MY DEAR HUBBY - A Shraman TS (completed -pg 24) - Page 16

Originally posted by: Ammiey

Res my cuteness ki dukaan ki owner😉

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Diii !!!!

Here I am plzz ignore my English as I can't write in Hindi it's on autocorrect bohot mushkil se Hindi word likhata hai

So coming to this amazing sheer beauty update!!

It's so so sooo damn amazing dii

I mean their point counting was amazing how she beat him 3 on 1 times!!😆

Really I couldn't help laughing at those verbal fights!! Seriously !!

And then came the point where he beat her all the more from direct 1 point to 10

It's was actually deserving point given to him

The thing he said actually was deserving to get the higjest point and he got that I'm really happy !!!

It was full of emotions and the emotions were flowing and glistening in sumo's eyes was unpredictable and beautiful at the same time!!😳

Really all in all amazing chap!

Now I'm gonna read the next part

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Awww such a lovely update
Shravans return gift was so cute
Their cute little family shraman and their little bundle of joy
Lots of love

Originally posted by: Ammiey

Priyam diii is this is this is this...omg!!!!!!
Itti excitement!!! 😆

It's so so sooo mesmerizing really I can't stop myself from reading it again n again
Really?? You liked it so much?? Thank u !!

And I loved specially that cute little scavenger hunt game!!!

It's was so so so beautiful the way he assured her her protection and his love for her and the way he defined her beauty all in so many fond memories!! So lovely
Thank u so so much doll. So happy u enjoyed reading!!

And dii not only shravan credit goes to u I mean I really love your poetry it's so damn wonderful ...u know what? U should write some poetry too u know it's really amazing ones I tell u the truth!!
Aww ab ye jyada ho gya *blushing hard*
Poetry is not my thing !

Really Di all in all amazing chap s always and so cute and wonderful too

The way she gave him the return gift and as u said mauka hai aur dastoor bhi that was the best moment to share her good news what moment can be better than birthdays !!!

Really enjoyed a lottt !!!!
Thank u so much babu. I always wait for your comments ,they make my day!!
Loads of love ❤️ 😳

PS: i've unressed on page 12 too have a look😃

Originally posted by: 0Bella0

Awww this was sooo cute in 1st part that game was awsum now this update I can't stop grinning like a fool
loved it to core

Originally posted by: angel_writer

wow dear

that was master piece

lovd it core

very beautifully penned

and those hints loved it

and terrace scene loved it

awesome

hope to see such things in the show in the future

and thnx fr d pm dear

Originally posted by: aachal20

loved this story. amazingly written.