Deewaangi Tere Pyaar ki - last part /page 5 - Page 3

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I think Neeraj blackmailed Suman to leave Shravan by taking some kasam or something which she couldn't refuse as it was his father's wish and they parted away but after 7 years they met each other again
Shravan-shravu's part is so emotional
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Part 2

And Now it was the time for the anniversary celebrations..And Neeraj's eyes got wider to see the couple . He saw Pushkar and Preeti standing in front of the cake holding each other's hand.. and Shravan was standing near them..Pushkar and Preeti cut the cake but Neeraj was not able to see anything..His mind was working fast... He knew now that Preeti was not Shravan's wife.. she was Pushkar's wife..

Cake cutting was done and Neeraj Asked Ramnath-Ramnath.. Preeti is Pushkar's wife?

Ramnath-Haan.. Didn't I tell you?

Neeraj shook his head-No..

Ramnath-Oh I m sorry.. but why are you asking ?

Neeraj-Because I thought that Preeti was Shravan's wife..If Preeti is Shravan's wife then what about Shravan's wife?

Ramnath-Shravan is not married..

Neeraj-why?

Ramnath became sad-He was in love with a girl 7 years ago and she left him saying that he was not worth her. She wanted some rich guy for herself.. She was a daughter of some rich man and we were not rich that time...and that girl's deceive forced Shravan to work harder.. As if he wanted to prove that girl wrong

Neeraj was hearing everything..

Neeraj-Did he tell about the girl..

Ramnath-No.. No one knows about her as he never talked about her..

Neeraj looked in to the direction where Shravu was talking to Shravan .. He was looking very happy while talking to her.. She had impressed him..After all she too was the daughter of Shravan..

Neeraj said to himself -It's time Neeraj.. you can amend your mistakes.. you cannot bring the old time back but their future can be full of pleasures

His feet started to move in that direction..He reached near Shravan.. He was busy with Shravu

Neeraj -Shravan..

And Shravan looked at him.. Neeraj joined his both hands and sat on the knees in front of Shravan.

Shravan was stunned seeing him like that he got up at his place and asked-Uncle please.. what are you doing?

Neeraj-Shravan please forgive me..

Now everyone was looking at them.. all came near them.. Shravan looked at all and then at Neeraj

He helped Neeraj to stand. Neeraj was crying

Shravan -Uncle why are you asking for my forgiveness..what did you do.?

Neeraj-Shravan I m the culprit who snatched your love from you.. Shravan Suman loves you a lot.. It was me who forced him to break her relation with you..

Not only Shravan but everyone was shocked to hear that..

Ramnath-What? That means Suman is the girl whom Shravan loved..

Neeraj-Haan Ramnath..Suman is the girl whom he loved..

Shravan stood mute for few moment-But Uncle what is the use of telling this now. Suman is someone's wife and is Shravu's mother..

Neeraj-Shravu is your daughter Shravan..

And this exploded like a bomb on Shravan-What??.. What are you saying Uncle? This is not right.. me and Suman never crossed our lines and. I don't believe it.. I mean how can I agree to this fact where as I know that we were always in our limits..and second fact Shravu is 5 years old and Suman left me 7 years ago..

Neeraj-Shravu is not 5 years old Shravan.. She has completed her 6 years..wo Suman ne jaan boojh ke jhooth bola..may be she saw Preeti here and thought her to be your wife in fact I too thought that she was your wife

Shravan -but uncle I don't remember anything like that

Neeraj-Shravan wo main kuchh nahin Jaanta.. tumdono ke beech kya hua kaise hua I don't know..when I found her pregnant I asked her to tell me about babie's father so that I could come and tell him the truth but she told me the same.. she too said that he would not accept it as he did not know anything about it.. Mujhe kuchh nahin pata Shravan..iss bare me to Suman hi bata sakti hai ki actual me kya hua tha..you remember Shravu called you dad.. she did not call you by mistake.. she recognized you as she had seen your pics which Suman has.. Shravu knew that you are her father..

