MY DEAR HUBBY - A Shraman TS (completed -pg 24) - Page 5

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Beautiful

Thank u 😊

Originally posted by: shracraze

Absolutely loved this!😳

I like how Sumo kept a tally😆

Love how Sumo played Shravans game just like him!

Thankyou for the beautiful OS

Thank u so much hon!!
My pleasure 😛

Originally posted by: nith125

Good one Priyam😊

Thank u nith 😊

Originally posted by: jesi15

awesome...loved it !

Thank u sweety 😛

Originally posted by: potterginny

Lord save my heart from bursting!
Priyam! This is so cuuute! 😳
Sumo's setting scores for each other! So her! 😆
I love their relationship's gradual transition. They slowly, very slowly warm up to each other, or rather Shravan warms up, courtesy to Suman's patience and efforts, as she promised. Not at all abrupt. It is highly commendable of you to maintain that realism. 👏
I am glad that not a big thing like confession but you focused on their little moments that strengthened their relationship. After all, they already know that they loved each other, they even married without confession because they are there for each other even when they are at loggerheads.

Wish you would write more on them! 😳

Omggg mummy jeee !!!
I am so so happy you liked it!!
Thank u so much for lovely comments 🤗
Means a lot to me 😃
Thanks again ...u made my day 😛

Originally posted by: nancyrio90

Splendid writing...I loved the way u made it a match...and the scores got me some feels too😉

Awesome Priyam..all ur os r written so vivid that it runs like a movie in the head...this one included...

and as I have mentioned many a times the pace makes it even more amazing a pleasure to read!

Keep writing more for ur fans like me

Tc

Rio

Rio my love 🤗
I got you 😉
I am on cloud nine now 😆 ...main neeche ni aungi abhi 😆
Thank u sooo much darling 😃
Congratulations on your engagement 😛

Originally posted by: nicky13

So Mrs. Malhotra lost the game ... But she was happy to be a looser Coz her defeat was her victory actually... Love the ending... Thanks

Nicky ji bada wala thank you hai ji 😃

Originally posted by: AishMartin

Beautiful Loved it

Thank u 😊

Originally posted by: chestha5931

Priyam 🤗
That was too good...
You should write more often...
Wish something like this happens..
That made me smile dear...
Thanks for the pm 😊

Thank u so much chestha 🤗
Glad u liked it !!
My pleasure 😛

Originally posted by: sheeluneelu

Mind blowing Priyam

Amazing!!!

Well ..wr waiting for Shravan's sixer from start

Thanks a ton suruchi 🤗