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arshiasya

@arshiasya

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

this was sooo cutee!!! i love your writing sooo much i get so happy when i see something new from you!!!!! this is the best story ever!! keep writing please looking forward to more from you, off to read vertigo now. i wish this happens on the show.

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Adeeba

@Aadee04

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Fees taken at the right time , eh ?
Haha
Loving every bit of your writing .

God bless

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astonm

@astonm

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: khadz20
OHMYGOD , you are on a roll ! :D
But , if I fail my physics exam tomorrow , I am suing you.

AAAHHH , when will all this happen in the show ?
and because of your stories , I now want them to be together in real life too.
ALL YOUR FAULT.

I HOPE YOU PASSED YOUR EXAM! Haha, study kids, ShraMan can wait! :D

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

It's Amazing as always !!!!

Really really enjoyed it...a lovely read..!!!

Thanks for pm 😊

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canoodle

@canoodle

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Omg Anjali, this was amazing! I hope this could happen in the show, I loved how you touched on Shravan's life back in England and how Sumo as the one to kiss him. Although, they probably won't show Sumo making the first move on the show, this is so in character. I could totally imagine this, right where they were first watching KNPH together! Once again, you wow me with your writing skills.

-Meera

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astonmwritings

@astonmwritings

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Hello everyone!

This is Anjali, I had to make a PM account for my writings separately because it gets really difficult and time consuming to do it manually, so if you want a PM for any of my EDKV writings please buddy this account!

XOXO,

Anjali

Edited by astonmwritings - 9 years ago

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arshiasya

@arshiasya

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

i had a dream about this story...i want this to happen in the show so bad...especially since Sumo ka clutch phir se kharab hogaya

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Happy Sighs...I absolutely love all your work ! They way you write Shravan and Sumo and them as ShraMan is pretty darn amazing ! I can't help but adore them even more.

Your Fluff is so AWESOME !

Thank you for your daily PMs. I am so inactive lately but i make sure to read on the laptop so I can leave comments.

- Reya <3

Edited by maankigeet4ever - 9 years ago

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KryanVirikaLuv

@KryanVirikaLuv

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Oh my goodness! This is such a beautiful one-shot! <33

The title was the first thing that hooked me and I love how like the "fees", you've also thrown in so many other references - Shravan fixing the clutch of Sumo's car, the kulfi, the "challenge", etc. You've written this keeping the characters' personas perfectly intact, with the dialogues, thoughts, actions, everything! I really enjoyed how you've explored their relationship taking the next phase from friendship, the new awareness they have of each other and the physical attraction.

I loved how determined he was to fix the clutch to prove "there was nothing that Shravan Malhotra could not do" Typical Shravan :') Reminds me of when he tried to prove to Sumo he could cut the onions for the daal. My heart was melting when I read that they both hadn't finished watching the Harry Potter movies together and he hadn't gone to the Warner Bros studios because it was something they were going to do together. AWWW <33 There go my feels!! And eeks that kiss!! *dies* To be honest, it was something I would totally have expected of the two of them. They're passionate individuals by nature, they feel things very deeply and so I'm sure all the sparks between them were ahem...very deeply felt as well...but yaaasss, go Sumo! Love how she's not afraid to take initiative and straddled him because "if he wanted a kiss as his fees she was going to give him a proper one" I love how her initial understanding of "fees" back post-house case was that Shravan might want a kiss and you've brought that back here. Lovely job! Keep writing <3