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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: beasmukherjee

Hey Lara!!! I m the same Beas from watpad who disturbed you a lot. Coming to the story...I m really dead 🤢 . Your words are truly magical and hypnotizing giving us the urge to go through your chapters at least two times. You portrayed them in such an organised manner. And again some more challenges...hope they overcome them together without any hurdles. Plz post soon. Can't resist anymore to read the next part.
Loads of love
😛
Beas 😆Hey Lara!!! I m the same Beas from watpad who disturbed you a lot. Coming to the story...I m really dead 🤢 . Your words are truly magical and hypnotizing giving us the urge to go through your chapters at least two times. You portrayed them in such an organised manner. And again some more challenges...hope they overcome them together without any hurdles. Plz post soon. Can't resist anymore to read the next part.
Loads of love
😛
Beas 😆
Hey Lara!!! I m the same Beas from watpad who disturbed you a lot. Coming to the story...I m really dead 🤢 . Your words are truly magical and hypnotizing giving us the urge to go through your chapters at least two times. You portrayed them in such an organised manner. And again some more challenges...hope they overcome them together without any hurdles. Plz post soon. Can't resist anymore to read the next part.
Loads of love
😛
Beas 😆Hey Lara!!! I m the same Beas from watpad who disturbed you a lot. Coming to the story...I m really dead 🤢 . Your words are truly magical and hypnotizing giving us the urge to go through your chapters at least two times. You portrayed them in such an organised manner. And again some more challenges...hope they overcome them together without any hurdles. Plz post soon. Can't resist anymore to read the next part.
Loads of love
😛
Beas 😆


Hey, Beas! It really feels awesome to read your comment here.
I'm so glad that you're enjoying the story so much!
Love you!
And..., no problem the repeating performance of the comment. 😆
It feels like a pleasant echo of your lovely words.
So, thanks again! Take care.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: evaviego

Amazing update Lara 😊

More problems coming up 😲

OMG..

But please dont make her Prego... pretty please...

Let them enjoy their lives for some more time.. After years of wait finally they are together.. Let them be in the world of their own.. Only the two of them enjoying every bit of it... And then obviously i would love to see them expecting a child..

I bet Shravan will be the most amazing , loving and caring Husband ever.. not that he is not already.. But that can wait na 😉

Waiting eagerly for the next update...

P.S. Unres on Pg 59 as well. 😊



Hey! Thanks a lot!🤗

Yes, there're definitely problems lurking around the corner for Shraman. Preethi had kick started the process by the way. 😭 😈


Prego or not?
I think, the most imp question should be - together or not?💔
Alive or not?😉

Take care, till later.❤️

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon




I think, the most imp question should be - together or not?💔
Alive or not?😉



Hey Lara...!!!!

Please dont give me a heart attack...!!!

You have given me enough while reading A Call Of Trouble. I cant bear more 😆

I will Unres ASAP. 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: orion23

Res

Finally!
-------------------------
Unres..

Lara🤗
Where have you been buddy...?
And now that you are here with a chapter you are actually telling me there is a wrap up in sight?
Okay, no like.

Forgive me for the delay and the wrap up news. 😭
But what begins must end too, right?
It will take some though, so don't worry right at this moment already.

I mean yes I know that the story was finite but this was my only connection to ShraMan other than my own works.
No other story, no other writer does justice to them as you do. No ones works come close to being in the same vicinity as yours not even mine.
Your writing evokes the familiar EDKV feelings.
Honestly, you are my favourite writer and you have set the bar so high that I can't even get myself to read anyone else's works.
You are simply outstanding, and if I may, the best we have!

