doing..omg!omg!mog!...no this cant happen...hez actually blackmailing her...😕😕

omg!...i sowas rite about him😃... hez so sweet...i feel so bad for thm...Sumo apnay gussay ki wajah say kuch dekh hi nhi paa rhi...dekh hi nhi paa rhi k Shravan kitna sincere hai uska sath...how much he loves her how much he cares for her...how much he adores her...there is no way he can hurt her...he cant even think of hurting her in his wildest dreams...

this all is coz of tht bas***d Aditiya!😡🤬

Oye this wasnt a oring one AT ALL!!!

I was so intrigued through out my reading i srsly enjoyed it!⭐️

Ohh Cuddles u really are a Fantastic Writer and m so in loe with this FF of urs...Hell amazing!..indeed!👏👏👏

Cant wait to knw wht Shravan is going to do with Aditaya...Paka zinda garay ga ussy!..n i so want tht!😡😈

CHAPTER 23

OMG!OMG!OMG!😃

I so so so love it!

Cuddles!Cuddles!Cuddles!...Woah...!

mein kya bolon m so speechless...Infact its Shravan who made me😳

Hez gonna be death of mine...for sure!😛😆

Ohh i so loved it i really cant express in words how much i enjoyed reading it and how amazing it was..infact beyond amazing!👏👏👏

Pushkar-Sumo convo was well brilliantly Penned!

Pushkar had a point which she cant see rite now but eventually will understand as her mind is clouded with anger and shock!

Shravan let her free means Aditiya ki tu paka arthi uth hi gaae..par asal mein hoa kya..i so badly wanna knw ki kaisay Shravan ny uski class li😛😆

N pushkar also knws..Sumo tu hell confused😆

Oh it was hell fun to read tht part!⭐️

CONTRACT!!!..WOAH!!!...this is gona be so much fun!👏😃

Seems like someone is planning to win someones heart again!😳😉

Shravannn...so love this hotie❤️

Awwwh..her patriot...so beautiful!❤️

Suman's reaction towards it was lovely!😳

U knw when i was reading their office scene..mjhy Christian & Ana wali feels aa rhi thi..😛..just imagine Shravan turning all Grey!☺️😆

Cuddles ur FF is out class!⭐️

Really u are nailing it to core!👏

Lots n lots of hugs for you!🤗

Hoping for a soon update😉