its all about you Shraman OS ( part 2 updated)

hey this is my first ever OS. im not that good in English.. so there is a lot of grammatical pblms... plz ingor my mistakes...
Part 1
that day when the whole nirmala incidents done
shravan is now home,he is going to his room jst then he hear someones voice
itz none other than his dad
he is talking wid someone.but whom
so he go to his dads room to find out
but he stopped in front of the door when he hear that word "nirmala"
his dad is talking about nirmala wid his chachi...


after hearing their convo he felt that something is there that he didn't knw

wid this confusion he goes to his room nd started to think about it
is there something that i dnt knw! or something that papa dnt wan me to knw
is that means sumo was r8
no... i need to find out.. he thinks

thn he somehow manage to contact wid nirmala...
they meet.. shravan is calmed nd ready to listen
nirmala bring out her point of view in front of him
they cleared their misunderstanding..
nurmala said to shravan that he should apologize to sumo cz she is the one who reunited us

shravan goes to tiwary villa.
no one is at home except nanu
but he is probably sleeping
nd the others are busy in their own works
so he directly rush to sumos room
but couldn't find her
so he decide to wait

while entering a box dropped by him which sumo has bring out to put them in a place so that no one can find them
so he start to collects all the stuff of the box
suddenly he noticed all the things are related to his childhood
his diary ,his notes..

sumo come out from the washroom
she looks shravan wid those stuffs
nd yelled on him
how dare you to touch this things!
im jst... shravan is about to explain but she gives him a angry look nd snatched the papers from him
she collect all the things nd about to leave but shravan rans nd locks the door
what is this ? why did you locked the door .she says
bcz i wanna talk to you. he says
mujhe tumse koyi baat nahi karni
she is to leave but he hold her wrist
but i wana talk nd u have to ans me
shravan- tumne aj tak meri har ek saman ko rakhha hai kyu?
she is silent
have you fallen love wid me he smirks
no she yelled
accha to ye sab bas aise hi.. tum mujhe serf dst manti ho.. tumhe mere liye koyi feelings nahi hai?
no she again yelled

he goes close to her
and asked abhi bhi nahi?
no she said in a soft tone

he goes more close to her
now only a few cm distance btwn thm
even if i come close to you?
no
he goes more closer
she closed her eyes she thought he is gonna kiss her
bur she feel his breath on her solder
he picked on her chin
their eys meets..
even if i kiss you he whispers..
sumo get emotional nd a teary eyes. but she controls her emotions nd pushed his away
widout giving any ans she leave that room


shravan is smiling nd watching her going
as he knw that his sumo really feel for him
when he gets closer to her he felt the fast heartbeat nd havy breath of her
she is denying it as she is angry wid him.
He really means for her and those stuffs nd memories


Part 2 - page 2

This is really good!

This is so lovely. Do write more. :)

Thnx for the compliment 😳

Welcome to the forum 🤗
Finally someone wrote about the treasure of memories...that box 😳
Nice chapter..r u going to continue it??
Plzzz continue
Keep writing 😊

Originally posted by: Sadia.Ritu

Saras che 👏

Pleasure is all mine bhai 😃

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Welcome to the forum 🤗
Finally someone wrote about the treasure of memories...that box 😳
Nice chapter..r u going to continue it??
Plzzz continue
Keep writing 😊

Yeap
I will try my bst 😃

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

awesome
totally loved it

Thnq 🤗

after the fst part i was expecting tomatoes nd eggs.. But you guys jst crack me up.. thnx for all your compliments

Part - 2
shravan is now at home
while entering the main door he noticed his dad is sitting on the hall room probably waiting for him
shravan tum aa gaye! kaha the ab tak ?
steeping towards him he said im sry beta.. i knw ki mai us waqt kuch jeyada hi bol gaya.tumhara koyi galti nehi thi..ye sab kuch uus suman ke wajase...
sharavan interrupt nd said -
you knw what papa! galti meri nahi hai aur nahi meri ma ki ..
ramnath was surprised by hearing this word "ma" shravan never address her as ma befor!!

