FF Bitter Sweet Symphony#Thread 3: Epilogue on#Thread4 link on pg1 - Page 62

Originally posted by: orion23

Res!

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Thesis on the way😆

I' ready for it.

Excited 😃

Firstly, every time I res, just assume that I've loved it and a lecture will follow soon...

Hmmm... will keep that in mind and hope for you to res everytime 😉

Secondly, why do you like throwing curve balls? I suck at cricket 🤔

Don't say that, sweety.😉

You've been throwing a number of curve balls in your stories yourself too. 😈😆

Coming to the update, I like how you keep certain members constantly in your updates. It's enduring that you take into consideration the fact that the story should be as close to reality as possible. Sanzh 😳 and Rahul Makes me think there is more to their story than meets the eye...

Thanks.

About Sanzh and Rahul - it's not confirmed yet, but I've an open, uncertain yet plan for them. Yes.

But it's not going to be too big, that's for sure.

Vagga🤣

He has the nerve to throw in loop holes.

First off that's Sumo,

Second off she is Shravan Malhotra's wife,

Thirdly, she is angry Mrs. Suman Shravan Malhotra, a mix that cannot be taken lightly. I'm surprised she didn't make Vagga paratha and serve it with chilled lassi.

haa haa... true.😆

There are times history repeats itself, there are also times when we repeat them intentionally 🤣 ROFL!

"Well honey, I brought you Pushkar here" I laughed so damn hard at this😆

"Just talk" Shravan knows her too well. If she had her way, Pushkar would be dead meat.

True.😃

Their little pacification-proud moment! Definitely my handy work!Swag toh dekho bande ka!😎

"For creation can never be a sin but killing it is.." 👏Take a bow buddy! I agree forever more!

I love how Shravan can do but so much as place his hand on her's and bring down her temperature in no time❤️

That's love in work there. ❤️

I loved how you've written the convincing the family bits. So true to realism. Also I like how everyone knows of the pregnancy. Had this been on the show, the four wouldn't have told a soul. 😆

That's the usual and very annoying thing about TV shows. Too much dragging, I don't like. 😡

Romance and drama focusing 95% on

the lead characters - I like. 🤗

Kamini😡 She sure as hell can fall low.

What words👏

You do know I love angst and angry pieces right. I may hate every word that came out of Kamini's mouth but that only means that it was written with much finesse. I loved it!

Mission accomplished. Thanks!😳

But what did she say? Shravan? Mistress?

W*F! No What in the actual frigging hell!

You ask here comes the hurricane what is it called?

Hurricane thy name is Carol.

I'm sure Suman will ask and I'm more certain Shravan will reply in the affirmative. That he did visit this hurricane but did he cheat? Nope. That I don't buy. I know your Shravan enough to know he wouldn't do that. He must have visited her for another reason.

Lara, be nice and update this sooner, anxiety will get the better off me other wise!

No comments.😈

But I'll updt very soon. Almost done with the next chap.

Can't wait for the next!

P.S. Pushkar's daddy's name was Shyamnath.. Shyam and Ram you see😆

Err... now I see. 😳 lol...

But namkaran ho chuka, tabahi complete, aab kya kare. 🥺 🤣

Shyamnath ban gaya Devnath! 😆

So, thanks a lot for your wonderful comment.

As usual it was encouraging and really touched my heart.

Love you so much. *hugs

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

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Never waited for any ff to be updated!

Carol!!!😲😲 just dropped the full bottle of water on my bed! (sigh)

Was enjoying the chapter thoroughly, Sumo-pushkar part 👏, both the families agreed gr8, but then you just blasted a bomb! 😕😕 What will Sumo the thor do? Bechara Shravan! 😆😆 God save him! I don't think he has cheated on suman!

Lovely update as usual, but this kamini, ufff! 😡

Chalo let's see aage kya hota hai! Will be waiting for the next update! 🤗

P. S btw Sanzh(my name, not the spelling though😳) and her boy, both are always a treat to read!

Originally posted by: Nik03

Ressi res 😳
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Waoh!!...Blasting one Lara 👏
Sanzh 😆
Destroying a disobeying husband's office with a hammer... 😆
N Rahul the cutie pie.. 😳

What if Shraman has their own baby girl someday

and Rahul the cutipie turns out to be his hero!

