Kaho na pyar hai || OS Shraman

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Here is a small light OS to sail through the weekend...
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Kaho na Pyar hai!!!

It was almost a week since Shravan had decided to stay in India leading to his dads death scare!!
It had elated Suman beyond description and on 2 accounts...first one of course coz Shravan had stayed back and second coz it gave her a chance to move explore his feelings and find out if there was something more from his side too...coz she had realised her love for Shravan. But the guy seem to be stuck on the friendship raga and cudnt see how much head over heals Sumo was in love with him..
plus with his new move on relevation things seem a lil more unclear to her...
She was in her thoughts while on her way out of the house when she hit against something or rather someone...
Arey dikhta nahi hai kya?... ek Qutub minar se koi kaise bhid sakta hai? ...it was Shravan smiling..he was teasing her.. she murmered under her breath tumhe mera pyar nahi dikhta tum mujhe nahi dikhte...hisaab barabar...he dint hear much as she said in a very low voice...ab kaunse hisaab ki baat kar rahi ho ? he asked...she said...nahi woh main...collecting herself...sabzi ka hisaab kar rahi thi...Shravan said teasingly arey oh tabhi...itna kho gayi...Maths mein tho tumhara dabba humesha se hi gol tha...ab pata nahi hisaab kitab kaise karti ho...school mein tho maths ka homework main hi karta tha...lao mujhe batao hisab main Kar deta hoon..he said...
Suman was now a lil annoyed...she said..school time mein tum kuch aur bhi karte the mujse...woh bhi bhi karlo...she was hinting at he loving her then...he looked at her puzzled and asked ...kya. ..kya kaha?. she said kuch nahi ...main kar loongi...tum jao!

She said to helself...iss hisab mein itna dimag..aur waise itna phattooo...frustration of his ignorance written all over her face...
She pushed him aside and left..

While at PCT Sumo was in her thoughts again cooking khichdi when a smell of burning something hit her nose.Preeta came running kya kar rahi hai sumo...jal gayi khichdi...Suman murmured yaha dil jal Raha hai tujhe khichdi ki padi hai...

Preeta sensing what's going on as they had been discussing Shravan long enuf now asked her to put him thru a test...to see if he loves her..
Sumo agreed in her head ...and started whacking her brains for ideas...
In the evening she reached Shravan s room dressed in a pretty white silken and Salwar Kameez with a pretty lacy duppatta ..she knew it was his fav color...with pearl earrings and nice white choodis with some delicate makeup...she wanted to see the way he looked at her which cud drop a hint of his feelings...
Shravan was reading something when she entered and he saw her...he dint say anything for a good 20 sec...yayayy Suman thought so his heart is doing summersoults so he is not able to utter a word...she smiled shying and moved a lil ahead...he said..."arey Aatma banke kyon ghoom rahi ho...mujhe dara hi diya...main tho kuch bol hi nahi paa raha tha."..Sumo was irked beyond comprehension AATMA??
she turned and was ready to leave stomping her feet when he held her hand and said...
Bahut sundar lag rahi ho
Yeh pearl eaarings bahut suit kar rahe hai...
And these bangles adding to ur beauty and elegance and ur bindi...asli ka chand...aur tum chandani..Sumans heart skipped how many beats she din't know and she looked up in his eyes she cud see him admiring her but as soon as she looked into his eyes he broke the glance and said...aur...she said aur with expectations filling her voice...aur main jhooth bahut convincingly bol leta hoon...lawyer hoon na...and laughed out loud breaking the moment

OmG...Suman said u r impossible and paced out of his room banging the door..As soon as she left Shravan went to the washroom and washed his face with cold water...what's wrong with u Shravan how cud u look at her like that... she is a friend...but she looked so serene so pretty other voice came from within...he shook his head nahi I cant think about her like that...she is a friend...and thank god I cud save myself with the aatma and lawyer dialogue.. otherwise she wud have known I was genuinely admiring her and speechless looking at her...he accounted his actions to his harmones but cudnt still clear the picture of suman from his head..

Sumo was not ready to give up so easily the brief look she had seen in his eyes had given her heart some hope...she thought of trying one more time..

