TS :Sweater Weather. IMP NOTE pg 16 pls check 29.1.17 - Page 5

Originally posted by: slumberqueen

Never thought first time writing could come out so beautifully.

Simple, neat, wouldve loved to have scene unfold that way.

Beautiful!

Originally posted by: nith125

Loved it ! Read it twice actually, beautifully written ❤️

Originally posted by: Sunain

Beautifully penned..keep writting 😉
hope to get more soon. Will be waiting.. 😃

Originally posted by: evaviego

First Update??? Really???

Pretty good update.. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Keep writing more and more... 😊

Originally posted by: Ishqbaaz

Amazing gal!!
The title was catchy and the story was beautiful!! 👏
Sweet and heartwarming...keep it up and do write more 😊

Originally posted by: nuttynuts

Spouses for life! That line was IT!

Brilliant story! Well done!

Hi Guys ! Hope you all are doing fine. I know I promised another one shot but I could not complete it , asli duniya issues. Instead , I am giving you guys a part 2 of this story. This might have one more part. Maybe. Idk. Anyways , so sorry , I have no idea how adding a link to a different part of the story works, so please bear with me. I will add the link soon. And as I promised a new update on Friday, here it is 😃

Please do leave comments. They do motivate me. I know it is short, but I did what I could, with a super busy week and an even busier week coming up.

Shravan was surprised , yet happy. He felt lighter than he had in years and the smile on his face grew as he tightened his arms around Suman. Sumo. His Sumo. He thought of how much he loved her, he had loved her for all these years and now that he had her in his arms , he didn't want to let go. Ever. But he had to tell her. He needed to. She had taken the first step and now it was his turn. They may have to cross many bridges before everything finally fell into place , but he had to do this now. His guilt kept weighing him down , all he could think of for the past week was what could have happened. And it was all his fault , he cringed , tightening his arms around her , leaving no space for even air to pass between them.

"OYE QUTUB MINAR ! I know you got your best friend back but don't choke me yaar. Itna jaldi nahi marna mujhe"

He covered her mouth , " You have to talk nonsense at times like these too ? Don't say things like that please"

"Haan haan, I know you need me, ek blanket toh fold nahi kar sakte , London return. Hmph"

Shravan rolled his eyes , " Ye London return hee tumhara pati hai , Pati se aise baat karte hai ? I am your husband from today onwards. Keep a filter in between your brain and mouth ab se." He smirked , looking down at her , placing her on his lap , flustering her.

"Excuse me! No one tells Sumo what to do. Waise bhi , husband hi bane ho , kahin ke President nahi. Aur wife toh mein bhi hu. Jo mann mein ayega who bolugi"

And she started narrating what had happened throughout the day , telling him how Dh se Dhurinder had come to her office , half drunk , telling Preeta how much he loved her and hated her at the same time but she had missed the scene because she was sitting at home cleaning his dirty cupboard.

"Oh hello! Mera cupboard bohot clean hota hai hamesha , thank you very much. Pushkar ka kabhi dekh lena agar time mile toh"

"Oh haaan! Mein toh tumhe batana hi bhool gayi. You missed something so important today Shravan. Preeti is pregnant" , she finished her sentence , giving him a huge smile , one that lit her face up , like diyas on a Diwali night.

All thoughts of telling her what had happened between him and Jairaj flew out the window.

'It's okay , let her be happy today , kal bata dunga.'

"Sun rahe ho ya nahi ? Hello ! Earth to Shravan! My sister is pregnant. I am going to be a maasi , oh and chachi too , she let out a squeal , "I am SO excited , the baby will be as cute as Preeti , aur Pushkar ki tarah thoda phattu. And I am going to spoil him. Oh , it can be a her too. Jo bhi ho , I will play with the baby ,bohot saari shaytaniya karege hum dono. Poore ghar ko sar pe uthayege. I can't wait."

She paused , thinking about something , "Waise inn dono ki gaadi kaafi fast chal rahi hai , three months into marriage and she is already pregnant. Wow"

"Waise hamare bacche bhi bade cute honge. Imagine , a baby with your eyes and my hair , my nose , tumhari kuch zyada hi badi hai", she said playfully , "Ummm , tumhare lips. OH MY GOD , I hope my son is not taller than you , he won't be able to find a girl for himself in this country. Shit Shravan , itna lamba hona zaroori tha kya ?"