A random thought. 😃

Vegga!!...Oh man 😆
I just love this character of yours... 😉 😆
His Loophole theory... 😆
Loved Sumo's reaction... 😆
And what a perfect timing to make a entry Shravan-Pushkar..!!

Yes, that was quite the perfect time.😆

There're times when history repeats itself but then there're also times when people repeats it intentionally... 😆

Loved how you have shown Shravan's presence and words calms Sumo.❤️
ShraMan ❤️

What a handy-work Shravan...👏 😆
Scare-crow gone mad...😆
Poor Pushkar...But you deserve it man!!

That he deserved.😉

Abortion 😲
Its not a solution...It can never be!!
For creation can never be a sin but killing it is... 👏
Soo true bro..!!

Indeed...

Thank God n you that it didnt happened!!

Because Pushkar bharta was already enough,

didn't want a Preethi bharta too. 😆

The reconciliation scene was beautifully penned down dear...❤️
Loved it!!

what we think is the end is where the story-teller decides to stop telling...Beautiful one!!
The whole informing family scene was superbly written dear...Ec
veryone's reactions ...👍🏼

That dangerous curve...Kamini Malhotra..!!
Such a devil!!
Loved Kamini-Sumo interaction..❤️
Dialogues man... 👏
Soo apt n powerful ...Awesome job bro 👏

But But But!!!!
WTH!!
Shravan n infidelity... 😲
No!!
Shracan cant do that...He just cant!!...Not At All!!
That hurricane Carol...Oh My My!!
So that was all about this thing that Shravan was thinking about that day!!
But Shravan cant cheat on Sumo!!

Yes, that's what he was thinking about

but let's see what has actually happened. 😉

What a way to end the chappiii Lara... 😳
Fab upii dear... 👏
Thanjs for the pm n plzzz do cont soonish!!
Cant handle this curiosity now... 😛
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nikka sa Nik😆

Thank you so much, Nik!🤗

I'll cont asap.

Take care till then.

Love you.❤️

Originally posted by: Arpi1234

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Sumo thinking that Shravan won't have any idea about pushkar and preeti, though we know pushkar already told Shravan before thor attack 😉 😃
Sanzh and rahul both are suprised by sumo's action.. Sanzh like the idea of destroying the Office of your husband when he doesn't listen to you 😃. ..
Vagga bringing too many people and eating soo much food of Sumo's resrturant, due to loophole in the contract... Oh God vagga also came in wrath of Sumo's anger and was beaten by a rolling pin 😉
"There're times when history repeats itself, but then there're also times when people repeat it intentionally" Shravan's melodrama 😃
Great that pushkar realised his mistake and want to solve the problem... . Good that preeti didn't kill her child.. .
Good that everyone agreed in Malhotra Mansion barring chachi who will always remain evil person...
Nanu and everyone in Tiwari killa also agreed for the marriage. .
Kamini and her disgusting words 😡 low mentality people..
So finally the suspense come out.. Shravan was with a girl in his wedding Night according to chachi..But I have full faith that Shravan would never do anything like what chachi said..
Let's hope sumo's faith wins here..
Wonderful update and thanks for pm..

Love
Smita

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Res. Dazed by the revelation right now. will comment on my second read.

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So here I am walking a happy path reading Sumo being Sumo in all her bullying glory.

Vagga got a belan up his loophole 😆 and Shravan handed over the culprit to her like any law abiding husband would.

The ways he knows to calm her down lock and key metaphors.

Priti couldnt do it. Preekar have their love story to live just like Shraman.😳

Families managed well by both elder siblings. 👏

And then my path became dark as the word Carol bit me in the foot like a snake I carelssly stepped on.

OUCH!! Clara

But reading Shravan... So far. Thebman has been madly in love even in revenge. He was not able to cross a line. And this line seems too obvious for someone like Shravan to cross ever.

Still to err is human and anger gets the best of people. Shravan undeniably is a good example of that always. But infidelity?? On their wedding night.

I will very very eagerly wait to see evn how she approaches him with that topic considering how combustible the air would get around those accusations.

Hope there is no baby involved there!!

Originally posted by: sreyu

🤢 so much tension!
But Shravan can never betray His Sumo... 😊