ShraMan OS:Kuch Toh Hai - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Awesome os👏
well written👏
thanx for d pm mahi😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
You fared beautifully! 😊
The song. So nicely used!😳
Loved Shravan's restlessness at the thought of losing his Sumo. You depicted it so well!👏
Very well-written!
Please write more.😳

- Payal
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
UnRes...Thanks for the Pm Mahii...Ramya will be back in a while...so sry for the delay dear...Yaar Ramya brilliant Os hai 😃 Loved it ...loved the way you showed Sharvan's emotions yaar ...Finally they confessed to each other so happy for them...Keep witting dear ...Its a beautiful Os...waiting for more stories Ramya 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: SleepyPsycho

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">You write so well.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I loved every bit of it.</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">You showed the battle between the brain and heart perfectly.</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Could totally imagine Shravan crying like a baby.</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Bhabhi part was cute😳</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Mind Blowing OS and perfect choice of song.</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Thank You for the PM Mahi!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">-Mitali❤️</font>


Thanks a ton mitali! 😳 You saying you could imagine it really means a lot! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Shree06

That was lovely☺️☺️

hope our Sadu khadus Shravan realize his love for Sumo and need in life soon.
Awesome update
love it😊

Thanks dear! Yeah, hope he realizes it soon. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: ---awe10some---

Lovely os

Superb. Great job 👍🏼

Hoping to read ur other ShraMan works pretty soon. N do pm me wenever u write. Wud love to read them

Mahi dear. Fanx 4 pming me. Wud have missed this otherwise. ❤️

Love

Thanks a lot dear! 😳Other shraman works, well can't say anything now. 😛 But would try to write more. 😃 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Hello Ramya 🤗
Firstly the starting gave me a mini heart attack 😆
I prayed plzzz dont let it be Sumo's car...see I'm as worried as shravan
Shraman magic 😆 *crazy kiya re*
Gal u r immensely talented 👏
Lovely title with fabulous writeup 👏 👏
Mahi meri jaan *hugs* thanks for coaxing her , we got a beautiful story to read
Also thanks for the pm 😳
I absolutely loved this piece...plzzz write more 😳

Take care
Priyam


Hey Priyam! 🤗 Sorry for the heartattack. 😛 😆 Don't worry in the end my leads are always together, well atleast uptill now. 😉 😆
Thank you so so much! 😳 Will try to write more on ShraMan. 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Yayyy!

Naacho
Meri Ramya di ne OS likha hai🥳
The Emotion Queen is back!!😛
Dedicated to me *awww*
That's so sweet of you!
Needless to say, it's so amazing! Totally fab di!
Shravan worried for His Sumo
Openly confess kiya...☺️
Sameer ki jai ho!
That locket thing was❤️
It belonged to her neck😳

Loved it to the core!
Speechless di⭐️
And I can be happier coz you wrote for ShraMan
The song was *drooling*

Hope to read more of such things from you
Taaki fero haare and we get a Ramini OS *grinns*😆

Thanks for writing this! And special thanks for dedicating it to me😳
Your soul sister🤗



😆 Lets Nacho! 😛
Aww ab bas bhi karo. 😳
Dedicate toh aapko hi karna tha, after all you made me write it! ⭐️
Thanks thanks thanks thank you so much! 😳 😳
Hope so par abhi kuch nahi keh sakti! 😛 Don't worry NO ONE can snatch meri mahishee ka firstie position. 😃😃 We have the wifi connection remember? 😉
But pata nahi hone ko kuch bhi ho sakta hai, kyun fero? 😛 😉
Ramini means ramnath-kamini?? 😕 Omg! 😆
Your welcome! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Hhkfw

Wow pehle to I love the title very much❤️

And now os it's also too good 😛kam se kam os m to hme sharman sath dekhte h I just love it👏
Thanku to share this is with me😊

Thank you so much!! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: renjini263

Hey dear.. Lovely OS..
I loved hw Shravan assumed that she did this because of some reason.. and that song Kuch toh hai.. it perfectly suited the situation..
The way u described the accident I thought sach me sumo ko kuch ho gaya hain..
N Shravan started blaming himself..
Loved the flashback too :) ThankGod sumo was safe and finally they confessed their feelings.. Loved it..
Keep writing :)

Thank you so much dear friend! Glad you liked it. 😳

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