She went on blabbering , not realizing she was talking about their future kids , their future.

She paused, looked up at him , and found his eyes on her. Filled with love. And... mischief ?

He bent down , slowly , pulling her closer into his lap, pulled her hair to one side , and kissed her cheek. Suman looked down , feeling flustered all of a sudden , cheeks red and butterflies in her stomach.

"Butterflies? No. that is a goddamn zoo.", she muttered under her breath.

"Kuch kaha tumne ?"

"Na, nai , nahi , kuch bhi toh nahi"

"Aap kuch zyada hee fast jaa rahi hai ,Mrs Malhotra. Abhi toh shaadi ko ek hee hafta hua hai. At this rate , Preeti Pushkar ko bhi race kar lenge hum", he whispered , teasing her and enjoying her discomfort"

She squirmed in his lap , trying to get out of his hold , "Kya hua ? Are you hungry ? Chalo , lets feed that zoo of yours",he said , getting up and pulling her up with him.

She whipped her head up , looking at him , eyes wide, unable to form a coherent sentence.

"What ? I am not deaf you know" ,he burst out laughing.

"Tum kuch zyada hee free ho rahe ho , Mr Malhotra. I am hungry , I need to feed my brain. Waise bhi ,tumse baat karke drained ho gaya hai."

"Kaun ?" , he asked , confused.

"Oh , tumhara brain , sorry mein bhool gaya tha , thoda weak hai na, koi baat nahi , lets feed it. And that zoo of yours."

"SHRAVAN tum na" , she began , pointed her index finger at him , "It's okay Sumo , I kow you get angry fast when you are hungry" , he hooked her index finger with his and brought it down , interweaving their fingers together and pulling her with him , making her smile.

"Waise kya bana hai tumne mere liye?"

"Shhh , talk softly , sab so rahe hai"

"Itni jaldi ?" ,He asked , confused. His family was never the kind that went to bed before midnight.

"Generally log iss tim pe so hi rahe hote hai. Raat ke do baj rahe hai , stupid."

"WHAT?!"

"SHHH"

"Okay , sorry ,I didn't realize it was THAT late", he said , shrugging.

They tiptoed down the stairs and went up to the kitchen counter. Sumo heated up the daal , which she had made for him, with the something special she had added only for him. Something that enhanced the spices and the taste , something that would remind Shravan of Sumo.

She piled up the karela and daal in a plate , picked a few rotis and some of the fluffy white rice. They sat down at the table ,their chairs glued to each other , eating from the same plate.

"Aaram se khaao , the food is not going anywhere."

"bohot bhook lagi hai Sumo. Let me eat in peace"

"Bhukkad"

He smiled.

"Accha, dessert ke liye please jagah rakho"

"Arre yaar , itni raat ko mujhe pata nahi kya kya khila rahi ho , meri diet ki band baja ke khush rahogi kya ?"

"Itna diet karne ke zaroorat nahi hai okay, biwi toh saamne baithi hai , pata nahi kisko impress karna chahte ho ab.", she said , making faces and sulking.

"Exactly , saamne baithi hai. Godh mein nahi" , he smirked , making her choke on the water she was drinking.

" Atleast let me have dinner in peace.Besharmi ki bhi hadd hoti hai", she said, shaking her head.

"Oh you mean dinner ke baad besharmi is allowed ? You know ,upstairs", he said , waggling his eyebrows suggestively.

She turned red. "Shut up Shravan , moong daal ka halwa jo banaya tha tumhare liye who bhi kal lalaji ko de dungi."

"Moong daal ka halwa !" , His face lit up. "Okay sorry , I will behave now."

She smiled at his child-like excitement. This was her Shravan. He appeared tough from the outside , but inside his heart was soft, like that of a five year old's. She had promised herself , no matter what, she was going to keep him happy. And she intended to keep that promise.

Next update will be up on Friday. Hope you all have an awesome week ahead.

Cheers ,

Sanober.😳

Part 3 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-duje-ke-vaaste/4732554/ts-sweater-weather-imp-note-pg-16-pls-check-29-1-17?pn=11