sravan - yes papa mai sab kuch jan chuka hoon..sab kuch!
ramnath tries to explain but there was no use.
shravan again speck out
mujhe nahi pata tha ki app mujhe is tarah doka denge! maine sab se jeyada varosa app ko kiyatha lekin app ne hi mujhe sab se bada dhoka diya...kash ki mai apse nafrat kar pata !!kyu ki mai ye kabhi bhul nahi payunga ke apne hamesa sath diya hai aur mai ye bhi nahi bhulungi k apne mujse mere ma ko alag kiya hai aur iss liye mai kabhi apko maff nehi karongi.. by saying this he rushed in his room nd shut the door.



itz morning...
shravan is sleeping but there is a sweet in his face
when he opened his eyes he saw pusker standing there
pusker teased him.
kya vaiya neend mai bhi smile! koun ayi thi shapno mai_?

aree kuch nahi chote bas aise hi.shravan replied

puskar again tease him. sayed mai janta hoom ki wo koun hai
kahi wo sumo to nahi?
shravan in shocking face -tuje kaise pata?

now puskar is also shocked - matlab ki mai jo soch raha tha wo sach hai?
SR-kya?
Pu- yehi ki app sumo se...
shravan gives a smile to him
puskar is now in a excited voice mujhe pata tha ki app dono ek dusre se
shravan interrupt -nahi yar chote usko lekar thodi si confusion hai...
pu - kyu kya huya?
shravan explain everything what had happen..
i have a plan puskar said
what shravan asked
look bade papa have left for Bangalore bcz of his meeting
nd the others are going to a sadi.. infact i had came to asked you that are going wid them or not but now it seems i also have to cancel my plan.. two brothers make the plan

in tewarri villa sumo is about to leave for pct but she got a msg from puskar - sumo jaldi ghar aa jao vaiya ko kuch ho gaya hai mai akela handle nahi kar pa raha hoon

after reading the msg she immediately rushed the spot
she didn't find anyone around so she directly enter in shravans room
she saw him lying on the bed
she goes near to him nd called him but he didn't answed
she is now tensed.so she sat beside him nd goes more closer
she put her ear on his chest..she wanted to check his heartbeat..
but he wrapped her around in his arms..
puskar who was watching all this behind the door givs a thums up to shravan nd locked the doorn from outside..

sumo is trying to get ridof him she is too weak against him
sumo- ye tum kya kar rahe ho? choro muje...
but he smirks.. nd says nahi...mai nahi chorne wala... jab tak tum mujhe maaf nahi kar deti tab tak..

sumo is still trying to get rid but failed..thn she plays a small trick
she pinched him on his chest.. he frees her
ahhh! pagal ho kya?.shravan said
pagal mai nahi tum ho.aur ye kya majak hai? she yelled on him
but he was watching her wid so much love

sumo was about to leave bu he dtands up nd stops her by holding her wrist nn says
sumo plz yar..im sorry..im so srry plz maf kardo na! abb kya kaan pakadna padega! he makes a lost puppy face

sumo- kyu? kyu chahiye tumhe mera mafi? kya farak parta hai tumhe
kya farak parta agar mai tumse gussa rahu to?
kya farak farta hai agai tumhe maff na karu to ?
kya farak parta hai agar mai tumse baat na karu to ?

parta hai..haa muje farak parta hai cz itz all about you damn it..he yelled on her..
He calmed him self..
yes sumo..you..
i love you

sumo was surprised, emotional and also happy
she hugged him nd says i love you too
he smiles nd hugged her back
i love you three,four nd infinity



so this is it.. i knw its too long
bt i jst wanted short out everything l hope i have perfectly done this

Originally posted by: Rikta97

Yeap
I will try my bst 😃

Part 2 is here