Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed

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sapphire3

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Posted: 8 years ago

#771

Originally posted by: Perpetuity
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Tera likhna bhulna is like cvs ka daal ko bhulna. IMPOSSIBLE!

Kya re daal kyun yaad dilayi ? 😆

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sapphire3

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Posted: 8 years ago

#772

Originally posted by: Flibbertigibbet

Ye gana filhaal chalra mere saamne toh aapke liye dedication!

Tu cheez badi hai mast mast! tu cheez badi hai mast!

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orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#773

Originally posted by: Perpetuity
Unresed on page 91 and 92
P.S.- Sorry for a highly scattered comment. Blame my memory aur tujhe toh yeh baat btane ki v jarurat nhi hai. Pta hi hoga. Also I m very sure I forgot to add many things so dubara padhungi ya jb v kuch yaad aye bolne ko main yaha aa jaungi.

Abhi check karti mai!!

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sapphire3

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Posted: 8 years ago

#774

Originally posted by: Perpetuity
Tune Pri ko ldka bna dia 🤣
Aur woh sbse cute wali main 😳 🤗

Teri sach me kambal kutayi hogi is bar

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orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#775

Originally posted by: sapphire3
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Oh shit🤣

Priii😆

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orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#776

@Prii Kambal kutayai😆

Yeh show mai tha na dialogue?

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Reshma Ahmed

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Posted: 8 years ago

#777

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Kya re daal kyun yaad dilayi ? 😆

Daal tumhe bhul jaye yeh kvi ho nhi skta aur 2m daal ko bhul jao yeh main hone nhi dungi 🤣

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sapphire3

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Posted: 8 years ago

#778

@Zo khud tune cake Snan kiya Aur Hume ittu sa 😲
N what are we three waiting for chullu bhar Cake me hi Naha lo 🤣

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orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#779

Originally posted by: Perpetuity
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You made me so emotional with that AN yaar. You are an amazing friend and an equally amazing human being. All that you have said about us is applicable to you too. You are badass but elegant and graceful at the same time. Love you a lot ❤️
That's got to be the best compliment I've ever gotten!
Thank you so much hon 🤗
Coming to the chapter. This has Zoya written all over it. Nobody could have written it such brilliantly. I have nvr ever read such a BEAUTIFUL and CLASSY intimate scene.
Thank you so much Resh! I was damn apprehensive about it!
I usually skip these because they are too explicit and comes out as vulgar to me. But this is ❤️ The way you described it through the shadows was just so
I'm glad it kept you hooked!!!
And this "Humari zindagi ki nayi shuruaat
hai, humare pehle kadam toh need
to be frozen in time. Hence.." is pure brilliance.
It is haina!!
The kaleidoscope analogy again ws brilliant (Brilliant becomes ur synonym now Zoyi)
Ooi ma! Tu kya kar ri! Matlab kya!
❤️
The poems ❤️
And I m in love with this besharam Shravan. Dil bole cheena taane bn besharam ☺️
Bilkul!
The watch thing was unexpected but ❤️ Sumo ka personal James Bond 😳
Hamesha se hai na! Apna hero hai ekdam bond level swag!
Aur mere mehboob ki entry. Yay 😳
Yours truely!
2 b cntnd 😆
Mine too😆