Shravan looked at Shravu who was standing there looking at him.. she was crying..Shravan came near her and looked at her..she was looking at him ..He wiped her tears

Shravu-Uncle please forgive naanu...

Neeraj-Shravu you can call him Dad..

Shravu - Is their Hide and seek game over Naanu?..

Neeraj-Yes beta..

Shravu-Uncle Can I call you dad?

Shravan was trying to remember.. he was remembering his last meeting with Suman.. they met in a hotel as Suman had called him to meet.. he went to meet and there he drank only juice as he did not like to drink alcohol.. he did not remember anything after that.. Next morning he found himself in a room of same hotel and there was a letter from Suman in which she informed him that she was going away from him forever as he was not capable to take her responsibilities and her father had searched a rich guy for her and she too was agree with her father.. His love was not enough for her to spend her life.. she needed money too.. He clearly remembered her sentence-Sirf pyaar ke sahaare zindagi nahi bitaayi ja sakti ..jeene ke liye paisa bhi zaroori hota hai

That very moment he knew that Suman had left him only because he was not rich.He was completely broken.. He could not believe that Suman had left.. She loved him madly... He returned to his house and went to take a bath . He wanted to shade tears behind the flowing water. He did not want anyone to know it that the girl whom he loved had left him.. while taking bath he noticed some red color mixed with water washing away from his body.. he was surprised to see that.. he even checked his body if he was hurt somewhere on his body but he was perfectly fine.. it was just a little cut on his right hand thumb..nothing else.and that cut was not too big that could release that amount of blood

Now Shravan was connecting everything.. that means that night They were one.. but why he is not able to remember it

He remembered something else too.. Suman used to call him Shravu and he hated that word and he was always irritated with this word"Suman used to laugh loud seeing him irritated..and one day she said-Shravan I m definitely going to name one of our children Shravu.. you never let me call this.. but I will call my kid Shravu and will irritate you.. and her this talk made Shravan laughed..

He was even surprised to see Suman calling her daughter Shravu that day and he remembered the same thing that day too but the situation did not allow him to think much as Shravu needed to rush to the hospital.. Now he did not have any doubt that Shravu was his daughter..He Loved Suman and even still loved her..and now he knew that suman too always loved him and he could not doubt her love for him

.. he was brought back from his past by Shravu.

Who was asking him again and again by shaking him-Uncle please say something .. Can I call you dad,?

And Shravan sat on his knees in front of Shravu spread his arms-Shravu.. My baby.. and Shravu ran and hugged him calling him Dad.. Shravan collected her in his arms and started to kiss everywhere at her face- Shravu my baby. Yes I m your dad..

Everyone there was having tears in their eyes.. they could see the reunion of father and daughter.. who did not know each other few days back..

Nirmala came near them- She too hugged Shravu .. and kissed her on her face..

She said to Shravan-Shravan..we have got our grand daughter,, now we want our Dil too with us.. Bring her back Shravan.. and Shravan looked at his father,, He too said .Your mother is right Shravan.. Go and bring her back.. and Shravan ran from there to bring his Suman back to him..

At Dargah

Suman was sitting in a corner

she was crying..she never thought that she would come to India again and meet Shravan but it happened..and the love which she kept hidden in side of her heart was paining her now.. She was sure when she was in London that Shravan must had moved in his life as no one would love a cheater but seeing him in front her with someone else was hurting her.. Today was the last day in India.. She so much wanted to see him once but she knew that she was running behind a mirage.. Shravan had moved in his life but she was happy to see him successful.. what else she needed..but the fact that she did not have any right on Shravan was right too..She wished if her dad hadn't shown his stubbornness. they might have been living as a happy family

She smiled sadly and remembered their past..

Flashback..