Aww..., dear! You made me speechless here.
*Hugs

Be nice and let the story run a little longer?
Or if you have an end in mind then would you be so kind as to continue writing on ShraMan?
You are inspiration bro, if you stop writing on them, I will be

You're making it hard for me to plan an epilogue now. 😕
I do wish to write on ShraMan, yes, if not such a long ff like Bitter Sweet then SS or OS.
(Flashback: I started Bitter Sweet as a SS too, it's now
42 chapters and ongoing 😲 ! I suck at plans.🤢)

ShraMan is unique, and is like unrequited love to me for their premature departure. So, yes, I want to write more about them. 😳

Coming to this chapter..
Preeti? What even?
I had not expected this one bit!
You love bowling googlies right?
And then Pushkin doesn't want it?
Clean bowled!
Yeh ho kya raha hai?
I love roller-coasters. That's what is happening. 😎
Can't help with the twists!🤪

I would love to see Mr. P as a pulp, it would be nice given his current behaviour.
Please tell me Shravan will slap him and give him a earful like he'd once bestowed on badass lawyer😆
Perfect scope for revenge. 😈
Shravan will be on cloud nine. ⭐️

Suman could be preggy too?
Hmm... now I wanna know...
Let's see...😉

Don't forget Shravan hated Sumo, where is this coming from and why? Lara, don't hurt my heart...
And better not keep us waiting on this one!
Two words -
Evil laugh... 😈😆

Mr. Junior Khanna could soon be baigan ka bharta if he doesn't stop. I love jealous Shravu and all that happens after.
baigan ka bharta - I love!

My favourites, absolute favourites from this one:
The cuddly part! Oo that was adorable! And Shravan's pride really needs a bit of taming 😉
Ahem... (clears throat) ☺️

And secondly, over my frigging dead body. That was passionate and I can't tell you how much!
You know that already!
I know. (sighs dreamily)

Way to go hon!
Can't wait for the next..
Thanks for the PM🤗

Love and Admiration,
Zoya😳

Thanks a lot, Zoya! 🤗
You know what your comments do to me - they freaking have me jump into writing mood. That's how much your words encourage me.
Love you so much, dear.
Take care.
Will be coming back soon with a new chapter this time. Tada!

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: evaviego


Hey Lara...!!!!

Please dont give me a heart attack...!!!

You have given me enough while reading A Call Of Trouble. I cant bear more 😆

I will Unres ASAP. 😉


Will be waiting. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Forgive me for the delay and the wrap up news. 😭
But what begins must end too, right?
It will take some though, so don't worry right at this moment already.
Aww man yes...
I get it, it's just that this is the only piece of fiction I read here...
Nothing else seems to strike a cord, I'm not saying others are doing a bad job or anything, I'm sure they are marvelous, but your work has some sort of a connect which keeps me hooked..

Aww..., dear! You made me speechless here.
*Hugs
I like speechless😳

You're making it hard for me to plan an epilogue now. 😕
I do wish to write on ShraMan, yes, if not such a long ff like Bitter Sweet then SS or OS.
(Flashback: I started Bitter Sweet as a SS too, it's now
42 chapters and ongoing 😲 ! I suck at plans.🤢)
ShraMan is unique, and is like unrequited love to me for their premature departure. So, yes, I want to write more about them. 😳
Arey ya... No no, plan the epilogue. Say this story as it was imagined...
FF, SS, OS, Drabble, jo bhi ho.. Bas keep writing on them😛
I love that you suck at plans, it's our gain😉
Unrequited love indeed...

I love roller-coasters. That's what is happening. 😎
Can't help with the twists!🤪
Hahahah I love surprises 😆

Perfect scope for revenge. 😈
Shravan will be on cloud nine. ⭐️
And I'd be there with him😉

Let's see...😉
Ya keep me guessing, why don't you🤔

Two words -
Evil laugh... 😈😆
Dude! Stop scaring me haan...

baigan ka bharta - I love!
Makes two..

