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Posted: 9 years ago
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A return gift to a forum that accepted me with open arms so soon ❤️

And my contribution to the celebration of completing 50 successful episodes on this Monday.

Written from Suman's POV.

I know its short, but my battery is dying and this is all I can get in before it buzzes off.

Writing on my phone so please disregard any editing errors. Please dont forget to like, comment and criticize my work, I am open to creative discussion on my piece.

-Tannu

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Everything seems to be running in slow motion. Her erratic heartbeat and the hammering notion of the rain; even the slamming beat of her feet on the cold wet pavement seems to be going at an all too sluggish tempo. In her mind, she tears the doors open and forces her cold, drenched body through.

In reality, she gently opens one door and slips her tiny body through it. She does not make a sound.

While quietly gasping for the air that her lungs desperately cannot get enough of, she has the realization.

It's too late.

There they are, standing at the far end of the chapel. There is a glint in his eyes: a concoction of happiness and love that feels foreign to her now.

This can't seriously be happening.

She has to be imagining it. This has to be an illusion. After all, the probability that the universe would ever do this to her is so slim. She has to be dreaming.

This CAN'T be real.

But life is real and very, very cruel to her. She witnesses the act as it unfolds before her very being.

He opens his mouth to say the two words that take hold of her heart and shatter it into a million pieces. Her gut quenches up into many impenetrable knots; some, she recognizes, will be with her for the rest of her days. She hears the words, but they do not seem to register in her frazzled mind.

"I do."

She wakes up shivering even when it is hot as hell. It was simply a nightmare.

That is all it was. Its 2.45 am and she is thanking her stars Shravan is not getting married anytime soon. Or it will slowly kill her inside.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks a tonnn! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3

Thanks a lot 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks a tonnn!
Means a lot to me to be appreciated 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks a tonnn! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was wonders
Suman would have died if it was reality
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank Youuu!! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Manyata5

It was wonders

Suman would have died if it was reality
Loved it


IKR! It was so tragic if it had been real 😭
(I had initially planned to, but then felt like thats a lil too farfetched) 😆

Glad to know you enjoy my work 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: orion23

Awesome...

It was good!


Thank You so much 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks ❤️

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