7 years ago

Suman was in India under the scheme of student exchange program.. She never had seen India as her father had shifted to London before her birth..She got the opportunity and she opted to do graduation from India.. She came and joined her college there she met Shravan and they were attracted towards each other at first sight .. They became friends and soon their friendship turned in a love.. Suman found Shravan a very caring and sensible human.. She liked every quality in him.. He was very intelligent and humble boy.. Suman was a daughter of a rich NRI business man and she could see that dedication in him which she saw in her father .. She was sure that Shravan would attain success in future ..

He never tried to take the advantage of her being rich.. He was from a normal family of a small town.. He never tried to cross his limits in love .. he was always decent with her, he kept their love hidden from all too as he did not want to give any opportunity to anyone to mock their love...and his each and every quality made Suman fall deep in his love..

But she did not know that the love of their life was too short.. She did not know How her father came to know about them.. He was capable to do everything and that was the reason that he was keeping an eye on her from different country..

One day she received his call- He was very angry on her

Gaat-What happened papa.. why are you so angry..

Neeraj-Suman I sent you to study there not to learn the love lessons.. How dare you to think that you will like some bagger and I will agree for your relation? No way Suman.. It's not possible

Suman knew that it was not possible to hide ..

Suman-Papa.. he is not rich like us but he is very intelligent and hardworking ..He will gain success ,..

Neeraj-Don't argue Suman.. who has seen the future.. At present he is not capable to look after you..

Suman-But Papa just meet him once .. I make you sure you will not be disappointed..

Neeraj-Milna to door ki baat hai Suman.. I even don't want to know his name.. Now listen to me care fully..-Forget him..

Suman-Papa.. Please don't say this.. I love him..He too loves me a lot..I can't live without him..

Neeraj-Then you have to live without your father

Suman-What do you mean Papa?

Neeraj-Suman.. you have to chose one between us

Suman-please papa. Don't say like this. Give him one chance..

Neeraj-Suman.. I m telling you for the last time..If you do not come back to London with in 7 days then I will ..and Suman was hearing him with a thudding heart,,. She did not want to harm Shravan in any case.and she knew that her father could do anything

Neeraj complete his sentence-I will kill myself Suman..and after my death you can celebrate your marriage on my dead body ..and Suman eyes got wider-No papa please aisa mat boliye..

Neeraj-This is my last decision.. If you are not here within 7 days.. then on the 8th day you will see me dead..saying this he cut the phone..

Suman had no option now.. she knew how his father was.. He had to leave Shravan as could not be the reason of his father's death,... He gave her life.. How could she take his life and enjoy her life.. Her father had no option left for her as she had to choose between them. She knew that it would be a cheating with Shravan but she did not have any other option

.. But She too was the daughter of her Father.. More ziddi than him.. She called her father back and told him that she would be coming back.. He became happy and Suman cut the call..

And she smirked-Papa.. your daughter is coming back but you will regret your decision.. You can keep me away from My Shravan but you can't separate us

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Suman asked Shravan to meet in a hotel

Shravan was surprised-Hotel me kyun?

Suman-bas yun hi .. I wanted to spend some time peacefully..please na mat bolo..

Shravan-Okk. And Shravan reached where Suman had asked him to come..They settled at their seats and he asked waiter to bring juice for both of them.. they were talking happily.. Suman was looking at him with intense eyes.. she knew she was looking him for the last time

Shravan-Suman kya hua..aise kyun dekh rahi ho?

Suman-Kuchh nahin aise hi..Shravan will you do something for me?

Shravan-Kya? bolo..Taare tod ke lane hain aasmaan se?

Ad Suman laughed-Shravan abhi tare todne ka time nahin aaya filhaal mujhe wo rose flower tod ke laa do

Shravan -Bas itni si baat? Abhi laata hoon..

Shravan went to bring that flower and Suman got a chance and she mixed some drugs in his juice..

He came back and they both had their juice..Suman was staring at him while sipping the juice

Soon Shravan felt some dizziness and held his head.-Suman something is happening to me.

