SOMEONE SPECIAL :SHRAMAN FF(part 3 updated :pg3)

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SOMEONE SPECIAL

somone special is always there ,SOMEWHERE , WHOM WE CAN MEET WHEN THE DESTINY WANTS.

SHRAVAN,AN ANGRY YOUNG MAN,WHO DOESNT BELIEVE IN ANY RELATION ,DOESNT CARE FOR ANYONE EXCEPT HIS DAD.
SHRAVAN'S POINT OF VIEW:
THERE IS NO ONE IN THIS WORLD WHOM I RESPECT,I CARE ,I LOVE EXCEPT MY DAD.THATS WHY I HAD TO MARRY A COMPLETE UNKNOWN GIRL WHOSE NAME IS SUMAN.MY DAD WANTED THIS MARRIAGE FOR HIS BUSINESS PROFIT.I NEVER TOLD HIM NO SO THIS TIME ALSO I AGREED TO HIS WISH.BUT LITTLE DID I KNOW THIS MARRIAGE WOULD MAKE MY LIFE HELL.BECAUSE THAT GIRL IS AN ONE KIND OF PSHYCO.SHE ALWAYS IRRITATES ME WITH HER COMPANY.HER BIG EYES , ROSY LIPS ARE ALWAYS PREPARED FOR ANY KIND OF NONSENSE TALK.THIS RELATION HAS BECOME A BURDEN FOR ME.
AFTER FINISHING OFFICE WORK,I CAME TO HOME.AFTER GREETING MY DAD ,I STRAIGHTLY WENT INTO MY ROOM.WHEN I ARRIVED THERE I SAW A BEAUTIFUL GIRL STANDING INFRONT OF ME WEARING A SAREE ,ALL DECKED UP.IT'S HER.BUT I COUIDNT RECOGNIZE HER FOR A SECOND BECAUSE OF HER CHANGED LOOK.I HAVE ALWAYS SEEN HER IN SHOT DRESSES AND MESS UP HAIR.TODAY SHE IS LOOKING DIFFERENT AND HER HAIRS ARE PERFECTLY COMBED.IN ONE WORD SHE IS LOOKING HEAVENLY BEAUTIFUL.

SHE IS ARRANGING MY ROOM.AFTER SEEING MY ARRIVAL ,SHE DOESNT BOTHER.THIS BEHAVIOUR OF HER MADE ME AMUSE .IS IT HER? I QUESTIONED MYSELF.
OH! SHE IS IGNORING ME.BUT WHY? I DONT KNOW WHY BUT HER IGNORANCE MAKE MY HEARTACHE. I AM MISSING HER NONSENSE TALK!!!!!WHY????


SUMAN'S POV

The cool breeze is kissing her BODY WHICH MAKES HER SHIEVER.ONE MONTH HAS COMPLETED OF HER MARRIAGE.BUT NOTHING REALLY HAPPENED IN THESE DAYS.THE USUAL THING WHICH IS, HER BLABBERING HAPPENED ALL THESE DAYS.THOUGH ANYBODY WHO DOESNT KNOW HER WILL THINK SHE IS A HAPPY GOING AND A BUBBLY GIRL.BUT THE TRUTH IS LITTERALLY OPOSITE.SHE HAD MARRIED TO A GUY WHO DOESNT REALLY BOTHERED ABOUT HER.SHE MADE A LOT OF EFFORTS IN THESE ONE MONTH TO MAKE FRIENDSHIP WITH HIM BUT ALL IN VAIN.

SO SHE HAS LESSEN HER EFFORTS.BECAUSE HE IS NOT INTERESTED EVEN IN COMMUNICATING WITH HER.SHE DOESNT WANT TO LOOK LIKE A PSHYCO ANYMORE INFRONT OF HIM.THATS WHY SHE DECIDED TO BE THE WAY SHE IS."SILENT".

IT HAS BECOME A ROUTINE FOR HER ,STARING AT THE WINDOW AWAITING FOR HER SO CALLED HUSBAND.


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HEY GUYS A NEW ONE INTO THE FORUM.HOPE YOU LIKE THE FF.Yeah i will avoid caps.Thanks for the suggestions and also comments.

INDEX:PART1(PG 1) ,PART2(PG2)

part3:pg 3
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Good❤️

Please avoid CAPs
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its good 😳
Could you compile it all together and continue it soon too?😆
And is it your style to type in caps? (Not meant to offend you, simply curious)
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This looks good... continue soon..
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Very nice start.
Update the story soon.
And keep writing about ShraMan. 👍🏼
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wow
superb start
cannot wait to read more
awesome
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Part 2
suman's pov
He came into the room by opening the door loudly. But i didnt bother.After arranging the room i looked at him .He was still standing there like a statue ,staring at me as if i am a fairy.I laughed at the thought a little.Well i had many works ,than accompaning him in the staring competetion.Yeah i know i was looking different from the others day.Even i didnt want to deck up so much.But his mother compelled me to do so in excuse of a ritual.So i had to oblige her even if i didnt want.I got out of the room to help others for the ritual.


Shravan's pov

Yeah i was staring at her for some minutes.She compelled me to do so by her new look and strange behaviour.I felt bad because of her ignorance towards me.She has always greeted me after my arrival from office,asked me water and about the happenings of my office in these one month.What happened today? Why am i missing her those special gestures which make me feel someone special to her.

Sorry for the short update.If you like then leave your comments to this sweet candy 😳
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Awww really nice yaar.. Update soon n this time a big one
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It was really nice
I love this concept
So continue soon and write longer please?
-Malaika

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