Next day during lunch time she thought why not surprise him...she cooked his fav dishes and packed in a lunch box and reached his office...
She was a lil late all staff had left for lunch ...he was discussing something with Mr Rakesh his assistant and his lunch box kept next to him...when she entered Mr. Rakesh excused himself and left...Shravan asked her aaj yaha kaise...
She said a lil shying.
And swaying... woh tumhari pasand ki cheeze banayi hai aur specially alag se...he cut her mid sentence and said mere liye layi ho..haan tho itna sharma kyon rahi ho aur usme naya kya hai u always make them...
she realised he was right...but why was he not reading her expression and body language at least that was new!!!
He almost shouted.. Ab dogi??..getting imapatient to eat.
She was annoyed at being taken for granted and on top of being yelled at...she said in her annoyance...naya yeh hai yeh sab aaj maine Rakeshji ke liye banaya hai..tumhare liye nahi..and she paced out his room leaving the door ajar...and went to Mr. Rakesh and said. . Maine aapke liye specially ye banaya hai...appne mere cheques badi jaldi clear karwa dete hai..aur aap tho personally dene bhi aa jaate hai...so thank u and she shook hands with him...she cud see Shravan looking at them from.the cabin ..so she held his hand for a brief sec more...and Mr. Rakesh said mere liye
..thank u Sumanji...she gave him the lunch box and started moving out of the office...she wasnt yet out of the office when she cud hear Shravan s voice annoyance clear...Mr Rakesh aap next time se deliver nahi karne jayege cheque PCT...app mujhe denge...Rakesh said sir woh mera ghar ke raaste mein hai isliye nahi tho sab jagah peon hi jata hai...she heard him say...aap ghar badal le aur peon ko tho bilkul bhi na bheje nahi tho aglow baar uss ke liye special khana aa jayega ..surf mujhe de cheque...still angry he said...aur haan shayad dabba badal gaya hai...jo apke haath mein hai woh mera daba hai.handing out his dabba towards him..Mr Rakesh said nahi woh Ms. Suman specially mere liye layi hai...he said yeh wala bhi special hi hai...but that one is mine... Mr. Rakesh was about to protest when heard him say...naukri pyaari hai ya dabba...without taking risk of understanding whether he was joking or serious he handed over the dabba to Shravan...Shravan almost clinging it to his chest walked to his cabin
Suman eyes glistening with tears of joy..as she walked out of the office.she thought to her self...
It may take him time to admit...But Kaho na pyar hai Part 2 was in the making...this time starring Shravan and Suman!!


Have a nice weekend and stay positive..
Ek Duje Ke Vaaste s positive fan!!
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Nimik thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks a ton!!
Was in utmost need of this!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yr dialogues cracked me up yr 😆 atma and lunch box 🤣 and shravan asking Rakesh ji for tiffin
It's fab Nancy loved it ...you have made my day with this OS ...do write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG !!!!!!
That was hilarious Shravan calling SUMO "AATMA "
LOL 🤣
Wonderful 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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heya...
ur dialogues are hilarious... first toh wo maths argument wala... tmhaara dabba maths mein toh pehle se hi gol tha🤣
arey aatma banke idhar udhar kyun ghoom rhi ho🤣 really... ek wo wala tha na... haan.. aur main jhoot bht convincingly bol leta hoon.. lawyer hun na... 🤣 lawyer hone ke faayde... sumo shying... hayeenaya yeh hai ye sab maine rakesh ji ke liye banaya h.. tmhaare liye nahi... badi bhakti bhavna aa rhi h sumo mein rakesh jiii ko lekar... 🤣shravan jealous and wo bhi kisse rakesh... this guy is... naukri pyaari h yaa dabba🤣
it was too funny... loved it... maza aa gaya
with loadss of love
anupriya ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nimik

Thanks a ton!!

Was in utmost need of this!!


Thanks for reading...I was myself feeling a lil low so had to write to pep myself up...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zenab78

Yr dialogues cracked me up yr 😆 atma and lunch box 🤣 and shravan asking Rakesh ji for tiffin
It's fab Nancy loved it ...you have made my day with this OS ...do write more

Thanks I am honoured...as I believe and genuinely believe it's difficult to make ppl laugh ...ur words mean a lot to me...Thanks a lot
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shinegirl100

heya...

ur dialogues are hilarious... first toh wo maths argument wala... tmhaara dabba maths mein toh pehle se hi gol tha🤣
arey aatma banke idhar udhar kyun ghoom rhi ho🤣 really... ek wo wala tha na... haan.. aur main jhoot bht convincingly bol leta hoon.. lawyer hun na... 🤣 lawyer hone ke faayde... sumo shying... hayeenaya yeh hai ye sab maine rakesh ji ke liye banaya h.. tmhaare liye nahi... badi bhakti bhavna aa rhi h sumo mein rakesh jiii ko lekar... 🤣shravan jealous and wo bhi kisse rakesh... this guy is... naukri pyaari h yaa dabba🤣
it was too funny... loved it... maza aa gaya
with loadss of love
anupriya ❤️


Thanks so much...u quoted those dialogues that's so sweet!!
Thanks for such an awesome review...means a lot..
I am so very honoured😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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this was amazing rakesh ji ke ti char chand gaye
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