for me you've become one of those writer's who always leave me speechless...to be honest I'm in love with this ss ...completely, madly, irrevocably, literally, heartily ...I was smiling like I've got my precious thing while reading this ss...and after reading it, I felt like killing myself for reading it this late...yar I loved it...each n everything from ur instructions to prologue to chapter one n two n the quotes u add in beginning...I'm at verge of loss of words u know...had read only the part where you had showed painful revealations, heartbreaks, trust breaking, still having faith on each other in ur another ff ...but in this you've beautifully penned wat a shramanian had always craved for...n as a shramanian I've craved for such shramanlicious moments badly...the intensity with which you've showed the love, faith, haq, trust, pure friendship, of shraman I've no words...beautiful ...very beautifully penned down...the way you wrote despite of hurting each other, after forgiving n forgetting everything how they were working on mending their long lost friendship n love is marvellous...ur just amazing...how she cooked daal for him, how she got ready in blue, how she gave him the permission to hug her, how she said you can hug me whenever u want as he has the haq to do everything n only he has this haq ...smile crept my lips throughout reading from instructions to second part n few tears of happiness also rolled down my cheeks...I've always wanted something like this to see but nothing like this happened instead only misunderstandings n distances increased them...much complexion, hatred, knowingly hurting each other ...I hated all these between shraman...but the way you penned down the rebuilding friendship n love, the way they started spending time with each other, doing small things for each other just to see other one happy...how evrytym they keep shwng tht i love u..words are not imp always...ur gestures, smile, care smtimes is enough to make other feel such...loved it from the bottom of my heart...I really don't know wat to say more about it...just touched my heart...so realistic it felt...for the first time I've loved any serial n character to this extent...n shraman I can talk about them my lifetime...they're in my heart...a void was created in my life after show ended but u guys just fill this void beautifully with ur shraman stories...n namik I started loving him because of the way he showered his love, care for fans...love him...respect him..will always be#shramanian...#namikfan...#nikifan...#nimikfan...pls do send me a pm when you'll update next chapter on ur both shraman ff n ss ...have send u a buddy...thanks dear for such an amazing, beautiful ss ...waiting for next chapter...:)
Edited by anonymousanju - 8 years ago
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