Daily scribblings. (Don't go yet .and many more )pg 2

Begin again ( little inspired from from taylor 😉 )
Sing it like begin again song for enjoying more.if u have in ur phone play it along for enjoying more




Took and deep breath and I climed that stairs,
He didn't seemed to mind to wait ,but I doo...

He smiled at me waiting on the terrace ,
He makes me shy and I don't know why ,
time stopped there too, stopped there tooo.

We bring back our childhood laughing like a little kids...
You think I deserve a chance too but I never did ...

I have been spending a last ten months,
Thinking all I will ever do... is wait , losse and break .
But today on the terrace ... I watched it begin again...


And we stood in the dark by the moon and only a moonlight to see you right.
You talk about about the start as if it never ended .
I stood apologizing for what I always did...
But put ur fingers on lips as if I never did ...
And I won't ever talk about that
For the first time what's past. is. past.

Ohhh... We threw our heads back laughing like a little kids,
You think I deserve you back, when I never did ...
You are the friend the friend I always wanted but will I ever be...

I have been spending the last ten months ,
waiting for you to come , you came and say...
Today on the terrace ...let's just begin again.


People one special request ,I know I sound greedy but this is me
I love reading comments not only for leading but also because writing is my passion and I love it when people analyse
My work

So pls when u comment also write which part u liked and which u didn't.
It will be really helpful .it fine if u don't vote but ur little typing will help me to improve.


😊[B]Hi friends pls read this first.

I will be posting my poems and some scribblings here along with EDVK related poems I will also be updating my other poems too hope u will like it. :-)

Really people that bad ek bhi comment nahin ...

😭

Hey don't worry it's really gud

Originally posted by: ravzs

Hey don't worry it's really gud

U hav put down both PoV s really well

Sry couldn't cmnt before

U hav done justice to ur wrk👏

Ha ha . tnx yar thoda over senti ho gai thi actually just had a bad day. Thx for commenting . I just wanted people's perspective accha ya bura. I now realize my no comment rant was sooo .. 😆 .

Tnx again 4 commenting BTW.

Originally posted by: AngellaAbhi

Its awesome...loved it..

Thank u 😳 ...u like Taylor Swift ?

Just friends.

I will take ur calls in the middle of the night.
Will solve ur problems every time.


Looking at u makes my world bright ,
Lossoing u might be my biggest fright.
Let preeto and pushkar fight.
We are just friends.
yeah right 😆

Smalll I know I just can't write anything more than this u know but u can try yr hand on writing .
Go on

Tu chal mein ayi (pret bhog epi )

Ladoo khaye char ,
Sun sumo yad dila rahu bar bar,
Sev ki sabzi, tere hath ki puriyan
Set kar le 10 bajhe par apni ghadiyan

Pret bhoj PE preeti ka achar,
Pushku bechara pyar ka bemar,
Bhae ,Vandy bhabhi bhi kare tarefein beshumar
Chat PE Ana time PE yar.

Sumo

Chuso aam, Zara sabar toh karo.
Teri fees aj hi hoon layi ,
par sabki neyat yaha khenle PE Ayi.
Chachi Teri phir ghurai ,tu chal mein Ayi...

I know u must have read this khali shift kiya hain so everybody can find it in one thread.

[B]How long...?

Beautiful doll dressed in pink ,
when swing used to be my most precious thing.[BR
Princes, ponies some magic filled fairytales ,
existed once down my memory lane.


Like everything else I had to losse,
it flowed away with a flood and left some bruise.


I learned to loose and earned for the others,
stones in the road taught me to suffer.

I walked with my head held high ,
even looked back every now and then ,for the friend who would never stop by..


But u proved me wrong ,like olden days ,
when I had nothing to remorse for and u had no one to blame.


Holding me in time , when I didn't even feared to break.
Tell me my friend how long is it going to be held.




25 epi when shravan saved suman's Home going against his brother.

GET UP !

Somewhere deep inside , a voice said
'Get up !'

Show the vision and see their sight
There's a whole new mark to,
'Set up !'
Sheep are moving in herd , be their shepherd
Whole new path is waiting for you to
'Led up !'

They all are going for the moon,
You show them those stars
be the first one to
'DARE UP !'

No one will come to show you right ,
but there is always someone to laugh at your fight,
be your own support for once ,
'MAN UP ! '

Spread the sunniest smiles , be the
brightest sunshine
It's already morning outside
" Get up ! "

WRITTEN BY SWEETMISHTHI,

HEYA people if you think this poem succeeded to toch your heart or made difference in your life even a bit spread it ( by my name ofcourse) and comment which line you liked the most that is if you liked any.