Ahem... (clears throat) ☺️
Clears Mind which fell in the gutter🤪

I know. (sighs dreamily)

Thanks a lot, Zoya! 🤗
You're welcome Lara!
You know what your comments do to me - they freaking have me jump into writing mood. That's how much your words encourage me.
Oh my! Really? Cloud 9!
You deserve all this and much more 🤗
Love you so much, dear.
Love you more!
Take care.
You too!
Will be coming back soon with a new chapter this time. Tada!
Can't wait...

@Orange And would you look at that!
I wrote a thesis in the comment and made it lengthier by replying to your reply..
I have no self control...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sunain

Ressi res!

OMG...Finally me first😃🥳
Its just like a dream come true

Congos on being first! 🥳

Hii Sunshine!
Have so much reading to do...will unress after reading all pending parts in one go😳

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Unres



Sunshine!!!🤗
Pehchana kon..??...😛
Firstly m deadly sorry from disappering like this..had many reasons..khair churo..Now m back on track😳
Haah...well i have last four chaps to read so will unress from chap 39 n onwards⭐️

Aw..., I've missed you calling me sunshine. 🤗
I'm just glad that you're back. 😃
And then, super glad to see the sizes of your comments!!! I love long comments, gosh!



CHAPTER 39:

Sunshine!!!🤗
Terrific one!...Indeed!⭐️
Woah...i so...so loved it!❤️

Suman helping Sakshi rescuing her brother..woah...Sumo mood totally on😆..therez no way shez letting Sakshi fight this battle of hers all alone...thts really sweet of Sumo but at the same time planning to hide this from Shravan..sounds unpleasent😕
I hope Shravan doznt turn to be mad at her knowing the truth.

Ohh Sakshi turned out to be smart enough😛...Traped tht jerk in his own valley of creepy deeds😈...all coz shez damn eager to free her Brother her only family.


OMG!!!⭐️
The Date...uufff...Breath-taking one!!
Suman's imapatience is quite natural...i guess all women nah infact every one has such a reaction towards their surprises...hell curious and never stop eating ones mind till thy get to knw a slightest clue of their surprise..coz i do the same unless n until m threatened to loose tht surprise if i not giveup bugging thm😛😆

The bestest Part...which i turly loved...

"More adoring is when we women peel off that skin of confidence and reveal that real man with fears and flaws underneath"
"And you have alreay succeeded in doing so"

This moment was a Killer one! 👏
There convo thy had as the reached the roof was Aamazing plus funny😆!...When he said he wud jump if he failed to impress her was ❤️
Sunshine ur imaginary Shravan is beyond a gem...u are just making me fall more n more for him..omg...like hez sooo romantic...haay☺️
His date was❤️...n so was Shraman n their moments..loved it!😳
Whole terrace scene and convo was so Beautifully Penned!👏

"Your Nerd"...

"Fate waited for the right time"...so true!😳

And the most loveliest part was when he tells her that he wants all goods and bads and the worsts of her!...it literally stole my heart..their convo their sweet romance everything was hell enchanting!
Ohh..That masala wala seems an intresting character😆
Suman actually hired a Goon cum Masalay wala😆...hope he cud be of some good use😛

The wait for the "right time" is eating both of them equally this really shows how much thy crave for one another how much thy arre into one amother how much thy want to be one anothers...love eachother to the square of infinity for sure

Royal execution of their wedding night...hmm..Intresting😳😆



About all women reacting same to surprises, I probably have to be the only exception. Just because the people in my life don't for their life know how to keep a surprise secret. So, just to not spoil the surprise I've to pretend that I'm not noticing that cake they sneaked in the house through the back door, the phone calls they're making to the supposed guests, and most importantly the bubbling surprise written all over their poor faces! It's hilarious to the max. 😃



CHAPTER 40

Happy New Year to you to Sunshine🥳

Tbh when i read its finally going to be the right time...i was literally at cloud nine n as soon as i read an eventful day i was like😕...ab kya blast honay wala hai😛😆

Throughout this chapter either u had me high on my Scary mood coz of his furious being or completly Awe-strucken by all the adoration he was showering his wife with😳