Suman-Are you alright Shravan?

But Shravan was not able to bear that feeling and he did not reply her..

Suman called manager and said-can we hire a room? He is not feeling well.. ..and she hired a room and with the help of a waiter she took him to the room..

Waiter-Maam do you need doctor?

Suman-No he has some problem and I have his medicine with me.. don't worry..and waiter left

Suman made him sit on the bed..

Suman-Shravan mujhe tumse kuchh kahna hai

Shravan-Kya..

Suman-Shravan I m going back to London..

Shravan-No Suman tum nahin ja sakti..tumhaare bina kaise jiyunga?

Suman-If you don't want me to go then make me yours... phir main kabhi nahin jaaungi tumhe chhod ke..

Shravan- No Suman this is wrong..you know na ki kisi ko apna banaane ke liye shadi zaroori hoti hai

Suman-Haan to hum abhi shadi kar lete hain.. aur dekho agar tumne meri baat nahin Shravani to main chali jaaungi.. Shravan was completely under the effects of drugs..

Shravan-Nahin Suman pleas aisa mat bolo..I will not let you go.. I will make you mine.. and he looked here and there and Suman took a knife from her handbag and gave to him.. Shravan smiled seeing it.. he put a little cut on his right thumb and blood oozzed out.. He filled her partition with that blood..and Suman closed her eyes..

Shravan-Ab theek hai..ab hamaari shadi ho gayi na.. Now promise you will not go away..

Suman -Never Shravan.. now make me yours..and they celebrated their first night .. For Suman it was the only night with her husband between them.. Suman was now only of Shravan.. No one could separate her from him,., Not even his father

After some time she made Shravan sleep and he slept.. Suman shared her heart to sleeping Shravan-I m really sorry Shravan.. I have to go..I know I m cheating you ,,. But I have been asked to chose one between the two men in my life,.. and I m not able to leave any of you.. so I m yours in all senses and I m going back to my father.. She kissed on his lips-Shravan you will always be in my heart..Ho sake to maaf kar dena apni Suman ko..She kept a letter on the side table of the bed under his wrist watch and she left.. She was crying while going back...

She reached London and Neeraj Was happy to see her back.. he gave her some days to settle again..

After two months Neeraj told Suman that he had selected a boy for her..

Suman-Papa.. ask him if he is ready to accept my child with me?

Neeraj-What? Ye kya bol rahi ho Suman..

Suman- wahi jo aapne suna... Papa you blackmailed me by threatening me.. Now I m here. I left my love there but have brought his love with me.. I m going to be a mother of his baby papa..

Neeraj-Suman I will take an appointment with doctor.. we will get rid of this child..

Suman-Dare papa.. if you even think this.. you called me by threatening me that you will kill yourself.. Now I m threatening you Papa that if you touch my baby.. I will kill myself.. and I m your daughter papa.. aap ziddi hain to main bhi utni hi ziddi hoon.. Want to see the proof? and she picked up the knife from the table and cut her wrist and Neeraj was so scared to see her.. He rushed to the hospital taking Suman and Suman was soon treated and she was fine in few days.. Seeing Suman like that Neeraj was so disturbed,, but he did not dare to say anything to her.. Suman had stopped to talk to him..and after 7 months Shravu arrived and Neeraj was regretting now.. He had spoiled her daughter's life.. He so many times tried to ask the name of the father of Shravu but she did not open her mouth and one day when he bagged in front of her to tell the name

She told him-No use papa.. he will not agree as he did not know anything about Shravu. So don't even try..and Neeraj surrendered in front of her.. he tried to reduce the distances between himself and Suman but Suman had shut her heart for her father... but she never stopped him to come near Shravu..

And they were living like that for 7 years..

Flashback ended

Suman's thoughts were disturbed by the voice of someone.. She looked at him and found the same baba whom she met that day..

He asked-Tum to wahi ho na jo uss din aayi thi

Suman-Ji Baba

Baba-Aaj kya hua?

