Ashes - A Sharaman FF - Part 2 (Pg 1)

Part 1

Few hours before marriage_

Sumans room_

Utarti dhoop se kamara surmai ho raha hai aur suman surkh lenghge main taiyar hai , Sharavan comes to meet her for last time .

Sumo... Jaa rahi ho... dekho Tulip lya hoon ( moist eyes)

Par tumne too kaha tha kee mera koi special din hoga tab laoge aur ye keval ek hai

Sumo Tulip ek hee hai . Bahut door hai Mumbai ... hai naa

Haan bahut door ...

Bahut pyari lag rahi ho ...

(Aasoon ke katar lekin koe aavaz nahi... )

Mujhe bata sakti ho

Kuch nahi ... tumhara tulip kitab main rakh leti hoon... ( ab ke hum bhichde to shatad kabhi khawbo main mile jaise sookhe jis tarah sooke phool kitabon main mile)

Etne aansoo kyo

Khushi ke aansoo hai ...

Sach ...

Haan Sach

Kuch chahiye... Kuch bhe ( mera dil etna pareshan kyo hai... Lagta hai jaise main tumko marne ke liye bhej raha hoon. Sharavan pagal mat ban)

Nahi sab kuch mil gaya

(Hazaaron khwahishen aisi ke har khwahish pe dam nikle ,

Bahut niklay mere armaan, lekin phir bhi kam nikle
Nikalna khuld se aadam ka sunte aaye hain lekin
Bahut be-aabru hokar tere kuuche se hum nikle)

(haan tumhe sab mil gaya aur mera sab kuch chin gaya)

Sharavan ab kabhi vapas nahi aaoongi ...

Sumo etne aansoo ...

Haan koe nahi chahta kee main yahan rahoon ... tum sach kahte the. Baat kadvi the par sacchi to the naa ...

Sumo mera vo matlab...

Sharavan main bahut khush hoon ab mujhe kisi kee fikr nahi ... Kisi ko mere fikr nahi... dekho sham dal rahi ... bas ye raat aur main sabse door chali jaoogi. ( dam ghut raha hai mera ... aaj dekh loon tumko fir kabhi shayad dekh bhe nahi paaoge. Aaj main apne aansoon nahi rokooge... Mera dil ro raha hai ... aag se gujarna hai ab to ye aansoon hee sahara hain.)

( kuch theek nahi hai. Ye ladti bhe nahi... Kaise jaaoon ... Ek baar tumko choo loon... kuch bhe mango main kar doonga ... tum to dekhti bhe nahi ... Etni naraz ho. Maine hee to tode saare rishte...Aaj ke baad need nahi ... ye raat bahut lambi hogi... )

Sumo dekh tere liye emeralds... Tuje acche lagte hai naa

Sumo hans kyo rahi hoo...

Sharavan dekho naa ye lengha red hai ... ab kuch match hee nahi karega ... kuch bhe nahi sare rang galat ho gaye... mujse peecha chudane kee etni badi keemat... Main aaise he jaa rahi hoon. Etni mehnat dushmano ke liye nahi karte ... jiske apne maa baap usse chor ke chale gaye uske liye itni hamdardi ?

Tum jao Sharavan ...

Sharavan_ Crying bitterly on terrace

(kabhi khud pe, kabhi khud pe kabhi halat pe rona aaya

baat nikli to har, ek baat pe rona aaya

hum to samjhe the, ki ham bhul gaye hai unko

hum to samjhe the, hum to samjhe the ki ham bhul gaye hai unko

kya huya aaj, ye kis baat pe rona aaya

kya huya aaj ye, kis baat pe rona aaya

kabhi khud pe, kabhi halat pe rona )

part 1 - (pg 1)

part 2 - (pg 1)

awesome start
cannot wait to read more
continue soon

Part 2_

Daboo_ Sharavan Bhaiya jaldi chalo Suman di ... kuch ho gaya...

In seconds his mind made him see themost horrible things and he ran frantically towards her room. For a moment her cries relieved his fear .. . closed door her her cry for help made him to break the door.

Everyone was shocked but he was furious ...

Then she ran towards him ...and time stood still ... He hugged her softly fearing she will break ... His mind recycling the scenario ... how dare he touched my Sumo like this ... He handed his precious little Sumo to preeti to confront the monster.

With his all might he slapped him on his face ... ... no one was able to stop him not even his father because he was in killing mode for his Sumo.

Both were bleeding when Suman called his name ... and he responded as she can remote control him...

Aditya_ Ha ha ha right Sharavan ke Sumo ... Sumo Ka Sharavan ... you both fooled me ... are aap log suniye ye SAB KUCH KAR CHUKE HAI... Aur ye mujhe kal he pata chala ... kisne bataya ... Sharavan ne khud bataya ...

Suman ... Ye kya bakwas kar rahe ho... Sharavan aaisa kar hee nahi sakta ... mujhe usse poochne kee bhe jaroorat nahi hai... you shut your mouth ... right Shraavan

He felt like someone crushed him with tons of weights ... he was shocked.

What happen Sharavan ... Yahi kaha tha naa tumne

Preeti_ Aditya ... jis ladki ne apna first letter tak naa dia ho Sharavan ko ... kabi bola bhe naa ho kee vo pyar karti hai usse ... Vo aaisa kabhi kar hee nahi sakti.

Something stirred in his heart ... Love me .. really ... it was my name on her hand... And what I did ... she is standing alone facing accusing eyes... Still she believed that her Sharavan can never do that... I have to take responsibility.

Yes Sharavan kaha tha maine ... Janana nahi chohoge kyo kaha tha ... First thing I love Sumo ... Aaj se nahi bachpan se , haan ye baat alag hai kee humne ek doosre se kabhi kuch nahi kaha... Aur tum aaye ... main naraz tha ... khud se aur maine Sumo ke bahut hurt bhe kia .. bevajah .

Aur fir tumne shaq karna shuru kia... aur tere maa ne mujhe kaha kee main tujhe khush rahne doon... To maine tere maa ke baat poori kar de... Tu mera past janana chahta tha ... main tujhe vo sunaya jot u sunna chahta tha ... but tune mere sumo ko haat lagaya eski koe maffee nahi hai...

Mami to nana ji ... Aap ne he iss ladki ko choot de rakhi hai ... ab dekh ligiye.

Preeti _ nahi Mummi ... di aaise nahi hi... aap ye kya kah rahi hai...

Suman fainted and sharavn took her in his arms.

Note _ Maza to ab shuru hoga.

Nice update. Maza ab shuru hone ja raha hai toh update bhi jaldi kar dena please

hey writer...it was awsm ...ah I wish they would have talked being sarcastic before marriage but nothing happened...
n omg u revealed the biggest truth of which both were aware but never tried to confront...
'sumo ka shravan, shravan ki sumo '...
this is the most awesome line...
happy for two things...their love revealtion n shravu's feeling guilty for his doing...at least here... otherwise in the show...huh...
update the next part soon...
have read ur other ff's ...they're quite different from others...nature, magic ...interesting...please continue other previous ff's too...

Wiccamaya continue it ...plz
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Very interesting Start continue soon
It's awesome

wow so brilliant

WIC I am a die hard fan of your writing. Keep updating shaily