ShraMan OS--The Journey(Suman's POV)--

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Posted: 8 years ago
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hiii to all my friends
i am back after my exams...and my exams are over today only
but i was not able to sop my self from writing this...so penned it down...
i know dear all of u and also me are very sad about the news of show going off air...so here is a little tribute from my side to EDKV

i really do not know whether it is good or bad...so plzzz bear it for me
hope u all love it dear...
plzzz ignore the typos..
so here we go...

The journey

(Suman's pov)

Now I Mrs.Suman Shravan Malhotra and my dearest better half Mr. Shravan Malhotra are now very happy with each other and living a very happy life.

He, my qutab minar and I, we both started our journey being a stranger. We were in the same school but we didn't used to talk to each other.

Once shravan extended his hand for friendship towards me but i rejected it and the reason was my image in front of my so called friends who were never true like he was and he is. Ok not at that point of time but after some time we became friends...bestfriends. We both used to hangout with each other, i will not lie but i took him forgranted , i made him do all my homeworks, he helped me with dance, he looked after me when i was suffering from fever...there are many things he did for me that i can't pen it down. But i also did many things for my bhukkad... i used to make his favourite sev ki sabji; his favourite halwa...and anything which he loved to eat.

In this small journey of school i.e., from becoming friends to hangingout with each other to taking care of each other to fighting with each other to making his favourite dishes...I must have fallen for him but when i realised... it was very late and i lost him. And i lost because of my deeds only. When he left me then i realised that i was in love with my chasmish. What i did that was my immaturity...which i understood very late. And to rectify my mistake i waited for him for 10 long years...which seems to me like a century...

Ten years passed but there was no trace of him. And one day, papa (ramnath) informed nanu that he was coming back...my shravan was coming back. The happiness was having no bound... my heart was beating very fast...i was not able to stop smiling.

And he arrived and i thought that my wait was over but...there was little more waiting. He was very much hurt because of me. He was so much angry and hurt that he even acted to not remember his sumo *how can he forget me*...and then he gave me another shock by saying he didn't remember anything that happened during their school time and he had moved on *moved on...is that very easy to do*. I was totally shattered. At that point of time his ego, anger, hate for me, everything was above my guilt, my sorry, my pleading *ok...that was correct from his side* but soon his anger, hate for me... all melt down. And we again became friends.

And again started living like sumo-shravan. We used to fight and many more and every thing became normal between us. The things were so much normal between us that my dear shravan was finding a perfect guy for me to marry*ok...don't laugh at my condition* at that time i was like can't he see that i love him...my buddhu shravan .

Everything was going good until papa asked me to stay away from shravan *is he mad or what...ok now he is my father in law but at that point...can't express my feeling* and i said yes to what he wanted from me for the sake of pushkar and preeti. I started ignoring my shravan. It was really tough for me but i did...i made my shravan hate his sumo. But no one knows that in this i was dying from inside each day. And soon there was entry of a guy Aditya in life which turned my life more prone to problems...earlier there was just a little distance between me and shravan but becaused of this Aditya...the distance between me and shravan increased ad his love and care changed into hatred. To add more problems to my life, my marriage was fixed with that Aditya and also accepted that. But...there was turn of events...that aditya tried to force himself on me. But in the mean time my shravan came and saved me from that *whatever bad word you want to use you can*.

After that i got a ray of hope that everything betweem me and shravan but nothing was changed or i should say things changed for wrost as all because of papa, Kamini chachi *hope you understand my anger*. We got married even we were not interested *ok..i was willing to marry shravan but the way it turned i didn't want that*

We got married but nothing changed between us leaving one thing that now we were husband and wife. I was trying to get everything on place but what i was getting from shravan's was just anger. I know the distance between us was very much but we were always there for each other*ok...we don't show that to each other*.

Another turn of events took place but that was for good but the outcome was heart wrenching. Papa spilled out every truth and his deeds in front of shravan and shravan broke down and second time i saw him breaking down in this way. My heart was crying seeing my shravan in such a state but i stood strong for him.

There was no need of any word between us. I knew he wanted to say sorry for every thing he did...but there was no need as i forgave him already because i know him in and out.

It took time for shravan to forgive papa but atlast he forgave papa and now mummy ji also came to live with us and then our family was complete and happy.

And last but not the least be became ShraMan from Shravan and Sumo.

Ok...now its time for my dearest hubby to come back from office...so i am going...hope u understand

Bye...


hope u guys loved it...and if not then thnx fr bearing it

do hit like(don't forget) and comment(try fr long one dear)

plzzz

PS-hey guys i ws thinking to write this in shravan's POV also.

if u all like it then do suggest whether i should write it or not (plzzz be true)


THANK YOU😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice
You wrote their whole journey
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This is really good ya!
Loved it...
Simple and sweet
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Originally posted by: Gurveen

Nice
You wrote their whole journey


glad u loved it dear
thnq😊
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Originally posted by: orion23

This is really good ya!

Loved it...
Simple and sweet


glad u loved it dear
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Originally posted by: Sunain

Thht waz beautiful...
Loved it...


glad u loved it dear
thnq😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_writer



glad u loved it dear
thnq😊


Ap kuch likein aur humein pasand na aaay...aisa ho sakta hai..
kuch bhi awaein.. 😆
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Originally posted by: Sunain


Ap kuch likein aur humein pasand na aaay...aisa ho sakta hai..
kuch bhi awaein.. 😆


awww thnx fr such an appreciation dear
i ws thinking to give this in shravan's POV also...should i or not...
plz be true...i will not feel bad dear...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_writer



awww thnx fr such an appreciation dear
i ws thinking to give this in shravan's POV also...should i or not...
plz be true...i will not feel bad dear...


Arry ya bhi koi puchanay ki baat hai...
I wud love to read whtever u rite n if thts ur plan so do give it a try..i knw u will nail tht one also.. 😉
so do rite..i will be waiting... 😭

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