Jealous me??...nah ( a shraman os) - Page 3

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Priyam!

This was simply so awesome... Loved every part

Poor Jairaj... I pity him😈

And yes, Sumo is a cute devil, His Cute Devil

I loved and loved how you put that part... Fitted so perfectly

The Shayri thing was also superb... Put really well

PS- You didn't mention if Shravan wore clothes. I suppose he did coz they were in the lawn☺️

*Stop my wild imagination*

A Lovely OS

Please write more!

Love and admiration,

Mahi❤️

Thanks a lot mahi ❤️ ...missed ur posts
I forgot completely about the clothes so u can let ur imaginations run wild 😉

Originally posted by: AngellaAbhi

It was really awesome ...loved it to the core...I wish this to happen in the serial...it was really really superb..Pls continue it..Thanks for pm me..:)

Thanks a lot abhi for appreciating this os 😊

This is an absolutely delightful read Priyam.👏

Originally posted by: indranigupta

This is an absolutely delightful read Priyam.👏

And I must say you did great justice to Sumo's character and Shrav was happy, na with this madcap of his😉😆

Brilliant👏

Thanks indrani for ur lovely comments. Glad u liked my small attempt to write something 😊

I Love jealousy tracks
Nice os
Shravan was so jealous
Finally they confessed their love

Originally posted by: Gurveen

I Love jealousy tracks
Nice os
Shravan was so jealous
Finally they confessed their love

Thanks yr 😊

Aww beautiful dear..loved it! Keep up the good work...

Sapphire🤗

Originally posted by: orion23

Sapphire🤗

Thanks for the PM!!

Loved it!

Jairaj ki toh lag gayi, pehle Sumo aur fir uska aashiq😆

Awesome awesome OS!!

Thank u sooo much

This was gold