Shraman SS:Every step of the way (part 4 updated) pg3

Sorry astonm(anjali), u wrote the os so beautifully that I couldn't but continue ur is.Hope u don't mind.

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Shravan entered into Malhotra Mansion .Sumo's words echoed in his head ,"Promise me one thing Shravan. "
"What?" He asked.
"That you won't your chance to mend up ur broken family this time and forgive ur parents whole heartedly."
"It's really difficult Sumo."
"Not that much. Try at least once.Otherwise I won't come to ur house for dinner," she said sulking.
"Achcha baba.I will try.Happy now?"
She smiled.Shravan came out of his reverie.
He went straight to his parents room. There he found them sitting together, holding into each other. As they did not notice him,he decided not to disturb them.

Part 3

At night, Sumo brought dinner for all of them.Shravan called his parents himself for having food,"Maa,papa dinner is ready.Pls come fast. I want to have it together.
Ramnath and Nirmala were very happy hearing their son as Shravan was behaving normally. Both of them tried their best to converse with him in pretext of passing any bowl or praising any curry.He gave short replies.
They understood Shravan needed some more time to sort all the mess and fix them up.

While eating ,Ramnath received a call from van old client who urgently needed his help .But he was in Nagpur. So Ramnath had to refuse him.At this, Shravan intervened saying, "Papa I will see this case.I am flying to Nagpur tomorrow morning at 5.Pls do inform ur client. After all we need to be by the side of the people about whom we care in their distress. Isn't it?"
"Are u sure beta? I mean it will take a week or more."
"Not a big deal.I will manage."
"OK then. U can go," said Ramnath after getting assuring glances of Nirmala.


After dinner, Sumo walked into Shravan's room and helped him in packing. Completing the task, Sumo sat by Shravan.
She said,"I know why r u going for the case.It's good actually. U will get the required time to set the things right.
Yet if u need support and feel void, call me anytime and I will be Glad. "
Thanks sumo,was the only thing he could say.
Laughingly Sumo said,"Oye qutub minar ab rulayega kiya?Arre pagal mein bas apni dosti ka farz niva rahi hu.Tumitna senti maat bano."
"I just want u to make best use of this opportunity Shravan. When u come back after a week I want to see my cheerful Shravan back.Not this Sara huya shakal wala!!U understood?
" Yes madam. Jaise apki agya."he smiled.
"Good night and good bye Mr.Malhotra.All the best for ur case.
" You are welcome Ms Tiwari.Good night."
He came till the lawn to bade her.Her white car went out of sight and he sighed.


N.B. Guys this the First time I am writing a story. So pls do comments how u like it and if I should continue.Both praise and
Criticism are welcomed.Love u all and good night. 😊

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Hey its nice...plzzz continue

Tnx a lot 😊
Ur appreciation means huge for me.

Originally posted by: AdyaXoxo

Loved it

Tnx for ur lovely commentcomment 😊


It really means a lot 😳

Originally posted by: pratikshaa100

Sorry astonm(anjali), u wrote the os so beautifully that I couldn't but continue ur is.Hope u don't mind.

<font size="5">Part 2</font>
Shravan entered into Malhotra Mansion .Sumo's words echoed in his head ,"Promise me one thing Shravan. "
"What?" He asked.
"That you won't your chance to mend up ur broken family this time and forgive ur parents whole heartedly."
"It's really difficult Sumo."
"Not that much. Try at least once.Otherwise I won't come to ur house for dinner," she said sulking.
"Achcha baba.I will try.Happy now?"
She smiled.Shravan came out of his reverie.
He went straight to his parents room. There he found them sitting together, holding into each other. As they did not notice him,he decided not to disturb them.

Its my first writing .pls do comment to letme know how it came out. 😊

Originally posted by: Nimik

Superbb!Plz continue soon!

Tnx a lot
What will happen next?
Any guesses?
😃

Awesome sweetheart!
Your first story? That's amazing!
Please continue 😳
Hmm this trip sounds interesting
Maybe a bit distance will bring ShraMan closer? 😉
Let's just wait and watch 😳

wow
thank you for continue this
superb update
loved it

Awesome 👏...plzzz continue dear. Will love to see more of ur works

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Its nice

Thanks deardear 😊