Codification of Moving On

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yesterday's episode was what I had been waiting for after the beautiful and poignant 50th episode.

So, let's begin

Show begins with Sumo praying, pleading for second chance... second chance for herself and Shravan. Viola, bell rings... oops sorry, not the doorbell but a far more significant sound. Sound she had recently heard and had over the last ten years almost but forgotten. The code. Their own code to defy their elders, to play on without disturbance and also to dispel confusion (they would be aware that it is only them and no one else who has called). He was there. Shravan. Same language played ever again to be heard no more...

Heard no more because he is moving on or has moved on? Nope. He has not moved on. He cant move on. Why? Just before this knock Sumo had been praying for second chances. This is the second chance to move on from their lost opportunity of the past to gather the present into something new (probably more delicious than of old... paneer anyone?)

He has come to say goodbye before he leaves for London. Moves on to London. Moves on from Sumo. Nah... what he does is beyond moving on. He brings back the childhood of Sumo, a lost age moved on from the debris of the past to the beauty of their present. Can anything be as beautiful as the swing scene yesterday? He gives a push to the swing as she wished for from her mother who could never ever come back; move on from the veils of the dead. This is by far for me the most romantic scene till date.

And what made it special... was he sitting beside her on the swing... Partners in crime, partners in life... moving on from just being friends to becoming what they are destined to be.

He also asks her what she wanted to say the last night. She who wanted to say that do not move on... said shouldn't you grab the second chances. He lightly said "am happy being single". But, he did not realize that at the present moment or in the distant past he was never single... he was sitting beside her on the same swing. Sumo you are not single, he will be there. Even when he sits in the car he pulls back the window to gaze at her... one last time

Last time... but, end is always the beginning of new

Sumo receives the phone call about the crash and rushes to stop him, from moving on. Because he needs to move on... to the knowledge that he has everything in this world to the fact that he is alone in this world. All alone...

This scene between Sumo and Shravan shall be etched in my mind forever. Shravan still thinking that Sumo has come up with a kaand to stop him (his subconscious thought always works overtime😆) is shocked. Vomits. Many would find it ridiculous.. I didn't.

He vomited out not only whatever he had eaten the last night which he had spent with Sumo but in doing so, he vomited out all the good feelings he felt about life. His happiness was vomited in that instant.😭 Life was suddenly too dark.

And yet, there was a moving on not only for Shravan in terms of his realization but for Sumo. Sumo the young girl who had failed to support him during that eventful 10 years ago... today was helping him, was being his moral.physical and psychological support. One scene here needs a special acknowledgement. When Sumo wipes Shravan's mouth with her hands after he vomits and gives him water. THIS WAS LOVE...A SPECIAL WALA.

No words as of now to describe the beauty of this scene ... spellbound. Is love this.. so simple and yet magical. In a street where they were alone.. these two moved on from being simply friends.. to not lovers but resplendent of a dream come true.

Also, note she was an orphan and had been so for the past 18 years and yet it is she who was giving him support. LOVE it screamed.

She takes him home. His family comes to support him, but Shravan rejects them.. tries to walk and then falls. Brilliant piece of direction there by CVS. 👏

The man who was supposedly now an astute lawyer giving advises, counsels to others falls... because his support is not there. The support which had carried him, moved on with him for the past ten years. He was alone and he fell. Also, again a brilliant piece of direction by the CVs that they showed Shravan's reaction as ever recurring. Remember the school incident when he had gone to seek Sumo's help because his mother had left him. He had then also fallen... has Shravan moved on? I leave it you. Yesterday when he was seeing his father everywhere.. he was the centre of the circle and yet the circle couldn't be drawn.Tragic isn't it?

Moved on from where to... from whom to... from what to...

Was the precap overboard? Don't know till it pans out. But, whatever I saw yesterday was painful of the highest order. His whole family couldn't control him almost as if he had become half-human.. his position as shown on the screen was of an embryo. He was totally helpless and unfortunately, none of the family could do anything to alleviate that pain. He was required to be sedated. Moved on to a knowledge that mere education, your riches cannot support you to a knowledge which shall move him on to greater understanding, that it is family and love which makes the world go round... a fact from which he consciously wants to move on

Yesterday, episode was fab.. simply superb. 👏Few of us might not have liked it but see it as a codification of moving on... and you will feel the brilliance of it all.

Namik, Nikita take a bow👏

One more scene, Vandy crying her lungs out... she who had known Ramnath for a few years only, also felt the enormity of this loss. Think about Shravan now

This scene will have few major repercussions... what if his father refuses Sumo as his daugther-in-law (might, might not happen)? What will Shravan do? Second... what if in the future Sumo leaves him (I do not mean death) but is not there... how will he respond?

How will he move on?