I have heard tht men are really weak at expressing their emotions and have noticed too cant really tell its true or not or just my imagination but our Shravan is totally different...so well at expressing his emotions be it positive or negative...Plus point😉

Sumo being a tublelight sounds damn cute😳
Awwh their kiss was lovely n whn thy got caught...damn cute and at the same time hillarious too😆
Awwwhh.....he arranged a swing for her at terrce..so sweet...😳...n so was the Resturant naughtiness😆

"The devil's on his way out the city.Now,Suman!"...eventful day han😕...it sounded so scary😕

Rescuing mission was a fun one...but landed our dear sumo in trouble as well...33 missed call!!!😲...so many texts...was hell worried for her
From the very begining i was like hiding from Shravan wud be a bad idea n Yes i definitly turned out to be one!
oohh...Shravan's outburst was so justified...she made him do so...n the moment he heard the word kidnapping,my instant reflex action was i literally hid my face with my palms n said Sumo is doomed!...n few secs later burst into laughter at my silliness🤪😆

So Thank God!...mission got accomplished..but wait whoz the other guy🤓

Oh Shravan thunderous look made me scared n all i cud think of was ab Sumo ka kya hoga...he was hell furious at her folly n most importantly of her keeping a secret.

"I brought you Khurana's wife and her brother,freshly rescued,"bold one got me🤣🤣...it sounded more like she was presenting a freshly baked cake or something to him🤣...n tht unexpected bonus still holds by curiosity😳

OUCH!!!...Shravan tu gussay say laal peela hoa tha...🤢
N vaga standing for his honor was something i appreciate.

I so loved this hell angry furious Bear😳...jo bhi ho hez always the best
her idea of shoving the dinner down his throat was an amazing one😉😆

when he emerged just in towel..for me it was a moment to watch😳...Sumo's blasted gutter brain was on retard mode and so was mine🤣☺️

Sunshine...u made me cry😭😭...
"But it's saddening how you hid it all from me.It's humilating how i was blissfully when my wife was loitering right in the center of danger and i was nowhere near to protect her!"😭😭

"Didn't you promise to give me all of you just a few days ago?"...this n onwards was an emotional one😭😭...was hell Brilliantly penned!👏..i just loved it!

"Just dont try to send me to a early grave with your adventures in the future.Always remember that there's nothing that scares me more than the fear of losing you."...❤️❤️❤️😭😭

His all restriction on her was sp adorable..i just kept on adoring their love
Love hormones...😆...😳...so cute!

So true tht Khurana is not going to leave it so easily..he'll surely take his revenge😕...so not gives positive vibes😕...But Shravan hai na...tu all is well...haina😉

Their kiss was lovely...OMG!!!...he had planned their wedding nite this very day😲
N got all ruined...but there was no way Suman wud let this chance go away and wait for another century as life is always unpredictable.

Their love making moment was hell Beautifully Penned!...was an engaging on...damn hot damn amazing!...loved it to core!❤️
Awwh it was damn cute and funny too as he didnt let her sleep peacefully n kept on poking her to ask his silly questions😆😆

"We did not used protection!"...OMG!!🤣🤣...this seemed like when a kid broke a glas n timidly tells his mom about his deed😆😆
Damn hillarous...ab Sumo kya karay gi😆

Special mention of the quote u used..it was really really a Beautiful one👍🏼

Sunshine..all in all it was hell Stupendously penned!...i loved n enjoyed it to core!...indeed!⭐️
The dialouges were outstanding!!
This was my most Favorite part uptill now n wud say ur bestest too😉⭐️
Hats off bro for being such an Incredible writer👏👏
My all time favourite😳
Love you soo much🤗


About Shravan's expressing his emotions - He's actually our dream guy I guess. But yes, he still has his bad moments. 😉

I'm so, utterly happy that you liked the chaps!
Thank you sooo much, and hugs you until you suffocate. 🤗😃

Love you sooo much, too.





