Shraman OS (Shraman as Parents)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I always wanted to see two things on Shraman i.e. Jealous Shravan and Shravan as parents.
About Jealous Shravan I am writing a SS: I do care
Have a look 😊

I didn't like the outcome of this OS but still posting it.
I am not getting a title for this OS. If you have something in mind please comment below.
No proof reading.
Okay enough of all this now! Here goes the OS

"AHAHHAAA" Suman screamed from the labour room making a tensed Shravan more tensed.
"Bhaiya everything will be fine,Sumo bhabhi is a fighter soo chillax" Pushkar tried controlling his brother though he knew it was of no use

Sumo was currently in the best hospital of Delhi giving birth to the symbol of the intense love making that had taken place between her and Shravan.
Shravan was out of control and no matter how hard Pushkar or Varun or anyone tried he won't stop cursing the hospital staff for making his Sumo cry in pain. The foolishness of this man he even decided to sue the hospital.

Finally after 2 hours doctor came out of the labour room and announced that Suman had given birth to a baby girl and people could now see her but one by one.
Shravan's happiness was at its peak and without wasting another second he literally ran inside the labour room. The sight he witnessed gave him tears of happiness.
A weary Suman had a little life on her chest close to her heart and she had the most beautiful smile making her face glow even after the pain she had gone through.

Suman saw Shravan standing at the door and admiring her and their daughter. "Shravan aaoo naa udhar kyun khade ho? Suman said the smile still playing on her lips

Shravan went to Sumo and gave her a quick kiss on her forehead as if protecting her from the whole world. One look at their daughter he declared that she would be daddy's little princess,kissing on her nose that had definitely
gone on her mother.

Suman gave the baby to Shravan and as soon as he picked her up he felt as if he was not the same Shravan anymore he was different now and it felt like a good change.

Soon Shravan's and Suman's family came inside the room and congratulated the couple. Shravan and Suman decided on naming their baby Kiara and soo Kiara and Suman were discharged from the hospital 2 days later.
The little princess Kiara was,she always slept in between her parents.

6 Years Later

Shravan woke up to cute little cards and gifts all over and beside him and two voices singing "Happy Birthday". He was awestruck to see that his room was decorated and in every corner were something made by Kiara,his little princess.
Kiara jumped on her daddy even before he could get out of the bed and squeled "Happy Birthday Pops" in her cute and soft voice which Shravan absolutely loved hearing.
"Pops I am going to get your card which me and mommy made and it is huge" Kiara said and ran away to her room giggling.

Shravan who was wearing nothing but just sweat pants got down from the bed and hugged Sumo,who was now busy looking at the way Kiara was acting from the back keeping his chin nape of her neck.

"Happy Birthday Mr.Malhotra"Sumo said who was now facing her Qutub Minar
"Thank You Mrs.Malhotra mere bachho kee maa" and with this Shravan sealed his lips with Sumo's lips.
Their kiss turned into a passionate one and they were about to deepen it when suddenly the whole Malhotra family barged into Shravan-Suman's shouting "HAPPY BIRTHDAY SHRAVAN"

The look on Shravan's and Sumo's face was worth watching. Their faces were flushed as the whole family began teasing them infact even their 5 years old daughter who by asking innocent questions to her Chachi cum Mausi Preeti
made Shravan and Suman go a deeper colour of red that they had not even seen before.

Pushkar taking full advantage to the situation said " Bhaiya and Sumo Bhabhi ab to kuch sharam karo, lagta hai 1 mahine baad ane wala juniour Shravan toh abhi see apne chote bahi/behen ke soch raha hai"

Everyone laughed and left the room taking along Kiara with them giving the ever young couple their space to romance.

Do share your views on it. Please feel free to criticise. If there is a way I can improve do let me know and yes if you have a title for this OS please let me know in your comments below.
Thank You🥱

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sapphire3 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its so cute ❤️ ...loved it
And the end was amazing why didnt u like it 😲
Title- meri duniya hai tujhe kahin( i love this song)...just a suggestion 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww
It was nice...
Like it 👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sapphire3

Its so cute ❤️ ...loved it
And the end was amazing why didnt u like it 😲
Title- meri duniya hai tujhe kahin( i love this song)...just a suggestion 😊


I had higher expectations from myself but the words were just not ready to come out.
Thank You though😳

I would definitely consider the title 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww...cute loved it kiara their angel ...sweet family 👏
Edited by Zenab78 - 9 years ago
adyaa thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So cute , loved it she was pregnant as well 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
Aww...such a Cute family scene
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww dude!
Adorable and How!!
Loved it!!
Kiara.. such a lovely name right! 👍🏼
Do write more on these two..
Thanks for the PM🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
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oh my god
how cute and adorable was this
absolutely loved it
superb
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Aww such a cutee os😳
lovedd ttt😊

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