Please do respond with your views. Shall be waiting😃


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Indrani🤗
Your analysis are just so to the point, so perfectly done!👏
Yesterday was heart wrenching and it was spot on!
Right from the beginning, him coming to see Sumo, the entire swing scene, so many feels! He has moved on with life, yes, but not with someone else.. that special place has always been and will always be for Sumo..
Sumo's hesitance to tell him about the crash, Nikita nailed it there.. You pointed out correctly, being an orphan she knows what it's like, and she is doing everything in her power to get him out of it..
Shravan's reaction to the news, completely justified, cause isn't that what happens when your world falls apart.. Namik, what do I say, he was spectacular.. I felt his pain .. I cried with him, so raw were his emotions... and the family, well all said and done is family.. They all wept with him..
I can relate to the sedation bit, cause when my aunt passed, we had to sedate our mom, cause she was delirious. I wouldn't comment till I see the episode though.. All in all a very emotional episode! Hats of to the whole team..

Thank you for the PM😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Let me being with saying how good you are at this ... 👏👏👏
Then how awesome the episode was yesterday ... well yes there were certain issues I had but then those are very minor and can be forgiven...

He can never say never move on from her ... she is that part of his life that will always be with him even when he is not are her...

she resides in his heart at the deepest roots of his heart... which at this point is so deep down that for him it is just nothing...

about the precap well cannot say anything without watching it but then tv world is OTT at time and if they do that there maybe a better connect with audience..

this get me thinking .. for shravan his dad is the first .. no.1 in his life and whatever he says will be the pathar pe lakeer ... and after this near scare he will not think twice if his father asks for anything..

he will back of from his feelings and his love for her to be with his family .. that's given


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello.
I'm too lazy to comment unless there is something too amazing to resist..
and Dis post is awesome.

I liked how someone too noticed dat scene where Sumo wipes his Mouth with hand...that wz a blink n miss scene .I'm glad u mentioned it.

"Moved on to a knowledge that mere
education, your riches cannot support you
to a knowledge which shall move him on to
greater understanding, that it is family and
love which makes the world go round... a
fact from which he consciously wants to
move on"

Agree totally and in such circumstances the only power that consoles us is our FAITH in God. I'm telling dis from experience.



Cheers to you.

Love
AsHi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful WU, Indrani. 👏
As beautiful as the episode was.

Barring the one or two instances were I felt both Nikita and Namik lacked slightly in intensity...Namik in the farewell scene..and Nik in the Giving Bad News Scene...Otherwise, they were both very brilliant. 👏

Awwwsome moments for me:

1. The swing scene- Like you described...the assurance of that person she longed for..and his willingness to be that person, despite his having 'moved on'...Where has he moved on, here? 😉

2. Suman trying to reason with him again...and the second 'I have moved on'...HEARTBREAKING!

3. Shravan reflecting in the car...what would have been his thoughts?...He was going to miss her...and he had been reminded of something he had convinced himself not to revisit, for the second time...Shravan seemed uncomfortable for a while there...But he is enjoying his bachelorhood...

4. Shravan getting increasingly alarmed as Suman dragged him into her car and refused to divulge any details...it was portrayed very well. 👏

5. Breakdown scene..after she gave him water and wiped off his lips, she hugged him...That was the most beautiful moment for me...it was not romantic...very raw..very basic...she needed him to get back to normal...He is all she has now...To see him broken like that..for a moment, even Suman slipped...she could only hug him and weep with him...because this hurt her AS MUCH AS it hurt him..not one bit less..perhaps MORE, because she knew how to deal with her pain, not his...she would have wanted all that pain for herself, if she could have...a very touching moment when they were ONE.

6. Back home, Suman trailed behind...she had delivered him in to the hands of his family... she was not a part of that circle of love around him...but she followed on...she had to make sure he'd be alright...yet she hoped they could do it better than she could so far...

This episode was all about Shravan becoming an orphan...what the team deserves applause for is the fact that, they could make us feel how Suman herself is an orphan...

...and regardless of the family that seems to look out for them when they are in dire need...it really felt like they were themselves part of a ciircle no one could invade...and it was that bond that would keep them going..Ek Duje Ke Vaaste. ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res
will post soon 😊

Unres

Indrani...we are stuck with moving on, aren't we? How oxymoronic could it get?

Show begins with Sumo praying, pleading for second chance... second chance for herself and Shravan.


Unbidden, lyrics of one of the most romantic songs ever came to my mind

Tum jo keh do to aaj ki rat, chand doobega nahi, raat ko rok lo
Raat ki bat hai aur zindagi baki to nahi

Only the "tum" in this is ambivalent...Is it Sumo who is asking for time to stop still of is it Shravan who while "moving on" is still trying his best to make time stop, even if it is for a little while? Our goodbyes were not proper...Poor darlings...goodbyes can never be proper between soulmates.

He brings back the childhood of Sumo, a lost age moved on from the debris of the past to the beauty of their present. Can anything be as beautiful as the swing scene yesterday? He gives a push to the swing as she wished for from her mother who could never ever come back; move on from the veils of the dead. This is by far for me the most romantic scene till date.