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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23

@Orange And would you look at that!
I wrote a thesis in the comment and made it lengthier by replying to your reply..
I have no self control...



Self control is a bad thing anyway.😉
I ❤️ your thesis.
👍🏼


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunain

Res!

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Unress


CHAPTER 41:

It was a chotu sa update but was damn cute and hell hillarious!😆😳
Thank God i have one more chap to read warna tu my curiosity wud have had its share by now😛😆

The start was super duper cute..their romantic moments were Enchanting!...Beautifully Penned!👏👏

Oh u asked wether her calculation is correct or not so lemme tell u if u see it biologically or through science POV thn its obviously posssible tht she cud get pregnent coz all it needs is an egg to get fertilized..or bhi buhat story hai but i think mein apni Biology class shuru karnay say phlay hi khatam kar doon🤪...han so if its in the writers hand thn cant be really sure...she can be or cant be...woh bas Lara baba janti hai😛😆...so the chances are 50-50😳

Vivek khanna...hmm intresting entry...Shravan k kan say achay say jealousy k dhoain nikalay ga ya..for sure🤪😆

hoo...tht eyes threat was..🤢

OMG!!!...their romance their chemistry their magnetic bond just spellbinds me...it was so so beautiful...dazzling one!😳

"If you keep staring at me like this...i'll have to intriduce you to more of my brutish ways."...this made me blush hard..☺️

"I'll take the risk then...and get familiar with those ways you are talking about."...bold Sumo is just Bindass👍🏼😉

Their moment was so damn lovely and the point it got disturbed by tht Vivek i was all 🤣🤣...It must have been hell embarssing for sumo😛😆...n imagining Shravan being hell irritated by tht silly interuption was even more fun😆

OMG!!!!🤣🤣..."Are you guys trying voyeurism?"...i cud help myself...🤣🤣
Sunshine...you are Mindblowwing Bro...literally wanna hug u tightly for being such an Incredible writer yar..lag ja gale behna...🤗🤗

Shravan actually had a point...he was merely trying to kiss his own wife in his own house😆...but guest room mein guest k samnay...naah..manners..Shravan surely needs to control his uncontrolablly increasing hormones... 🤪

Shravan's jealously and possessiveness was soo adorable
Oye..😆...Shravan hota tu paka Vivek is duniya mein baki nhi rahata after tht hug😆

Its was actually very lovely to see tht as he entered his home and the moment his eyes landed on is lady love all his tensions worries tiredness vanished away.

"I can go to any lenghts and make all impossibles possible,to make sure you're safe."......❤️

so true the evil might be defeated but is still alive😡...hah...wht he'll do nxt...so exciting 😃

Sunshine...u are a Stupendous Writer!...m so so into ur FF...loved it to core!⭐️




CHAPTER 42:

Wont really hide...you astonished me to the core...literally this indeed was a mind blasting one!

Shravan's jealousy makes him more appealing and adorable😳...his antics are just dame cutoo❤️
The way he hovered over Vivek fuming like an angry hawk was really cute😆😆...its also annoying too sometimes😳

Oiy...Shravan's inner animal disarder is soo cute...specially for Suman his version is super sexy😳😉...haay i so want him for myself☺️

Khurana finally behind the bars...but i also feel something itcy...how come this ferocious creep has been so calm and literally not planning a counterattack🤓...i can sense him being busy into his evil planning ploting...hope it really dosent effect Shraman.

so true life is full of surprises hurdles and adventures all we need to learn is how to tackle them so we can survive the hurricane.

