Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144

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dhanyata

@dhanyata

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Posted: 8 years ago

#401

you must be professional script writer. Sumo's proposal was shravan's dream !!! Oh my Gosh...never expected it yaar...Its really hard to point out any particular part as my favorite...then I have to re-write your entire update in my words 😉 But starting from that shravan was dreaming and sumo is yet to propose, till that shravan proposed sumo for marriage, I liked every single bit.

Every update is ending with either one of their's love proposal or marriage proposal huh !!?😆 either it becomes a dream or no answer from the other...so its a beautiful romantic vacation for them in sydney.

Naturally u explained sumo's health problems 👏 Shravan is so caring...

Sumo still not having shravan's ph number...ohoo...

How someone or other are walking in midnight to disturb the couple...not really...they are bringing them even closer😳

Shravan's 3 baatein...and sumo's 2 baatein are adorable. Sumo gave permission to enter without knocking...good sign...

Nick names are cute...bewakoof, jalkukdiii...😆

Adi kicked shravan out of his room,,,,but he got chance to spend time with sumo...their moments are sooo lovely...Entirely Great imaginations...

kaala teeka for you...nazar na lage...aapko...😃

Please take care of your health..thanks for the pm...

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

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Posted: 8 years ago

#402

Perfect package ...jealousy...romance...care...cuteness...hotness... with multiple aww moments ! !

Super se upar !

Waitinggg for more... khadoos n bewakoof jalkukdi make a perfect pair!

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sumi017

@sumi017

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Posted: 8 years ago

#403

Oh piya...kitne baar thank you bulvavoogi... Was kidding...it was awesome... Don't have words to describe my happiness after reading your updates. Actually it helps to reinvent shraman(nimik) in a new way. I have already told i prefer s2 badly on this story. Pls continue...

Waiting for more and more updatesupdates

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#404

First Piya how r doing now... Get well soon...

Ok coming to the chap...

Its an extra ordinary ... Incredible. ... I m just speechless...

Shravan is so innocent... Date kounsa date mein toh ek seeda saada vakeel hoon... Date... Woh ladkiyon wala date shit!!!!

Sumo was embarrassed that he couldn't meet his eyes... He lift her in his arms & dropped ber infront of her room... He is so cute... Aisa boyfriend agar sab ko mil jaye toh life kitni achchi hogi...

Shravan is so caring brought medicine for her... Hot bag...

& last sleeping one upon the other under the duvet... Finally Shravan kissed Sumo oh God... Every time he was trying hard to control himself... But this time he couldn't control... So romantic chap... Shravan's happiness has no bound when he said I just love Sydney... Jab se yahan aya hoon... Had raat tum meri bahomein ho... Such mein acha lag tha hai... Yeh dono saat mein hai toh...

Update soon

Thank u for PM

Sorry dear two time Posted Internet some time doesn't work properly...

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#405

First how r u doing now... Get well soon Piya...

Our Shravan is so Innocent... Date kiska date... Kounsa date woh wala date... Ladkiyon wala date ... Shit!!!

Sumo is so embarrassing that he couldn't raise her eyes... But he took her in his arms & dropped her in her room... So caring... Brought medicine for her... Hot bag for pain...

Both r lying on the floor one upon tbe other under duvet... Feeling each others body... So finally Shravan kissed Sumo... Bechara aur kitna control kartha... Feeling her body under touch that she didn't wear anything under her T-shirt...

Shravan's happiness has no bound when he said I just love Sydney... Jab se yahan aaya hoon har raat tum meri bahon mein ho... Such hi toh hai... Kuch na kuch aisa ho jaatha hai both endend up in one another arms almost daily... So cute it is...

Update soon

Thanx for the PM dear

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trayee biswas

@trayee

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Posted: 8 years ago

#406

no comments pls...its again a masterpiece...all i can say is thanks priya fr this...& do update soon...loved shravan's each naughtyness & sunan's every shyness...bliss...i want it more...

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Lubna

@LubnaK786

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#407

Hi Piya,

Just awesome, loved every bit of it. I really like the way you write, its simple, relatable and believable. also the way you potray all your characters, making every character's presence felt. loved the way Adi said "ye ehsaan ek din zaroor chukaoonga". its good Adi is busy with Daphne.

The end was just awesome again. Very beautiful moments between ShraMan. And the proposal "Shaadi Karle". Nothing can be better than that. Another cliffhanger!!!!

Really hope you are feeling better. Can't wait for the next update. Update sooon...

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mariajamal

@mariajamal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#408

wow amazing...

and get well soon

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Reeba shukla

@ReebaS

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Posted: 8 years ago

#409

Crazypiya baby you make me crazy by your writing skills.. Amazing update what a beginning and what a wonderful end... I must say I LOVE SYDNEY bcz its make shraman together.. Plz update the next part asap I am waiting

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anonymousanju

@anonymousanju

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Posted: 8 years ago

#410

piya how are you now dear?? please take care...apna khayal rkhna...don't get sick again :(

couldn't resist myself from reading it...just thought to check forum once n found ur update pm n was on cloud 9 :-p over excited u know...;)

wont analyse this time...but would must say wooowww it was...shraman moments loved it completely...n finally shraman kiss whoa m blushing ;)

keep sending pm's dear...thanks a lot for pm...take care please...will analyse once I get free with my exams next month after 13 :) much love, take care...love u :*

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