Yes Indrani...the most beautiful romantic scene till date...this man never forgets a single thing about his Sumo. He makes it all look very normal as if "moving on" must include rites of passage to the old. His desire to yank back to the past is so strange for a man wanting to move on. He wills Sumo to tell him what she left unsaid yesterday but also cautions her "it had better not be Sumo like". Interesting choice of words, I thought...Is Shravan still wary of the motor-mouth Sumo of the yore? Sumo choose to cloak her words in someone's else story and Shravan laughs (nervous almost) having decided "moving on" is now the best horse for the course.

Tere bina zindagi se koyi shikwa to nahi,
Tere bina zindagi bhi lekin zindagi to nahi,

Heard no more because he is moving on or has moved on? Nope. He has not moved on. He cant move on. Why?

Being rooted when we are moving on is the most difficult aspect of moving on. Where action wants to lag behind speech but speech eggs action on. Walk the talk but it is so difficult . So we see the literal dragging of Shravan's feet after he has said his goodbyes...now the sprain makes sense doesn't it? It was for a purpose...the purpose of dragging one's feet, while moving on

Kash aisa ho tere kadmo se chun ke manzil chale

Aur kahi door kahi

Tum gar sath ho, manzilo ki kami to nahi

And yet, there was a moving on not only for Shravan in terms of his realization but for Sumo. Sumo the young girl who had failed to support him during that eventful 10 years ago... today was helping him, was being his moral.physical and psychological support. One scene here needs a special acknowledgement. When Sumo wipes Shravan's mouth with her hands after he vomits and gives him water. THIS WAS LOVE...A SPECIAL WALA.

No words as of now to describe the beauty of this scene ... spellbound. Is love this.. so simple and yet magical. In a street where they were alone.. these two moved on from being simply friends.. to not lovers but resplendent of a dream come true.

Brilliant piece of writing and direction...and agree completely Indrani...

jee mein aata hai, tere daman mein, sar jhuka ke ham rote rahe, rote rahe
Teri bhi aankho mein, aansuo ki nami to nahi

Shravan is not in the frame of mind to sense his immediate surroundings except that he has been left bereft of the most important and steadfast support in his life, his father. The man who was with him in all his weak and weary moments. To appreciate Shravan's response to the event, it is important to appreciate the father-son bond. Brilliant piece of acting by Namik, got in to the skin of his character. Yes..in fact all actors stayed true to character in the breakdown scene.

I read of the possibilities that you enumerate...interesting!! I don't have a theory simply becos the writing so far has made the journey so wonderful as it enfolds that I don't really think I could do any justice second-guessing the outcome. All I do accept is that the Shravan Sumo Ramnath dynamic may play out in some form in the future...I don't know its shape but I can see ramifications for the relationship becos they form a beautiful triangle...

Indrani...wonderful analysis...for me the standout scene was Sumo holding Shravan and crying...it was so poignant...as much a cathartic experience for sins of omission of the past for Sumo as it was the promise of something more beautiful in future even in that dark hour of grief. SUPPORT/LOVE something that Shravan yearned for from Sumo though the irony is he is not in a position to appreciate it at the moment. That's the tragic comedy of life. You yearn for something and pine for it when you don't get it. You receive something in a moment of dire need and you have no understanding of it!! A matter to ponder for both Sumo and Shravan...


Thank for the pm...lovely writing Indrani...enjoyed reading it and assimilating it...😊


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Posted: 9 years ago
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The best is yet to come.

  1. Usually in soaps the milestone episodes will be good followed by some dull episodes. But in EDKV 51 was better than 50.The best is yet to come.
  2. In the 51st episode I so enjoyed the code knock. The happiness on both their faces when they met again. (Remember the first time they meet after 10 years - she closes the door on his face first) Now she cannot just stop staring at his face. The best is yet to come.
  • The push in the swing and the dialogues was better than the first few minutes.The best is yet to come.
  • The helplessness of Suman and her chase to reach Shravan better than the swing scenes.The best is yet to come.
  • The way he puked and the way she cleaned his face - should I say more ? Better than her above helplessness.The best is yet to come.
  • The reaction of the family was the best I have seen on screen. All of them showed that there is still humanity in the world. Chachi, Vandy, Varun and ofcourse Lalaji and Pushkar. Better than the above scene.The best is yet to come.
  • And the way he turned cold and stumbled twice and the way his memories of his father revolved around him. Very touching. Kudos to the direction , actors and the screenplay.The best is yet to come.
Shravan came across as the best friend ever. He did not want to leave without giving her back her house, without the play date she wanted, without saying bye to her, without pushing her on the swing. He single-handedly and meticulously took back their strained relation from hatred to friendship in this trip.

Moving on for him means just going back. Nothing more nothing less. Alas she cannot understand that. Suman did not have the courage to tell him that she read the letter. Or that she loves him now. She asked for the second chance which was given to her immediately but she could not rise up to the occasion. It is a pity. And he has misunderstood her questions as "no interest still from her". And he tried his best to tell her that he is single and "ready to mingle". And she missed the signs. Ah... such is the way of love.

The haunting title song sounded so good.

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