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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

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Posted: 8 years ago

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OMG.

YOU BE THE BEST!

This is utter utter fitness and a mind blowing peace.

So unique and so beautifully written.Cannot even explain how I felt after reading it *_*

Girl,you got some creativity and magic with words.It was the most adorable stuff I have ever read.

You made me smile and laugh hard.

So Neil Malhotra is officially a patatao sorry he is a gobi 😆

The raining in pants,he venting about elders, getting possessive about his dad,flirting with Singh's daughter and all that he feels were so so good.

Bookmarking this already now.

My favorite part is this

""What have you decided to name him aloo?" What the... Who is this aloo? The same creepy vegetable after eating nanu spends hours in the washroom? But why the hell is my dad smiling? Ohhkkay he is aloo?! And he is going to name me? What the...? He seriously cannot give me any stupid name like gobi... c'mon man I gotta make a reputation among girls, what will I introduce myself as? Gobi Aloo Malhotra? Yaar ye log lawyers hai ya sabzi bechne wale?"

My god,I laughed so hard here,you got me scolding from my family.This is way to hilarious and just mere words bring that magic.

Okay Okay! I want you to write more and more on them,if possible.Please *grins*

Thanks for the PM.

-Mitali

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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Well!

I love kids!

ShraMan kids are major feels!

Can't wait!

Do PM me please😛

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Castile2

@Castile2

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Posted: 8 years ago

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ShraMan kids
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Unress
I DID NOT expect this when you said ShraMan kids!! 😆
This was beyond hilarious!! 🤪
And shoo cute!
Nurses gawking and fawning at Shravan rather than his cute little one is a given! 😛
Now now...this little one has got quite an attitude huh? 😎
But ain't that expected of Swagster Malhotra's Fawn?! 😉
DND 🤣
That cracked me up! 😆
Shravan is 'aloo'?! 😲
And the brats already worried about his reputation among girls!! ⭐️
Way to go buddy! 👏
Gobi Aloo Malhotra doesn't sound half bad! 🤣
'Yaar ye log lawyers hai ya sabzi bechne wale?' 😆
Sahi pakde hai!! 😛
Chalk finally in sab Malhotra lalloo's ke beech ek samajdar banda aaya!! 😉
Boy only your Mum has brains in that family! 😎
'...evolution of the aloos in Malhotra family' 🤣
There is gonna be a lot of Tashan between the Father-Son duo! 😎
Sister?! This soon?! 😳
And no Niel! Its not that easy to bring babies in this world!! 😛

All in all, as much as you enjoyed writing this piece, I absolutely enjoyed reading this one! 😃
I had never imagined a scenario from this perspective!!
And this was amazingly presented! 👏

Do write more and keep ShraMan alive through your work!

Love
Cas ❤️

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lavanya

@amlavs

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Posted: 8 years ago

Res...

Excited..plz update soon..

--unres--

Wow...it's amazing...

I loved it very much..

So he is Neil Shravan Malhothra...

Poor baby boy...he is crying a lot to gain his parents attention where they are busy romancing...

Thx for pm..plz do write more stuffs like this...

LavSriya

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_anukulgr8

@_anukulgr8

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Posted: 8 years ago

Res...Update soonish...Excited😃

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.khaleesi.

@.khaleesi.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Yaar res dekhle dil toot gaya 😭
Please jaldi likho par mai aaram se padhungi... 🤣
For now fiction reading is on hiatus!!
Do PM plzz!

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pal655

@pal655

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Posted: 8 years ago

Res. Shraman kids . Wow. Pls unres soon and pm me

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Sunain

@Sunain

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Posted: 8 years ago

Ressi res...
Shraman n threir Kiddoz [:D/]
*****
Unres

Woah Man!!!!
tht was superb...stupendously written 👏
Bestest one indeed 👍🏼
It was damn hillarious n way much Fun to read..loved n enjoyed to core.
ending was really cute..
kiddoz antics..his views..his idealogies..damn amazing...4G kiddo i must say...ajj ki generation[😆
The naming part was fantastic...allu gobi..😆
All in all i loved it as a whole...really u nailed it killed it subkuch it😳
love yaa for this lovely upii🤗

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_anukulgr8

@_anukulgr8

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Posted: 8 years ago

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UNRES...Aww...that was sho sho cute..i was just smiling like a idiot throughout the OS n mah family was glaring at me like... "You typical lady dressed in surf excel washed clothes"🤣Awesome..."Gobi Aloo Malhotra"🤣🤣MG...just cant control my laugh...the OS was just |Fab...no words...do write more fluff like this...

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