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Diya

@Sonai_02

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Posted: 8 years ago

#891

OMG Khurrana back ?

And only the last chapter left !!

It's raining sad news !!

I'm afraid that this story will have a tragic end.

I just wish that my assumptions are wrong.

But whatever be it, I'm more than just excited to know.

I love this story, Lara.

This chapter is so amazing.

Not a single dialogue could be loved individually when the whole of it is so beautifully penned.

Update soon dear. Plzzz !!!

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Safire

@Safire

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#892

Nice update Lara!!

But you are going to end this so soon😭

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Ranified009

@Ranified009

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Posted: 8 years ago

#893

Hello Lara, all the parts were amazing, such a rich vocab u have there dear. Eager for the final one.

All that begins has to end, but what about new beginnings...

Cheers!!

-Pradipta

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imshveta

@imshveta

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#894

It was as always beautiful . The start was mesmerising and the last segment was scary. I know her big-footed oaf would save her and rid her of all Khurana nightmares once and for all.
But I can understand a girl's predicament when the object of her worst nightmares is standing in front of her.

Is it possible to fall in love with a fictional character with every changing scene?
You have made it possible for all of us with your intricately woven web of words.
I loved Preeti and Dabbu's over attentive care for Pasta , making sure he gets his required dose of Vitamin D 😉
I loved it when Shravan was asking for Suman's hand from Nanu, all the while holding her hand in his 👏
I loved how Shravan is attentive to every little detail about her , how she was picking on her food.
Most of all , I loved how they both want to give a world of love to each other.
We are going to miss reading it.
Looking forward and eagerly waiting for the next part.
Love
Shveta

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deltadawn

@deltadawn

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#895

I am more a mess of emotions right now than a mix.

You dedicated the chapter to me 😃 thank you so much my IF JKR.🤗

My phone and IF are royal pains today so Res for the rest of my of my comment.

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So this is how I am a mess of emotions...

Lara I already had my fare share of roller coaster rides the day you put up this update and then this last one made me feel like I am never going to come out of the 90 degree drop you have created in here.

It was so beautiful, your description of the smaller things. which we sometimes fail to notice as love. of course its love. Its care. brushing off the dust from her dress first, fixing his hair first 😊 I prefer this kind so standing in a puddle of mush here.

Don't you have it already? I love Nanu ❤️

Winding up quickly aren't you. This is my favorite story on shraman and I am sad about it ending although I do see you have kept all the points opened for a master finish. How to say... the feeling is bittersweet 😊

Speaking of Masters... somebody seems to have a bigger crush on Vikas Khanna than Sumo 😆

Khurana makes a Joker style entry and that scared me . I am hoping all will end well. I trust Shravan 😊 and Sumo (I call your Sumo Maha Kaali btw) too.

Thank you so much once again for such a beautiful story and your words which can weave magic, bring thrills and chills with precision.👏

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#896

Oh Shit!!!! Oh Shit!!! Khurana is back. When I read the chapter name, I thought about the devil in Shravan and Suman life and I completely forget about him.

Harming suman, khurana is doing the worst mistake of life because mess with anyone who is loved by shravan. He has signed his death warrant.

One moment suman and shravan were so happy and now their happiness is ruin and time is testing them again. And I know they face this and come out of it successfully.

Can't wait to read next chapter.

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Faith28

@Faith28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#897

I loved loved loved it...😳 The re wedding thing is 👍🏼 Eagerly waiting...but why this creepo khurrana ki re entry😡 Hope shravi reaches on time😕

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mogu_togu

@mogu_togu

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#898

omg... the update turned scary as it was ending... it started so romantic... i am really worried for suman and the baby... all the signs are there for suman to be p...

pls pls pls dont let anything happen to them...