'MERE NISHAN'-MARKED AS HIS - A SHRAMAN OS

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QHoneyBee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

MrDarcyFan... Your writing justifies your name... You write such lovely darcy moments

Can I just stop watching the show and read your writings? Or you become the creative head... Your choice!!!

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hiral_2010

@hiral_2010

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Bliss so perfect❤️ completely loved it especially the kiss😳 beautifully written👏

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Susmita M

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Hi Mandy,
Wow!!! Sooo beautifully written..lost!!! Don't know what I can say, after reading this beautiful story. You've penned it so well!!! Had everything that the mind was craving for!! Awesom!! Keep it up!!! Looking forward to read more stories like this in future 👏

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poppinss

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Wonderful work Mandy! Loved it.

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Sahiba_07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

So beautifully written 👏

I've always loved your writings on veeba and sahil and I'm so glad to see you writing On Shraman as well 😳

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Thank you all for your great response. I am overwhelmed! Thank you so much. I just wanted to play out a scenario that I knew we all wanted to see. A moment of romance that does not get ruined! A moment of understanding that does not turn to mistrust. I just wanted to see something good happen to our ShraMan! Confused and conflicted couple that they are!

I have never seen the show "Batameez Dil" but have seen the song "Mere Nishan" which became a favorite. I just love the intensity of that song. A lover who is resigned to his Heart break, but is in a way fine with it. He knows that no matter what, he has left his Mark on her. When I was listening to the song recently I got inspired to write something on ShraMan relating to this concept. They are the perfect candidates for a story like that. Didnt have to try too hard to come up with the right setting!

Thanks again all!

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Sahiba_07
So beautifully written 👏

I've always loved your writings on veeba and sahil and I'm so glad to see you writing On Shraman as well 😳

Hi,

I didnt know you had read my VEEBA story as well. I only ever wrote one of them. At the time I never managed another. But the one I did write I was happy with. I even wrote some Panjabi on that. I have learnt so much from watching these shows. My Hindi is quite good too now. (I am not Indian). But I have a fair grasp of the language now!

Glad you liked it, and I hope to write more.

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Sahiba_07

@Sahiba_07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan

Hi,

I didnt know you had read my VEEBA story as well. I only ever wrote one of them. At the time I never managed another. But the one I did write I was happy with. I even wrote some Panjabi on that. I have learnt so much from watching these shows. My Hindi is quite good too now. (I am not Indian). But I have a fair grasp of the language now!

Glad you liked it, and I hope to write more.

Oh wow! I didn't know you were not Indian. Your hindi is pretty good for a non-indian 👏

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: .shivi396
Wow Mandy this is simply Awesome 👏

I have mentioned it in one of your work that I love scenarios when Girl take a step ahead in relationship,You got it here too😳
Damn those Kiss moments☺️
"Mere Nishaan" one of my favorite Indian TV soap Title track and I loved the show too 😊
How I wish CVs to not complicate things for ShraMan😔
Your piece of writing gives some relive to this confused soul👍🏼
Hope to see you around often😛

Thanks for your comment. So you like the song "Mere Nishan". Even I do. Although I have not actually followed the show. The song is amazing and what's not to love about it?

I am not around much coz I am very busy with work and family stuff. But try as much as possible to be active. These days I only update the story I have been writing for a few months now. But soon will look to finish it. I just didnt have time to start anything new, but I literally felt compelled to write this OS. Glad you liked it!

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Jaslin

@jassie_17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

I'm reading ur work for the 1st time,I think...just beautiful babe!!now I'm encouraged to continue my OS which I had written b4 seeing da promo..I'll publish my version and let all of ya see it...

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