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DocD

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Posted: 9 years ago

A bleeding heart and onlookers galore

But one person stood out...distinct from the crowd

He was the one least expected to...

He had nothing to gain

Everything to lose

His Name...His Repute...

The Family Legacy, included!

But he stood there

Silent

Stoic

Her pain was His!

As he saw her...

Dismantle

Disintegrate

Desolate

As she pushed him aside with all her might...

But this time something was different

Something had CHANGED!

He was no longer the 'baharwala'

She could NOT keep him at bay

As she lay devastated in his arms

With her hopes crumbled

Her spirit crushed

But her faith in him had risen

The trust restored

As he wished all her pain away

His truthfulness of intent was hard to miss

Even in her abyss

Sumo responded in the affirmative

As Shravan asked "Kya tumhe mujh par bharosa hai/?"

With that new found authority...

He proclaimed

"Main tumhe kabhi harne nahin doonga, Sumo!"

Even in her darkest hour

As Sumo's world crumbled...

There has been a new beginning

He's ONLY her childhood friend Shravan

The beauty being

NEITHER has realized it!

As Sumo picks up the pieces

Ravaged and Scarred from within

As she is unable to fathom

Which is the greater loss really...

A broken grit

A failed daughter

It is that decade old memory

Of her friend, the 'Bhagoda'

Who is still staying put

With outreached hands

As Shravan teaches Sumo

The bigger picture...

"And the journey itself is home"

THANK YOU CVs

THANK YOU Shravan

THANK YOU Sumo

THANK YOU Namik

THANK YOU Nikita

EDKV is SPECIAL!

❤️

Cheers!

DocD

PS: Nikita was simply OUTSTANDING today...IMO, her best performance in EDKV till date; Namik provided her with the just the right measure of the ROCK-SOLID support she needed for those finer nuances to make the necessary impact in the last 5 minutes today!

Keep up the great work, you both

You guys are truly immortalizing ShraMan

It is a pleasure knowing you!

👏👏👏

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Nancy (Zin)

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Posted: 9 years ago

Beautifully written, Dyotona. I am blown away by how awesome it is. 😃

I found the following words of yours (highlighted in blue) magical:

He was no longer the 'baharwala'

She could NOT keep him at bay

As she lay devastated in his arms

With her hopes crumbled

Her spirit crushed

But her faith in him had risen

The trust restored

As he wished all her pain away

That truthfulness of intent was hard to miss

Even in her abyss

Sumo responded in the affirmative

As Shravan asked "Kya tum mujh par vishwas karti ho?"

With that new found authority...

and

It is that decade old memory

Of her friend, the 'Bhagoda'

Who is still staying put

With outreached hands

As Shravan teaches Sumo

The bigger picture...

"And the journey itself is home"

Once again, marvelous piece of writing, 👏

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DocD

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Chaits_04
Good one DocD 👏

Thank you, @Chaits for taking time out to read and comment

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DocD

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23
Amazing post Doc👏

Thanks a ton @Orion

It is always a pleasure to interact with you...

Take care, Dear!😊

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DocD

@DocD

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: PlainJane
Beautifully written, Dyotona. I am blown away by how awesome it is. 😃

I found the following words of yours (highlighted in blue) magical:

He was no longer the 'baharwala'
She could NOT keep him at bay
As she lay devastated in his arms
With her hopes crumbled
Her spirit crushed

But her faith in him had risen
The trust restored
As he wished all her pain away
That truthfulness of intent was hard to miss
Even in her abyss
Sumo responded in the affirmative
As Shravan asked "Kya tum mujh par vishwas karti ho?"
With that new found authority...

and

It is that decade old memory
Of her friend, the 'Bhagoda'
Who is still staying put
With outreached hands

As Shravan teaches Sumo
The bigger picture...

"And the journey itself is home"

Once again, marvelous piece of writing, 👏

And my absolutely WONDERFUL, simply AMAZING friend Zin is here!!😃

I hope you realize what a wide toothy grin you bring to my face, everytime "PlainJane" crops up

And mind it; it's got nothing to do with your effusive words of praise!😆

*A TIGHT BEAR HUG TO YOU*😃

Now coming to the post

Glad you liked it...I also experienced an inexplicable sense of bliss while putting it together

Was almost like ShraMan are teaching me a thing or two, on human relationships

All over again

It's almost surreal !

Have been actually meaning to write a lot on the progression in ShraMan's dynamic...especially after the absolutely ethereal Wednesday episode

Will try to put something together if I can manage to catch a repeat over the weekend

Anyway, you take care, my Dearie

Truckloads of Love,

Dyotona

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niara12

@niara12

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Posted: 9 years ago

What a surreal beauty to build the relationship journey from being Bhagoda to 'Tum Chaliye Jao Shravan. A new exploration of dynamism in every things and detailing. These two are relationship goals.

Never ever in my life, I have ever seen such a symbolic classic giving an edge to deeper meaning and hidden agenda!!!!

Thanks for your lovely brilliant post

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Riya

@Ri21

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Posted: 9 years ago

said it all

ll just say

"main tumhe harne nahi dunga .. samjhi??"

yes he wont let her loose at the same time he wont even break her trust for him

i dont know what to say about nikita

she has a great future ahead, she has the capacity to bring tears in my eyes

actually u know nikita and namik together is the best thing for the show

both of them together in any scene they make it feel real not acting
one is heart another is its beat of the show

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DocD

@DocD

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --fero--
Amazing post

Thanku, meri Ferero Rocher wali Cutie Pie!

🤗

Loads of Love,

DocD

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DocD

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: niara12
What a surreal beauty to build the relationship journey from being Bhagoda to 'Tum Chaliye Jao Shravan.
Absolutely! And the beauty is, as Sumo pushes Shravan, he is shaken, but bounces back...like literally! What a beautiful metaphor to express how far these two have come...
A new exploration of dynamism in every things and detailing. These two are relationship goals.
Totally agree! Its beautiful! And for someone like me, who's like completely hooked on to understanding human relationships and emotions better, these two are really like some Ivy League B schools!😆
Never ever in my life, I have ever seen such a symbolic classic giving an edge to deeper meaning and hidden agenda!!!!

Thanks for your lovely brilliant post

Hey! Thanks, Niara, for your kind words...

Loved reading your thoughts too...

Added my 2 cents above, in blue

Cheers!

DocD

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DocD

@DocD

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Ri21
said it all
ll just say

"main tumhe harne nahi dunga .. samjhi??"
yes he wont let her loose at the same time he wont even break her trust for him
How beautifully you have expressed it! 👏

i dont know what to say about nikita
she has a great future ahead, she has the capacity to bring tears in my eyes
actually u know nikita and namik together is the best thing for the show
both of them together in any scene they make it feel real not acting
one is heart another is its beat of the show
Totally, spot on, you are about both Nikita and Namik!👍🏼
How beautifully they COMPLEMENT each other...in fact, COMPLETE each other as Shravan as Sumo!
A simple case in point...as both of them stood, shell-shocked and pained, listening to Mami's outburst...they were not even looking at each other, YET, were exactly on the same wavelength!
Now, THAT'S called CHEMISTRY!⭐️