ShraMan OS |Ek Duje Ke Vaaste| - Page 6

Originally posted by: renjini263

Hey sanika.. Beautiful OS yaar :)

Loved it.. HE was waiting fr her to stop him and she was thinking hw to stop him did she have any right..??

I just loved that line regarding communication... :) it was apt

and finally she called him and told to stay back..

wow,. he was waiting to hear dose words frm her and he said okay..

I just loved it :)

keep writing :)

Originally posted by: hasinig89

Sanno Sanno Sanno 🤗 🤗

Superb Fantastic Awesome. ..

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH

OH MY GOD..U WROTE VERY BEAUTIFULLY GAL...

GOOD HEAVENS !!!!

THAT LAST TWO LINES

SUMO : MATH JAO

SHRAVAN : THEEK HAI ...

WERE SO FREAKING AWESOME. ...

AWWW WHOLE MALHOTRA FAMILY WAS UNABLE TO STOP HIM, BUT HER ONE WORD STOPPED HIM...

THIS IS JUST ❤️

Keep Writing...

Love

Suhasini

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

This was really beautiful, Sanika. Said so much with so little..and I loved how you focused on how important communication is..We humans could have much easier lives if we all chose to communicate...to say the things we are afraid to say..to say the things we hold back..so much is left unsaid nowadays. And Sumo's simple: "Mat jaao" to his even simpler "Theek Hai"..Two words and these two just changed their own destiny. That sorta kinda, absolutely beautiful !

- Reya <3

p.s I rather read your beautiful words than my exam notes..lol.

Originally posted by: indranigupta

Sanika.. beautiful 👏

Mat jao and theek hai... how beautiffully they resonated even when you had completed the piece. I am amazed at the clarity of your thoughts and your simplicity as well.

Lovely👏

Originally posted by: chicksoup

Mat Jao...Such a sweet, touching OS. 👏

Hope we get something like this in the show too, considering this is how Shraman communicates. 😉

Originally posted by: -ZaYalicious-

SO BEAUTIFUL! <3 Definitely my favourite out of all your one-shots on ShraMan (this statement will be be used on more of your future works, don't worry 😆)

Kaamchor😆
Thanks par 🤗

"Theek hai," he smiled slightly

Needless to say, this was uber cute! I could imagine his lips curving into that teeny tiny smile on hearing Suman's words from the other side of the phone. Like that feeling *Yes, she finally said it!*

WHERE DO I GET MYSELF A SHRAVAN?
Get in line woman, we all have pre-ordered one in ur heads😆

I have forgotten how to comment honestly. So bear with these short versions till I get used to them again 🤗

P.S. I'm here just because you threatened me to comment no matter what xD Warna main tou scraps pe tareef kar deti 😆

Originally posted by: -Shilpaa-

OMG Sani... I was thinking how did I miss your OS.

And after reading it, I'm happy I read it at the perfect time.

After the promo, this's exactly I want to happen..

Hope CVs get inspired from you😉😆

Beautifully written, btw👏

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

Beautiful OS dear..
So cute ...

Originally posted by: Hey_Bhaggu

Flawlessly Amazing❤️

This is so beautiful👏👏👏

Love your story. ShraMan are so awesomely described in it😳

Please keep gracing us on this forum👍🏼

-Tannu