Suman-Baba-Aaj mere pati ka janamdin hai..unki lambi umr ki dua mangne aayi hoon

Baba-Bachha..Uss dib hi tum akeli thi aur aaj bhi..Pati kahaan hai tumhara..

Suman-Ji. Wo yahaan nahin...

but they heard a voice-mai yahaan hoon baba..and Suman looked in that direction..she found Shravan standing there... he was looking at her... He came near them and said-Main hoon iska pati baba..ye mujhe bina bataaye hi yahaan aa gayi meri lambi umr ki dua maangne..

and he said to Suman-Suman bata kar to ana chhaiye tha na..

And Baba smiled hearing him..and he blessed both of them'' Shravan held her hand.. Suman was watching all this with confusion.-Why he is reacting like this? he turned from there holding her hand

Baba was still standing behind them.. so Suman did not say anything but as they went little far-Suman jerked his hand-Mr. Malhotra.. be in your limits..you know na that I married..

Shravan-So what? I m married too Suman.. Is there any rule that a married man can not touch any married woman

Suman was more confused now.

Shravan came near Suman and cupped her face-Suman I know the truth now..mujhe sab pata chal gaya ki tum kyun chhod kar gayi mujhe..

Suman's eyes got wider hearing this.. She gulped her saliva..But how?

Shravan-Neeraj uncle confesses everything ..

Suman's eyes filled with water and Shravan wiped them and then kissed them one by one..

Suman-Do you believe that Shravu is your daughter?

Shravan-Neeraj uncle ke confession ke baad believe karne ke liye kuchh rah hi nahin jaata Suman.. I was shocked to hear her name from your mouth on the first day.. Mujhe yaad tha Suman ki tum kya bolti thi Shravu Naam ke bare me.. Suman .. I don't remember anything about that night,.. but felt some changes in me.. Kitni koshish ki maine ki tumse nafrat karun par nahin kar paaya..How could I Suman.. may be I had some feeling that you and me were one by then.. you were an important part of me.. bhale hi kuchh yaad nahin tha ..par ek ahsaas tha ki tum aas paas hi ho mere..

Suman was crying hearing him,.. Shravan hugged her without thinking that they were at a public place.. He was feeling his heart finally at peace.. He was never in peace after Suman left him.. Neither he could hate her nor could forget her

Shravan again said-Aur aaj sab kuchh saaf ho gaya Suman.. Shayad Baba ji ne sun li tumhaare dil ki dua.. ab ghar chalo Suman.. sab tumhara intezaar kar rahe hain..

Suman-Sab?

And Shravan signalled in one direction.. Suman looked there and found everyone from Shravan's family with Shravu and Neeraj..

And then Suman remembered something-Nahin Shravan.. ab ye possible nahin hai.. You are Preeti's husband now and I cannot come between you two..

And Shravan smiled hearing this..

Shravan's parents came near them

Nirmala -Suman dekho hum sab tumhen lene aaye hain.. apne ghar ki badi bahu ko..

Suman-Badi bahu?..

Ramnath-Haan preeti chhoti bahu hai na.. wo hamaare chhote bete Pushkar ki wife hai.. Shravan usko abni bahan ki tarah pyaar karta hai...

Suman looked at Shravan He was smiling .. His eyes were filled with love for her..

And they heard Shravu-Mom.. Dad..and she came running toward them and jumped in Shravan's arms.. Shravan kissed her and He looked at Suman..

Shravan-Chalo Suman . ghar chalte hain..He put his arm around Suman and was holding Shravu in other arm..

Suman was looking at him with tearful eyes and Shravan again shook his head signalling her not to cry..He held her close to him and Suman wiped her tears.. Babaji had listened to her prayers everyone bent their head in front of the majaar before leaving for home..

PS-No one knows when their MU and ego clashes will come to an end in the show but here I have made everything clear here😆😆.. Hope you liked it..please leave the comment and hit the like button