FF Bitter Sweet Symphony#Thread 3: Epilogue on#Thread4 link on pg1 - Page 101

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Posted: 8 years ago
Runny nose..heavy head..night creme washed away and a wet pillow!!! You had me girl...u just did.
How do u do it? This was as perfect as it could get...the emotional breakdown...the fear of loosing sumo forever...shravan going maniac😳 my heart was breaking at his agony..even though we knew sumo was safe... Khair... Anth bhala toh sab bhala👍🏼
The after effect of concussion were quite funny too... With sumo being sumo 😆
" I'll throw u off the cliff myself..." You retarded, looney buffon... 🤣 Loved this way too much.
Not to forget the pov of pushkar and the quick thinking by the not so bright preeti 👏
Sad BSS ended... Waiting for the epilogue.
Looking forward to many many more bonus chapters... 😊

Loads of love n luck ❤️

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Posted: 8 years ago
I don't have any word to describe Shravan's mental state. He had gone littrally crazy to see Sumo's car flying down from the cliff. This man loves her so much there is no words to explain how much he loved her may be even Sumo wouldn't think to love him that much. Poor guy was thinking hallucinating & her spirit is with him. Sumo's thought to bring him back to sense was good. Hope baby would be fine, I can't wait to see Shravan's reaction when the news would be out.
Rahul would be future son-in-law that sounds interesting, It means Shraman would have baby girl. Even I would like to see Nirmala back in Ramnath's life during his retired life. He definitely need his life partner when he has everything in his life. I want to see Shraman in MM not in their separate house, With their full family happy happy.

Thanks for bonus chap. Waiting to see what all we get to see in your treasure.

Thanks for PM Lara

Vinu
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Posted: 8 years ago
It was fabulous👍🏼
Thanks for pm

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Posted: 8 years ago
Dear Lara,

This was one helluva chapter...just loved everything about it...Shravan's insanity...OMG...love can really do such things to u...then his seeming hallucinations...n Sumo's way of making him believe that she's very much alive...just loved it...Preeti has a weird brain 😲 ...even in d show she did not hv a decent brain or even heart...what else can u expect from her...

coming to what I wud like to c in bonus chapters...some peaceful n romantic Shraman moments..."Peaceful" is important here...n of course please give a decent closure to all the open ends like Sakshi, Vivek etc etc...actually anything u write will b welcome... 😊

rgds
Anuradha
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wonderful update...would love to know abt Shraman's baby..loved it dr
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Posted: 8 years ago
That was a Lara-ish chapter. 🤗

Shravan. oh my God... I loved how Suman showed him the hard way 😉 Aise hard ways sabhi easy ways se better hain.
Preeti... always so smart. What a unique way to stop Shravan. I think Pushkar would do well to remain in good books of his darling wife-to-be. She has a terrific aim.
Pushkar... He is such a Happy go lucky guy. Always easing out the situations. His was one of my favourite characters in EDKV.
I truly liked the Ramnath in this story.so protective of Suman. Once he even stood up to his son for her when she was in hospital.

Er... What complications in pregnancy?
Lara, Dear, you have mentioned so many plots. How are you going to cover them in one epilogue?
😕 So I guess bonus chapters mein bahut kuchh aayega. 😛

AB zyada wait mat karwana. Looking forward to the epilogue and bonus chapters

Love
Shveta
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Posted: 8 years ago
Dear Lara
This was one amazing chapter
Shravan's agony when he thought he had lost Sumo was heartfelt.
He thought he was hallucinating or she had come back as a spirit. And Sumo's way of bringing him to his senses😛
Preeti knocked Shravan unconscious. I guess some of her sister's influence finally rubbed off her 😃
I really love the fact that Ramnath is supportive of Suman and is ready to go to any extent to safeguard his children's happiness.
Rahul as Shraman' s future son in law. Well then a baby girl is on the way.
I' ll absolutely want to know what happened to Nirmala. Will she reunite with her family?
Waiting for the epilogue and bonus chapters🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lara,I have literally run out of words to appreciate you!!!!
This was just fantastic!!
I am ready to read on everything you have mentioned in your notes...
Just keep on writing please...
And thanks for the PM..
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Posted: 8 years ago
All's well that ends well. Thank you for this story Lara. Totally loved it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
For the title! ! ❤️
Pasta my love! !🤗
Love beyond limits! ! Shravan Malhotra! !
...so sorry. I could not save you." Aww-inspiring moment! !
P-P were there for a reason.. job well done !!
Sumo got Ramu Kaka in place of her ambassador! !

CID n EDKV ka Maha Epi was a blast! !

You are a phenomenal writer !! I have read two of ur stories and both are wowsome ! !

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