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Zenab

@Duskyylilac

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Wow...I loved it superbs last part is wonderful she said mat jaoo and he said thik h awww it was cute

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Kritika Pawle

@FangirlForever

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Sani !! ITS SO BEAUTIFUL

Tu aur kyun nahi likhti ?? 😳

Zyaada likha kar !!

The last part was LOVE

I COULD IMAGINE HIM SAYING THEEK HAI AND SMILING !!! ☺️

Thanks *jhappies*

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Winterbear

@Winterbear

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

its beautiful❤️👍🏼

loved it

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AyeDil

@ChalJhoothi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Awesome

beautifully written👏

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Silverrmoon

@Silverrmoon

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

WOW Sanika you are an amazing writer 👏 plz do write more...dil ko lagi hai padh kar 😃

Edited by pearl100 - 9 years ago

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gauriangel

@gauriangel

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

This was so beautiful..

Apne shraman hai hi aise..their silence speaks a lot..loved how mat jao n thik hai..were the words that made this possible..no questions asked no explanations given...

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dancedanceRR

@dancedanceRR

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Ah that was beautiful! Short but so sweet!

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Fero

@Euphoria_V

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

This is awwwesome
How beautifully penned down
Just perfect...❤️❤️❤️

AND THAT *Theek Hai*☺️

Sanu🤗

Edited by --fero-- - 9 years ago

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renjini263

@renjini263

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Hey sanika.. Beautiful OS yaar :)

Loved it.. HE was waiting fr her to stop him and she was thinking hw to stop him did she have any right..??

I just loved that line regarding communication... :) it was apt

and finally she called him and told to stay back..

wow,. he was waiting to hear dose words frm her and he said okay..

I just loved it :)

keep writing :)

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KostinsQueen

@KostinsQueen

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Sanno Sanno Sanno 🤗 🤗

Superb Fantastic Awesome. ..

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH

OH MY GOD..U WROTE VERY BEAUTIFULLY GAL...

GOOD HEAVENS !!!!

THAT LAST TWO LINES

SUMO : MATH JAO

SHRAVAN : THEEK HAI ...

WERE SO FREAKING AWESOME. ...

AWWW WHOLE MALHOTRA FAMILY WAS UNABLE TO STOP HIM, BUT HER ONE WORD STOPPED HIM...

THIS IS JUST ❤️

Keep Writing...

Love

Suhasini

Edited by hasinig89 - 9 years ago

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