Ohh tht night cuddly romance was soo lovely...❤️❤️❤️...hell Beautifully Penned!...Sumo kept on trying to reach her phone and he kept on caging her to himself...Awwh
Love definintly has connnection to lust...who denies it!
Ohh n their dirty convo was hell hillarious😆...i so badly wanted to quote it here but restrained myself from doing so🤪...Sunshine u r beyond Amazing!⭐️
damn hillarious part was whn he fell on the floor😆😆

What The Hell!!!...Preetii Prego😲😲...Pushkar dosent want his own Child😲
This fact literally made me gasp is shock.
This was the same thing i thought...Pushkar is oh so dead...200% sure😳...i didnt expected such immaturity from him.
Hope Preekar issues doznt creat a rift between Shraman😕

Preeti and Suman had same situation...dekha...Preeti proved my sciency point i mentioned before😳😆...ab Suman ki kissmat tumharay hath mein hai😆😉...I wud suggest let thm enjoy...abhi abhi tu asal honeymoon period start hoa hai en ka😳

Oh dont tell me preeti's pregnency has something to do with khurana...hope not so😕...plus why wud we remember the old bitter memories...Hope Shraman are not going to end up fighting like maniacs...n hurt eachother badly😕

so many querries and the key of all my answer is with you...plz plz plz do update soonish this time...as m hell curious to knw wht Dhamaka's are linned up ahead for us😃...super excited😉

Sunshine!..Sunshine!..Sunshine!...i must say ur story is hitting the heights and making me fall more and more for it⭐️
Big beary huggies for you🤗🤗...love you dear!
plz do update soon..will be eagerly waiting for ur pm😉


Tadaa🥳
finally mission acomplished😳


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Wht did you actually said????😲😲...You...My very own Sunshine planing to wrap up this story!!!...NO WAYSS!!!...like seriously...how can you do this to us...this was the very day and very statement i was dreading to hear and to read,since the moment i fall for ur story😭😭...n now u actually turned my fear into reality😭😭...Plz dont do this...I want more...atleast 3,4 thread aur...3,4 zaiyada hain tu 2 bhi chalein gay...plz plz plz i really dont want this story to end too soon..n u r telling 10 chaps...no ways!!!...aisa lagta hai kal hi khatam ho jaay ga🥺
Mere happy happy mood ko shadu shadu kar dea😭😭
Plz hum becharon ki extention day do...Plz...sony tv ki tarha dhoka mat do na😕...fans ka dil turna gandi baat...haina...plz plz plz dont end to soon...m literally begging you!





Take Care!
Sunain❤️


Unfortunately, I can't say anything about ShraMan's kismat at the moment. 😭
Neither can I promise that would be any less painful.
But that's a part of growing up, isn't it?
Battles are an inevitable part of life.

3, 4 threads more!!! Ahem... 😕
No comments about that. 😭😭

I love ShraMan's unique story line and I love writing this story, that's all I want to say. And it must come to an end, someday. That's inevitable.
But hey, just like I said in the author's note, we still have some time to reach that moment.

I'll never give you dhoka. I'll find a way to eat your brains with the help of ShraMan for sure. 😉

So, take care.
Lots of love.






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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: deltadawn

wow... different shades of inner animal.. 😳


but Khurana😡 can be that easy? nope..

their moments togehter the way you describe are hmmm 😊

Preeti!! TIWARI before marriage 👏 that too based solely on date mathematics from a girl who only attends nail art or chinese classes🤣

I wish you might pen down Mamiji's wrath in chapters to come.. also Pushkar Pulp is eagerly awaited.. 😆

Now will Suman and Shravan enter a similar fate? Also why did you remind about Shravan's hatred for Sumo from earleir chapters? will this Prikar issue cause problems between them? and how??😕

mind is in permutation combination mode already now and I know I ll have to wait a few days before you send the next update 😭


ending?? nooo no no no NO NO... no ending... not soon at least 10 chapters will end too soon... no not done.. not accepted. We can have a PIL sent you know for this story to not end 😉



Pushkar pulp will be updated in thirty minutes to forty minutes max! 😃

PIL😲
speechless!

Thanks a lot, dear. You're so sweet, love you!

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